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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: gopikaaji
Just a nice update..simply loved it

Thank you! 😊

Happy that you're enjoying the updates

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: anjs
woah, that was such a cute twist... first i thought Arnav knows he is talking to Khushi...later i realized even he doesnt have her number and why would both of them assume them to be the other person...

this was really cute and i hope they interact more this way and then realize they are good friends...

btw, it reminded me of the movie, 'You've got mail'

that is a cute movie too

Thanks so much! 😊

You're right, both (ArShi) don't know that they just chatted with one another- had a decent convo w/o any ulterior motives or doubts.

Glad that you liked this twist. I was building up to it (with all the phone no confusion) 😃

I remember watching You've got mail a long time back. It's a cute movie. Your comment's making me wanna rewatch :D

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
You are an excellent writer yar...
when I saw khushi took the Arnav's number by mistake... then I never expected that it would turn like this especially in a cute way... and I thought arnav knew who it was but it turned to be totally different...
so exited for the next update

Thanks so much, Ayushi! 😊 Your continuous support means a lot.

I am so happy that you liked this turn of events. I myself was quite excited with this part and wanted to rush to it :D But I needed to set the plot in the past couple of chapters.

I'll be updating soon,

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: sadhnasoumya
Aww the convo was cute
I wonder how will they react when they will find who was the person they chatted with especially khushi
Poor mohit
Couldn't go with khushi and no movie too
The way khushi got addicted to avengers I was remembering ipk
Even we were addicted to the show when it was on air
By the way I haven't watched any of the avengers movies

Thanks a lot! 😊

@bold- let's see what awaits both of them 😉

Mohit is getting more sympathy than I expected :D :D

@last lines - I know! IPK's very addictive. I did a binge watch some time back.

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geetakhanna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#185

Hi waiting for the next update

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Savera84
I am in the club who thinks Arnav knows he was talking to Khushi.
Arnav does not know Khushi's number, but, he has given her his number few hours ago and may be he has noticed the other number which was already on her desk. Why would a stranger have his number?
So, the question for this week is, does he know or not?
The conversation is fresh and cute. Loved it.
Avengers? I haven't seen a single one of them. Should I binge watch as well?
Cheers...

Thanks so much for reading and continuously sharing your views! 😊

The POV changed in the 2nd part of the chapter (from Sat, May 6) and it was from Arnav's point of view- he doesn't know that he was chatting with Khushi. If he's gonna figure out is something for future 😉 but as of now, he has no idea.

(Do let me know if there was some confusion regarding the presentation or the writing style).

If you're into superhero genre, you might end up enjoying. They are light-hearted with lot of humor. I loved 3/4 of them and like the rest.

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: shoobie
loving the story. khushi needed this outlet - seems she's so dedicated to her career - she's forgetting to smell the roses - found their convo lighthearted and fun. i hope they have more of these. thanks for the update

Thanks so much! 😊

Yeah, Khushi did need this much-deserved break. She's too into her work.

Really glad you liked the development!

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: poornima1991
lovely conversation

Thanks so much, Poornima! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Uzii
Such a nice update both are texting n enjoying n didn't know who the other person is n yet had a good time,so far arnav seems to be a genuine person with no hidden agenda but its too early to make any assumption so lets see what happens next how will khusi react when she comes to know that the person she enjoyed texting is actually arnav.

@bold- if or when that happens, it'll surely be interesting to watch her reaction :D ;)

Currently the agenda that arnav is hiding is that he is here to buy her company.

I am glad that you enjoyed the Arshi texting one another as strangers.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, like always! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
So, it was Arnav's number, but then the interaction ended sooner that I wish for. These texts would have been a way to know real them to each other..

@bold- Is this the end? 😉

Thanks a ton for reading and sharing your views. 😊