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Posted: 10 years ago
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You should deffo continue!! LOVE IT! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ITs Awsome 👏 ,,,,, cont.soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really good! You write well. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys :D
Next update coming super soon.. just bogged down by some work :\
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Neil loved her, there was no doubt.. But there was also no doubt she loved him more. Or that's what he thought.. Because while loving her was second nature to him now, he was always surprised by things she did for him. If he weren't in love, he'd treat those things as excess, but he loved the attention and dedication now.


It was an hour back when she'd called and he was preparing for his next surgery. The squirmy nurse was now holding his phone to his ear and he felt a little colour spreading through his own cheeks
They were the talk of the hospital for many months now. No one could believe they were married.


A whirlwind affair, very publicly in love and married in two months, all the nurses had looked at Ragini with an envious look when she rejoined work.. Now on the phone with her, he sounded apologetic.. He was assigned this surgery out of schedule.. She sensed it and rescued him before he could say sorry.
She told him not to worry and that she'd wait for him.. He quickly told her not to, because the surgery would take a couple of hours.

She sighed over the phone and Neil could feel something physically contract in his chest when she said she had cooked for him. Not knowing what to say, he just sighed from the other end as well. She picked up the tone in her voice and told him she loved him and to focus solely on the surgery.

The nurse holding up the phone for him was obviously getting impatient and wanted him to hang up soon. However, Neil was not one of those who said his 'I love you' in public. He said a terse bye on the phone, saying he had to rush and moved his ear away before he could hear Ragini's response. On the other hand, Ragini was in the process of saying something when the phone disconnected. She was a tad disappointed.. she knew he was busy, but why could he not communicate back? She would have loved for him to say something, anything before keeping the phone.. maybe she was overthinking.. she willed herself to think about something else.. but she loved him too much to question him at the moment. He was her dream come true.

Neil sighed inwardly again as he looked at the X-rays on the board. It was going to be a draining operation.. lots of finesse and technique required. Though he had an assisting surgeon, it was still going to be very tough. His mind drifted to Ragini and her beautiful eyes, and he thought about how they must have looked when he told her not to wait up for him. She loved doing those things for him, maybe it was wrong of him to say that to her.. to tell her not to wait and go to sleep. And to top it, she had cooked for him. It was a special first that he should not have undermined. Ragini was not your girl next door. She had spirit, a strong will and was fiercely independent.. some of the many things that made him fall in love with her. She was so dedicated to her career that domestic skills were on the bottom of her list.

She did not know how to cook and he had absolutely no problem with that.. but for some strange reason, she had started domesticating herself, thinking it would make him happier. He'd never been married before so he had no way to tell if this happened with every husband in the world but he wished she would not change herself so much for him, for his sake and hers. He had teased her about cooking once, since he was a decent cook. That day, he'd made some poached eggs for her and they had breakfast in bed.. pampering her was something he loved, and he mocked her with a breakfast challenge for the next day. The both of them had laughed it over.. but at 7 am the next day, there she was.. with a half burnt fried egg and decent coffee.. he gulped it down before planting a big kiss on her cheek.. full marks for trying.. but Ragini knew she had messed up and was somehow guilted into trying better for him.. he didn't want that.. and now he didn't know how to stop it..

Torn between the surgery and wanting to go home to his wife of a few months, Neil wondered how much effort had gone into tonight's 'cooking' and gave one final big sigh before mentally clearing his head for the difficult surgery ahead..



The surgery took longer than expected. He scrubbed out of the OT as quickly as he could, a tired happiness on his face as he was going back to her, their happy place. His happiness quickly turned into anxiety when he saw the time- it was 1 am. He didn't even throw another glance at his phone, anticipating messages and calls from Ragini.

The drive home took a lot more than physical effort. Turning the key in the door, he tried to be as silent as he could, not wanting to wake her up, wherever she was in the house. He opened the door to find her asleep on the couch. She had waited for him, it was apparent.. her spectacles were still on the bridge of her nose. He sighed as he put his bag down, sitting down besides her. He glanced at the table, the food was laid out on it. He just threw his head back on the sofa, not knowing what to do. He did the thing he knew best.. gently gathering Ragini in her arms while taking her spectacles off with a hand. She was beautiful.. the way her hair fell on her face, bouncing on her cheeks.. she was also very sleepy, and purred softly, inhaling his scent, making herself comfortable and snuggling into him. She was asleep in seconds again.

He loved this feeling. He loved holding her in his arms. He could sit like that forever, just holding her close.. breathing on her neck as their chests heaved up and down in unison.. he pressed her to him ever so slightly. Before he knew it, he was asleep with her.

The first thing to wake him up was the gentle sensation of her lips on his jaw.. her hands in his hair.. he opened his eyes slowly, they were still on the couch, she was still in his arms. Playing with his hair lazily, she teased him as he tried to capture her lips in his for a morning kiss and moved her face away. The glint in his eyes told her she should be careful but before he could do anything, his stomach grumbled.

Damn this acidity. He groaned.. she looked at him and then at the food on the table. Gently, she admonished him for not even putting the food in the fridge. He looked genuinely sorry but Ragini laughed it off.

I've realized, she said.. cooking is just too much effort..

He looked at her, confused.. and then realized she was not kidding.. he held her close and laughed heartily, glad that some things never changed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely👏
do write more
u write pretty well...u can actually imagine these things happening
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot :) glad you liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok mah bad...that was indeed very beautiful.
I can so imagine NR in this scene...i loved it!! CONTINUE!!!!!! 😳

The fact that he didn't eat ...so cute!!! And him holding her in his arms and falling asleep even better. Thank u so much Sukhi!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sammie_Ronit

Ok mah bad...that was indeed very beautiful.

I can so imagine NR in this scene...i loved it!! CONTINUE!!!!!! 😳

The fact that he didn't eat ...so cute!!! And him holding her in his arms and falling asleep even better. Thank u so much Sukhi!!


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Thank you Sammie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely Lovely lovely
Beautifully written :)
Sukhi u have that magical spark in ur writting :)
Continue soon :)

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