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Suchi2305

@Suchi2305

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#81

Found this FF and read it one go. Some really good stuff that I got to read after a long time. Can't wait to see Khushi's reaction when she comes to know about Arnav being the boss. Would love to read more. Update soon.

PS: please do include me the in the PM list and also the private blog.

Thank you!

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rfexp95

@rfexp95

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#82

Loved the past 5 chapters.

Waiting to read further.

Update soon!

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#83

He is gonna dine with the diva

The damsel is distressed bcos of his dangerous looks

I'm loving this mind games oopsy love games

Theatre...some thing dramatic or melodramatic...

Wtg for next chap.

I'm yet to pen.. tied up with work and AD..will share asap.

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shirana

@faz28

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#84

A very short update but waiting for chapter 6. So sparks fly both sides then 😉

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#85

Came across this story & read in one go
Nice & interesting
Can you add me to your pm list & blog

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Labitha

@labi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#86

Loved all the chapters of your story.😃

I loved NK and Khushi's friendship. Thick friends, they seem but still, she is hiding something from him. She is a loner.

In another country, Arnav and Shyam are embarking their journey to India.

Shyam, stuck in an unhappy marriage with Payal, chose money over love. Were Khushi and Shyam got engaged earlier or was that only a decision by their parents? Why is he coming to see Khushi now?

Arnav, a workaholic, finally getting a break from his normal routines. As you had hinted, a beautiful journey of his life had started.

I loved how he admired the resort. I could also visualise it.

That was a cute scene between Arnav and his cook Varalakshmi. He is still a kid who craves for love and affection.

So Arnav is on an exploring mood and he reached Khushi's house unknowingly.

Loved their first meeting. Staring at a girl while walking..look what happened ASR? His leg got injured leading to more beautiful moments with the lady. So the bruise had some benefits.😉

Dhak dhak for Arnav...interesting!

Loved their talks..so Arnav is intrigued by Khushi. Eager to know about Khushi's thoughts too.

The last line was so good...I love it when people unknowingly say something about you and you have no idea about that.

I don't think he would reveal that he is that hot boss.😎

He bruised his leg, burnt his tongue...now what?😉

I was thinking about what would be Khushi's thoughts about their meeting and you gave us one in the next update itself.😃

So Khushi is also attracted to Arnav.

Both were having the same thoughts on how to spend more time together. Both were trying their best not to look desperate.

No Khushi, he is not an employee, he is your friend's hot boss you are unknowingly praising! Hot boss...it is so awkward for the boss himself to hear it!😆

So a dinner on the way...that's why the chapter title says about dinner. I am hoping some games also as it was also there in the title.

Beautiful story with beautiful settings and location.👏

Loved your writing and looking forward to more.👏👍🏼

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shoobie

@shoobie

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#87

can't wait for dinner!!! thanks for the update

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coolie001

@coolie001

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ranogill
Loving it .. And hope I get your Pm regarding blog

Surely!

I am glad that you liked it.

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coolie001

@coolie001

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Uzii
Nice but very short update so both arnav n khusi are attracted to eachother n wants to know n explore this feeling.

Yass...was held up in work. 😆

Hope chappie 6 will do the justice

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coolie001

@coolie001

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Suchi2305
Found this FF and read it one go. Some really good stuff that I got to read after a long time. Can't wait to see Khushi's reaction when she comes to know about Arnav being the boss. Would love to read more. Update soon.
PS: please do include me the in the PM list and also the private blog.
Thank you!

Thanks, I am happy you liked it!

Yes, I am adding you to my PM list😃