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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: poornima1991
waiting for khushi reaction when she kbow about arnav

or for Arnav's reaction when he finds out ;)

Thanks so much for your interest! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: momai14
really nice update...

Thank you so much!! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
Hmmm.. I was wondering how would it come to pass that Arnav wouldn't recognize Khush after the picture.. since they were both headed out for dinner, it was not improbable the they would meet..

The exchange of texts was very cute! And I loved how Arnav came across in the latter part of the converstion...

I am really looking forward to this story unfolding!

Thank you for reading and liking! 😊

We'd have to blame Payal's ill-timed call for it :D

Glad you liked the chat. and I look forward to your feedback!

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: kizh72
Oh boy, you have me like a puppet on a string! Can't wait for the next. This has quickly risen up the ranks to become one of my favorites that i'm reading currently.

Really happy at reading your comment that my fic could hold your interest!

Thanks so much for investing your time. 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Uzii
Lovely update i so live their text conversation if khusi didn't spoil her dress arnav would have known immediately that it is khusi whom he is texting but in the last moment she changed her

yeah. At last moment Payal's call intervened and led to Khushi changing. :D But will there be more hit and misses? 😉

Thanks so much for reading and sharing your views!😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: anjs
ahh...how much i wait for your updates...

So Khushi and Arnav are neck deep into the stranger... I was so happy when Khushi shared the pic and thought that now I am sure Arnav would be also there for some reason and would see her and recognize her, but shit happened and Payal had to call at the same time...

and here was the googly, Khushi and Arnav are gonna be related to each other...first i thought wth, is Arnav the mystery guy...then i said no no no Arnav wont be a douchebag to talk to Khushi when he is with Payal...

oh and that text... for a moment i thought how can Arnav write something like that...and Khushi said its okay, she isnt offended...honestly she seems like a person who would get offended, but maybe it was the wine...want to see her reaction the next day, but then something more important has happened so i doubt she will remember it in sober state...

Thanks so much for this detailed feedback! 😊

ArShi are unknowingly getting deeper in this "texting-r/lship" thing. Happy that you're liking the flow of it. as for Khushi being okay with Arnav's message, it's partly the wine but it's also (mainly) the ease with which she can flirt/talk to her stranger. Given her daily life of work, it's an escape kinda thing for her where she can be free and interact unreservedly.

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: geetakhanna
I am loving this story

Thanks, Geeta! Glad you are 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: v5a1s6
Oooh...I am so excited to see how Khushi and her stranger's story unfolds! When will you update next? Please do it soon!

Thanks so much for your interest! 😊

I too am excited to share what I've written/thought for them.

I'll be updating soon.

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
That was awesome... Khushi and Arnav's phone conversations were really great..and I thought it would have been great for Arnav getting to know of Khushi's identity, sibnce that is not happening, with this work and family angles overlaping, there is no chance of romance between them. Chat could be considered harmless flirting ...

Thanks a lot Jyothi! 😊

Glad you're liking the phone texts. I wouldn't say there's no chance 😉 harmless flirting could lead to something... or... maybe not :D

But with work and family angles, things might get a bit tangled. ;)

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: sadhnasoumya
Wow this is getting more and more interesting
Loved the update
I was shocked when khushi sent the pic
It was so unlike her
So now they are gonna meet on more personal levels that akash and payal are together
Can't wait for the next part

Thanks so much! 😊

Khushi sending the pic was something she wouldn't have usually done but given how comfortable/unreserved she feels with the stranger, encouraged by the wine, she does it.

With the personal angles coming in, let's see how they'd navigate. 😉