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I came to check the forum before I called the famiy for dinner and now I know what I will do after dinner.. ❤️ droooll
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Hey, Loved the update. (Not too long for me.)
If I could had my way I could employ you to just keep writing forever. Love the way you think. I love how emotionally rich your characters are. Their characters are clearly defined and they react according to their character in given situations.
Khushi and Arnav are living in their own personal hells. All she wants to do is be with Arnav, feel his love and care. All Arnav wants is to somehow believe that she is bound to him... mind, body and soul. The reality is that it is exactly how they want it to be but they are too blinded by their own angsty attitudes towards each other. They believe what they have been shown.. the misunderstanding has kept them apart.
I like how you have written the scenes... where Khushi can't resist Arnav's presence around her simply because she finds him so irresistible but his opinion about her and the demeaning way he treats her has left her cold.
And how Arnav, is making the baby the reason to constantly be near her, help and support her.
This ambiguity is driving the story.
I am not too worried about the baby. Tell me I am right!!!
I remember going through the same thing. At 6weeks 3days we were not able to hear the baby's heartbeat. But after 3 days it was loud and steady.
So I am keeping my fingers crossed that you have that kind of a beautiful surprise for us.
And this one week will bring these two closer. a stressful time between loving souls brings them together.
You just have to give us the update faster... coz Arnav and Khushi can wait for the week but I just cant.
Love.
Edited by Illuminatus. - 8 years ago
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