(Upd- 21/2) FF// Prescribed Insanity, Chapter 14, Pg. 89 - Page 67

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hehehehehhe this update was sooooooooo cute *says with a big smile!!’* I MEAN.. LOL!!!! Okay.. Nihaal and Anjali are adorable. ADORABLE ADORABLE I want more of them!!!!! ☺️ (Look @ me being shameless and asking for more!!) - but cute. Also, i picture NK as Nihaal and for some reason, Daljeet and Karan are coming to mind as a super cute power couple so wooo!!! LOL!!!

Khushi is so adorable i cannot deal. Matlab she is just so fun and lively and just cuuutey ptooti *want to squeeze her cheeks and make her all smiley* - okay sounds slightly weird but ARGH i can just gush over how cute she is !!! The hello kitty water bottle and the “you shut up” 😆 - the shut up bit was my fav LOL!!! And then Khushi talking about her mums genes and Arnav’s arched eye brow!!! LOL LOL LOL!! That made me grin.. and also significantly miss the show :( - nani’s character is so fun here!! Well she was fun in the show too so it’s got me missing her but oooooof these characters are so lovely and cute and argh just so many family feels !!!!!❤️


Thank you for updating!!!! Can’t wait to read more.. and i hope life treats you well and you don’t have to stress yourself too much and that you are healthy and happy and okay!!!!! :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

There are lot of stories and writers in this forum but very few of them write with such maturity and clarity. You are one of those who are inspirations to upcoming writers and learnings for writers who want to improve their writing skills. Its not enough to have a nice story but to write with such amazing clarity and consistency is awesome. A permanent fan of your writings

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ark17

Hi,

What an awesome update Sabi!!!! And since you write both genres flawlessly any update will make my day....thank you for just writing such beautiful stories . It is like thank you for being there!!!

Coming to this chapter loved how you blend humor into every situation. Anjali's message was the highlight. She is surely going to drive the already crazy Arnav up the wall . He is already dealing with one very Ill chattering Khushi, and is waiting to give Anjali her due. He is already jealous of NK and now his sister has gone with him....how is he going to tackle the situation, it would be a riot.

Khushi calling him up for the chat was the limit, he was already worried for her health. He is having murderous thoughts. Hope he doesn't turn into the angry dentist Khushi who was previously having thoughts of doing severe damage to his teeth. 😀

Nani's jibe about joining Red Cross instead of being red and cross was so good. Also his raised eyebrow when Khushi mentions none of them got her mother's over the top nature. He is only starting to get doses of that nature, wait till it turns on full blast!!!

Sorry for the long post. Just did not.feel like leaving anything out.

Waiting eagerly for.the next update.

Cheers.




Thank you!! This is such a sweet message ❤️ Oh, and please don't apologize about the length of your comments. I am more than ready and willing to greedily devour all that anyone has to say on the chapter. It's beyond kind of you to touch on every little thing that pleased you about the chapter :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Hehehehehhe this update was sooooooooo cute *says with a big smile!!’* I MEAN.. LOL!!!! Okay.. Nihaal and Anjali are adorable. ADORABLE ADORABLE I want more of them!!!!! ☺️ (Look @ me being shameless and asking for more!!) - but cute. Also, i picture NK as Nihaal and for some reason, Daljeet and Karan are coming to mind as a super cute power couple so wooo!!! LOL!!!

Khushi is so adorable i cannot deal. Matlab she is just so fun and lively and just cuuutey ptooti *want to squeeze her cheeks and make her all smiley* - okay sounds slightly weird but ARGH i can just gush over how cute she is !!! The hello kitty water bottle and the “you shut up” 😆 - the shut up bit was my fav LOL!!! And then Khushi talking about her mums genes and Arnav’s arched eye brow!!! LOL LOL LOL!! That made me grin.. and also significantly miss the show :( - nani’s character is so fun here!! Well she was fun in the show too so it’s got me missing her but oooooof these characters are so lovely and cute and argh just so many family feels !!!!!❤️


Thank you for updating!!!! Can’t wait to read more.. and i hope life treats you well and you don’t have to stress yourself too much and that you are healthy and happy and okay!!!!! :)


😆😆 You are pretty darn adorable yourself!


Thank you for such thoughtful comments, they are incredibly entertaining. And thank you for wishing me well ❤️ Health, happiness and zero stress to you too!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sambag

There are lot of stories and writers in this forum but very few of them write with such maturity and clarity. You are one of those who are inspirations to upcoming writers and learnings for writers who want to improve their writing skills. Its not enough to have a nice story but to write with such amazing clarity and consistency is awesome. A permanent fan of your writings


"Maturity" is something I never thought I would be complimented for on a PI thread 😆 I am truly overwhelmed by your kindness of which I am sure I am entirely undeserving. Still learning a lot myself. Thank you so much, really! ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Just love this story so much .Thanks for the hilarious update. Update. Now I can say not only the Gupta family but the Raizada family are also completely insane headed by Nani . 😁😁

Coming to the chapter Anjali running away with Nihaal was the ultimate for our hero I could only remember Dharmendras famous filmy hindi dialogue which he utters when he faces any villan (kuttey kamine main tera khoon pi jaoonga)😡😡 .Arnav was also in the same state when he saw his only Di eloped with NK .He wanted to murder him because he not only was flirting with kushi but also set his sights on his di. Can imagine Anjali going gaga over him while sitting beside him in his car. Anjali has to face the mighty ASR when she is back from a romantic drive.Can’t imagine if he drops her in RM and Nani invites him for tea. ASR might bash his teeth.

Arnav went haywire seeing his favourite Daton ka doctor(dentist)was running slight temperature .As the Gupta’s were not at home he brought his dentist home. Nani was quite courteous and a good host but at the same time she was doing a jig because Arnav bringing kushi home meant that Nani got more masala to pull her grandson’s leg because she has seen him having a soft corner for kushi.

Arnav was having a tough time in RM .Already he was angry his di ran away for a romantic drive with NK Nani was pulling his leg so also kushi also had set her sights to irritate him by frantically calling him up to her room .He thinking she’s in distress rushed up to her room to ask her why she called him. Her reply just for friendly talk as she was feeling lonely made him want to murder someone.

Waiting to read the next chapter.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Chapter 13..


First things first.. sorry for my late,late,late reply ..


It's such a dhamakedar,long update ,Sabi ..


I always demand tissue papers from the writer if she tries to extract an extra tear from my eye..like Charles Dickens ..


I wonder what should I ask you for hurting my ribs from laughing..

My daughter's weird looks don't help either..


I just loved Anjali n NK's part..


NK seems smitten by an already smitten Anjali..


She fears her Chote's reaction but can't refuse NK's earnest offer to drop her nonetheless..


Thus her hilarious text..OMG


Arnav's concern for Khushi just melted my heart ..


He won't listen to her n she has to give in...


Now fate is on readers' side n Crazy Gupta doesn't have her keys with her..though her hand bag is no less than Umru Ayyar's Zambeel !!!


Arnav takes her to RM despite her protest..

N now comes the real drama queen-- Naniji..


She's surprised to see Khushi there..with Chote ...

Her mind already filled with some knowledge from their childhood n her own recent dreams about these two r enough to make this situation favorable for her ...

She teases him with her too innocent questions..lol


One thing I wonder..

If they don't call doctor ,any medicine can be given to Khushi ..or some tea n a light snack..


That's why my Khushi feels neglected n call OBNOXIOUSNESS to have an urgent chat..


Anjali n NK have not yet reached..

I m sure NK has taken to her at his rehearsals ..


I want Akash appears from nowhere when Payal comes to pick Khushi ..


Jeeti raho,Sabi !!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello friends,


Chapter XIV: Lucky Charms is now up on the blog. In case you haven't already, here's how you can access the blog:

  • If you have a WordPress account, search for 'Saucechips' in the Reader and you should be able to find it immediately.
  • If you don't have a WP account, but know the address of my old blog, you can find the link posted there.
  • You can also google for the name of this story with the search-words 'saucechips'/'storiesbysabi'. I've been told it works.
  • Drop in a scrap, and I'll help you out 🙂

You do not have to necessarily hold a WP account to follow or comment, and can use your e-mail instead which will not be displayed publicly.


See you there.

Lots of love!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Of course all credit must go to pingu the penguin for bringing this situation around. The revolving door to the room resulted in a nice dose of entertainment for Khushi and for us.

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Posted: 5 years ago

AWWWWW this was such a sweet update!!!!!!! I love how we got to see bits of an angry Anjali Raizada.. ghat’s my girl hehe!!! - i mean Anjali-Arnav are/were (:() one of my favourite sibling duos so to read about them being so cute and sibling’y LOL Is great!!!!! Also i totally defend Anjali here.. matlab give the girl a break haha !!!!!


khushi and nani’s conversation was sooooooo cuuuuuute.. and i love her rambles. And i love how nani loves it too hahah !!! And haaaayyyye she can see the connection too which is a mood. Also the penguin story is so creative and symbolic - adorable !!!


Arnav and Khushi scenes are pure bliss.. i mean adorable. Cute.. my heart flutters haha !!! So the holding and the touching ... my bubbies !!!!!! I can’t wait to see how their romance progresses :D

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