Hi N!
Thanks for the PM.
I felt this chapter captured the essence of every character and gave us an insight into their perspective.
For example, the interaction between Arnav, Anjali, Khushi and her mother revealed the dynamics of their relationships. Anjali is younger than Khushi, but I found her to be wiser than her years. She appeared to be more intuitive and pragmatic than Khushi. Anjali understands, and even concurs to her sister’s reasons for not completely accepting her husband, yet she is able to overlook Arnav’s vices and appreciate him for the man that he could be. Unlike Khushi, Anjali’s judgement is not clouded by her prejudices. Perhaps her handicap has given her experiences that made her sixth sense sharper and she can judge people better than others.
Arnav comes across as an affable person, except when he is dealing with Manohar. His interactions with Anjali left a smile on my face. It kind of reminded me of Arnav-Anjali’s bond from the show, when Arnav sometimes was in a mischievous mood with his Di. He seems to genuinely like Anjali and not just because she is Khushi’s sister. In last chapter, one of your reader (I think it was Sarah) who commented something on the lines of “longing to be belonged”. Somehow, I feel this longing is not just limited to Khushi. He probably misses not having a “normal” family. He is trying to find a place for himself, just for himself, in Khushi’s family. When he told Garima, he is her son, I think he honestly meant it.
Garima’s “word’s of wisdom” to her elder daughter seem to be colored by her own experiences and POV. She seems to have seen bad days, financially. Was she unhappy in her marriage with Shashi or has she turned bitter only after her husband’s demise? She clearly values money a lot more than love. So, it looks like Shashi’s money which was earned in a righteous way was not enough to keep her happy and satisfied. But I think, it will be too harsh of me to judge Garima before knowing her past. So for now, I will give her a benefit of doubt.
I have few more comments about Arnav-Manohar & Arnav-Khushi. Will post them separately.
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