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Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw

lovely update... i was little scared about arnav's reaction.. now i am at peace...

oh.. wow.. that date was cute... i was thinking like that ... then when i read fully... even more cute..☺️

waiting for next update...

Thank you! :)

cute was what I was aiming for :D

Next part will be up soon.

Originally posted by: crazybugs

Awesome

Originally posted by: raki

Lovely update

Thanks a ton, guys! :)

Originally posted by: anayaraizada

No words just Amazing 👏Loved each and every part of it

Thanks a lot for this response! :)

Originally posted by: p.vibha

This amazing!! I've been hooked on this story since the first word.

Please update soon!!

p.vibha2019-04-10 13:17:27

Thanks, vibha! :)

Glad the fic could hold your interest. I'll be putting up the next part soon.

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

@bold u totally got it gal...that was LOT way...hehe...

hope you are excited for endgame too...i booked my tickets for 1st day...😆

i love reading your story with all the anxiety and aches 😆...just get bit impatient...

thanks a lot dear...

I watched the 1st morning show of endgame on the 1st day. luckily the place where I currently am had released the movie on Wednesday :D

My fav character arcs were of Captain America and Black widow (a character whom I never really warmed up to in the other movies). How did you find it?

And a massive thanks for the constant support for Tangled !

Originally posted by: Uzii

Wow amazing chapter so both of them went on a date n also confessed that they like each other i hope nothing unpleasant occur in their new relationship n i really hope sheetal doesn't create any misunderstanding.

@bold- we'll have to hope now :D

Thanks so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: amadea

lovely part,hope sheetal doesn't create any misunderstanding between them.

Thank you! :)

Let's hope for the same :D

Originally posted by: coderlady

What a tangled web is still between them. What will Arnav do about Sheetal?

Tangled web it is :D

Let's see how Arnav deals with it now.

Originally posted by: canapoem

Another super update. 👏

Arnav's reaction to the revelations was so natural, nothing OTT like our serials. 😆

Imagining Arnav saying "Holy Shit" every few minutes was indeed funny.

Arnav did take it well, more than I had imagined. But then he always admired Khushi, her intelligence and her work ethics. And the stranger had drawn his heart. So the combination of both was just perfect.

The way he asked her out on a date was cute. Which also makes me wonder that how much ever close one gets on social media, meeting in person and interacting in person is so much different. And both their actions and reactions was totally understandable.

A perfect ending to a perfect date is what came to my mind when they kissed properly at the end of their date.

Writerji, we don't know anything about Arnav's family or his past till now. Will you tell us about it or is it not needed for the plot?

Also Sheetal is still there and so is her evil plan. How will Arnav deal with that now?

Did Sheetal send her spies over to their date too?

Even though they said they would meet on Monday, would they end up texting all weekend or even better talking?

Another Stellar update.

Thanks so much for this awesome review! :)

@bold- this is what I wanted to get across without making it too literal. Thanks for this insight!

About Arnav's family... Other than Aman it's not "needed" for the plot as of now but the succeeding chapters are still in rough drafts so can't shed more light on it currently.

And yeah, Sheetal and her plan is still on though for Arnav it has taken a backseat. We'll have to see how it all resurfaces ;) :D

Keep the support coming , please! means a lot.

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Wow! This update made me feel all warm and fuzzy 😊 That was one smooth conversation, Arnav and Khushi behaved like true MD and CEO while managing this shocker!

For some reason I noticed your detailing of the texts anew when Arnav and Khushi were rereading them! While it was cute how they scrolled up and down the conversations I loved how you capture smallest details like Photo Attachment for the readers.

It is clear that there is no awkwardness between these soulmates. I loved that they have absolute clarity about taking this forward minus Arnav's dormant mind which has forgotten his deal. I think "Tangled Khushi" can have her own fan club with her mature and bold attitude.

I have always felt Arnav was deeper into the relationship compared to Khushi during the stranger phase. So it wasn't surprising when he started questioning about Payal needing Khushi every weekend😆 possessive already! I am wondering if he can actually survive without seeing Khushi until Monday or will use Akash as an excuse to show up during Sunday shopping😉 Well you have a knack of throwing the best curve balls ever so I am not even attempting to guess what will happen next😛

As for Sheetal storm, I am going to forget about it and just soak in the happy vibes of this update for now👏

I had a lot of fun planning/writing the text part of this story. It was something I hadn't done before. So was pretty excited to flesh it out. Glad you liked the re-intro of the texts. It has gone down since the identities of the strangers are out in the open now.

Arnav's dormant mind, as you put it, has "forgotten" but that's gonna come up sooner or later. But as you say in your last line- he too wants to soak in the happy vibes. For now :D

Thanks a lot for this wonderful feedback!