Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 16

Great work done Radhika. It's pleasure to read this.

Hope he believes her awesome

Originally posted by: ShiriFictionPen

An amazing continuation Radhika!

Khushi managed to run away from Shyaam once again and Arnav turned out to be her savior this time 😍

I am glad Arnav is there to take care of her as a return for being the Inspiration for his painting. He sympathies her right now but I am waiting to see him having a soft corner for her, and standing up for her soon after Khushi trusted him enough to stay back with him in Nainital alone.

Needless to say, a beautiful update.

Love,

Shiri ❤

Thanks Shriri

Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family won't trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Poor Khushi, she is so terrified of Shyam. One wonders what she has faced that has left her so broken and afraid. But her courage is never-ending, she was willing to run again even if she had no where to go.

Glad that Arnav helped her out. Even if his practical mind tells him to take matters slow, he is softening up towards her 😳. I'm sure that when the time comes, he will protect her from Shyam and anyone else if required.

Khushi trusts Arnav enough to go away with him to Nainital. Waiting to see what happens there now 😃.

Very well written Radhika! Even though you were sceptical of your writing skills, I think you should try writing more often. I'll surely like to read more from you 😳.

Love,

Stuti

Thanks Stuti.

Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along with Arnav. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family won't trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: Savera84

Well Done Radhika!

You always write nice comments and in your "Khushi analysis" thread you established yourself as a writer who can write longer and interesting write ups. This chapter proved that you can jump straight in to writing your own FFs.

This chapter is well written, though fast paced, it has all the elements of a single chapter. Nice continuation, progression, some answers and some mystery.

Let us see how Anjali and Shyam took the news of missing Arnav or rather what Payal told them about the new tasty food and about her brother in laws whereabouts.

Khushi's miseries are continuing.

Is she safe now? What will Shyam do to find Khushi? Arnav has a reason to avoid strangers in the house. How will he deal with Khushi now?

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Wish you all the best and hope to read some stories from you in the near future.

Cheers....

Thank you Raji,

You have always been encouraging. The chapter had to be fast paced we couldn't have let the monster get hold of her again or get a whiff of her being there

Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along with Arnav. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family won't trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

Thank God Khushi is safe for now.

Arnav and Payal will save her.

And they both in Nainital, what best way for them to know each other and fall in love

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Originally posted by: Uzii

Arnav found khushi and now she would be safe in his house till he gets to know abt her past

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Originally posted by: abivicky86

Another fascinating and very well written chapter, how well the continuity of the story is maintained.

Now we can heave a sigh of relief kushi is safe and sound miles away from the monster. Here her saviour turned out to be Arnav who took her away in his chopper to his private home in Nainital.’

Now Arnav I am sure will make her spill the beans about her life and find out why is she so scared and from whom she is running.

Waiting for next chapter.

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Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along with Arnav. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Arnav acted fast and got her to a safe spot. Hope Khushi will tell him everything. She needs to realize that Anjali needs protection too.

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Anjali seems pretty safe right now. It's Khushi who needs protection. Khushi gave a hint to Payal by informing her about the danger even when she didn't have time and place to run. So she'd surely disclose in time. However Khushi needs protection at all costs.

Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along with Arnav. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: Kashaarv07

Great plot.. Loving the way its going

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