Arshi TS: The Empty Cradle; Last Shot- Pg 24

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Mounam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Loved this story..add an epilogue please..

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Niranjana R

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Loved it...you have given a brand new dimension from the usual

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amita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Wow it was a beautiful story

Love it too much

Thanks for pm

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Loved the closure. Arnav and Khushi were both at fault for doing certain things, for not trusting their partner and most importantly for not communicating.

Sadly there are mothers like Garima and families who accept solutions like the one she offered. Men willingly go along with it and women have to stay quite cos it's expected that giving an heir is the most important function /use of a wife.

Glad to see you present a slightly different perspective

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Sobhan006

@Sobhan006

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Hi Shalu, glad to have you back Sorry for the delay in reading and commenting this fabulous TS. Glad it all ended well for Arnav and Khushi.

I'm waiting for TWR too" looking forward to the mystery to reveal... you won't know how devastated I was when you stopped writing temporarily, that too in a crucial point...

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leenaunni1966

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Good update. Want an epilogue.

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@addicted25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Hi, another sleepless night so I thought I would log in and check my inbox. This was a lovely 2S. The first part I wasn't happy with Arnav, he should have waited for her to be ready, then maybe during the honeymoon made his move after she said yes. Then the second story ... how could Garima do that? Payal wanted to marry Akaash, the only one to pick up on that was Arnav. Thank goodness he said no and brought up their relationship with the family. This wasn't Khushis fault, that she took their relationship as rocky, he made no attempt to talk to her get to know her . all she felt was that she was being used by her husband.

They finally talked which should have been the first thing that they did. Weomen should understand that they have a voice, their husband should listen and understand them. If this never happens their children will never adjust to real life where talking is necessary to survive.

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

It's really after a long time I read this... But I simply love it

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PariKC

@IdioTinTin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Thwse two shots were pleasure for the soul, really hated Arnav in the first shot but loving him again in the second one. Great work and superb writing, you're fantastic.