Wretched Affections!! (T#3) New thread Link page 1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Uzii

Congratulations dear for wedded I'm so happy for you.Lavanya left arnav for someone else or she came to know that he doesn't love her n is interested in her sister.

Originally posted by: LuvAmalfi

Did somehow khushi realize why Lavanya left him ?? And does that involve arnav's interest in khushi ?? Did khushi get to see some intimate moments between Arnav and La?? Is that why she wonders why her sister walked out on him ? Did he call out khushi's name when he was with La ;)? Wonder why Arnav played around with La if he wanted khushi , even if she seemed unapproachable ? Did khushi realize that La realized that La was not in his heart all this time ?

And there are many many many more questions !!! And I can't wait to find the answers 😊

Originally posted by: -Bhavi

Thank you N its a pleasure to read your story.

Congrats on Wedded. The cover looks beautiful. I am surprise that there is a market out there for the fanfiction 👏👏. (Fifty shades does not count as they changed the name😛)

Are you not going to be changing the names of the characters?

Nice teaser.

Its in three parts from Khushi's POV - Teenage crush, astounded tricenarian and fatal attraction.

Forgetting what you have written I am going to be holding you on the song that you have for this teaser. Especially the following parts😛😆

Girl, you know I want your love

Your love was handmade for somebody like me

Come on now, follow my lead

I may be crazy, don't mind me

Say, boy, let's not talk too much

Grab on my waist and put that body on me

Come on now, follow my lead

Come, come on now, follow my lead

One week in we let the story begin

We're going out on our first date

You and me are thrifty, so go all you can eat

Fill up your bag and I fill up a plate

We talk for hours and hours about the sweet and the sour

And how your family is doing okay

Leave and get in a taxi, then kiss in the backseat

Tell the driver make the radio play, and I'm singing like

Girl, you know I want your love

Your love was handmade for somebody like me

However I think this is what your story will go to 🤔

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hTbeVXuWyaU[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: khusharn

Omg... Hot teaser... Hope the wait to read whole won't be too longgg..

Originally posted by: Savera84

Congratulations for the new thread and thanks for the teaser.

I thought the teaser is pretty straight forward for a change.

But, your disclaimer put a stop to my thought process.

So, I am not guessing anything right now.

There has to be a clash before they come close to each other.

Khushi is too young and too muddled up with her emotions.

She is afraid of loving.

She may be thinking she will get hurt if she accepts Arnav's offer of freindship.

Even if she wanted to, external forces helped in increasing the distance between them.

We know only Dadi is her well wisher in this world.

We don't know whether Payal is really a good friend or she has her own motive to be friends with Khushi.

Arnav has a baggage of his own coupled with his ego.

If he suddenly offers an olive branch, it takes time for Khushi to accept the offer, because he said some nasty things about her.

So, the clash is inevitable before they bridge the gap and yeah, waiting for the next chapter.

Cheers...

Originally posted by: zaniax

CONGRATS for Wedded!! Lovely cover page. I'm SO happy for you :))
Abt the teaser, I'll hav to read again cos it kinda went over my head 😆

Originally posted by: katj

Hmmm waiting for full update

Originally posted by: Doc-ere

Hey hi , heartily congratulations for wedded...& I know you'll achieve more & more...

It's good to know ur all stories r appreciated by everyone & I'm very happy for that , looking forward for this one & many more in future...👏

Thanks for PM.

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Hi N

As usual I can't resist the temptation of decoding your teasers even if my conclusions may be atrocious. Have a field day enjoying a laugh.

1. The first part looks like it is in the present. Khushi n Arnav are having a moment though may not be of the closeness that we all crave between them. Could be that Khushi is embarrassed before Arnav n her family where some past anecdote of past is being shared over dinner or so. Khushi remembering the past times with Arnav those that were the reason that she could live every moment as the girl in love .

This one is correct, in a different way.

2. The second para deals with La confessing to Khushi about Her liking for Arnav. I have a feeling we have hit upon the reason why Khushi was holding Arnav at arms length. Maybe even the reason she brutally lashed out. Her frustration at knowing that jiji liked the same man that she loved. Like us,

Khushi is right in wondering as to what made La run away from marriage when she couldn't do without Arnav. Was she the reason there were misunderstandings between Arhi. Did she ensure that Khushi's replied never reached Arnav? Lots of possibilities

Hmm, you have all possibilities laid up, lemme see, what I can offer in the chapter.

Originally posted by: canapoem

Now I see the Aaina reference clearly.

Only difference is in Aaina the guy loved the elder sister initially and not the younger one.

So the question is will La come back to reclaim Arnav saying he belonged to her in the first place?

Interesting N.

And very nice "Wedded" cover. 👏