With or Without You (Revisited) Chapter 1 Pg8

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winter.03

@winter.03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Bookmarking this!!! Just stumbled upon this.

I love, love, love Sarah. I am going to re-read as if I have never read the story even though it is one of my favorites.

Khushi's recollection was heart-wrenching to read.Abuse is like a placebo effect...if you think you deserve it you keep making excuses for it. Hard to break the cycle once you become a part of it. What is even more tragic is that the victim perpetuates it more by being silent...part of it has to do with being at fault the other is the inability to understand it.

Sarah is too damn adorable!

Aman is a nice brother...Khushi should understand him because I don't think its wrong to take help when you are down...it doesn't mean you are weak makes you far more stronger. Plus she isn't alone, the experiment of survival affects Sarah as well.

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roopathomas

@roopathomas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Remember reading this story a while bfr... i had loved it but was disappointed when u left it unfinished. I really hope this time around it gets to it's deserved end.

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

now i remember this story hope you will continue loved this story

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Sandya

@Ssanjinika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Hi,

Just stumbled on your story. The prologue piqued my interest while the first chapter cemented it 😊

I wondered why Arnav never saw the face of the girl he rescued. I was quite surprised to realize it was because he knew her. The girl who was badly injured was the one who in his memory, used to be chirpy with some secret knowledge shining in her eyes. Would have never guessed.

Brilliant premise, though the journey seems to be a difficult one. One who was betrayed in love and the other who was destroyed by it. We have to wait to see how they believe in this elusive emotion once again 😊

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coderlady

@coderlady

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

So Arnav and Khushi knew each other before Did he realize who she was when he helped her?

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zayana khan

@zayana123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

So happy to read this story again...❤️☺️

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Will Arnav recognize her ?

Khushi have not seen Arnav? But did he see her? Or was it going to be his driver who would recognize her

Looking forward

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Brishti

@brishti84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

What you've presented so far is really really good. The prologue had me hooked and chapter 1 just continued the pull.

Not sure yet if Arnav knows that Khushi is the same woman he has helped. By his thoughts and description of her I don't think he's recognized her. He probably didn't hear the part in the phone conversation where she asked for Aman...

What she has gone through in her abusive marriage is a true nightmare. I'm glad she has opened up to see someone because even that's a hurdle in itself, admitting to yourself that you need help. But she still has her struggles here when she isn't allowing Aman to help her out. I'm so curious how she will evolve from her past.

Khushi's past is clear but what about Arnav? How was he betrayed by 'S'? She left him and 'them' for someone else maybe...

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Here comes my Sarah.. i love her so much in this story.. waiting for her to meet her best friend.. loved the amazing update.. 😊

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Arnav and Khushi knew each other before...will Arnav recoginze her?...i love this Sarah...Khushi has gone through a bad phase in her abusive marriage... I am happy that she is able to open up with her Doctor.

Looking forward.