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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#781

Sarah I must say that this is THE most difficult chap upto now because you have very clearly emoted Khushi...I saw no words - only her emotions and that brought tears to my eyes...This is the most beautiful chap of this amazingly emotional story 👏 ⭐️

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Seriousreader

@Seriousreader

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#782

Fab update, but am feeling sad...too much of misunderstanding 😭

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sbfk

@sbfk

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#783

Mind blowing update

The inner turmoil of both Arnav and khushi with their own misunderstandings and calculations are very emotionally described.

Both of them are right as well as wrong according to their thinking .

This update clearly shows that how words and situation can bring worst impact on anybody's mind .

Thank you so much for the update

Its a lesson to everyone as how careful we should be while using words because words are more sharp that sword .

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evergreen05

@evergreen05

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#784

Wow!! amazing update. Beautifully written and emotions are in peak.
Can this misunderstanding any big?? Well written and waiting for next.

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#785

Fabulous portrayal of emotions!!!

Your writing skills are truly commendable.

Their love is interlaced with misunderstandings and distrust! Although we get to see glimpses of care and concern, for the current phase in Arnav and Khushi's life deception rules.

My heart went out to Khushi. The girl has endured alot! From being an orphan, to managing her uncle's family and then receiving the greatest betrayal from her love, I still wonder how this girl managed to remain sane. But now she is almost there to her breaking-point. The first cracks in her carefully built self-restraint and sanity were seen in this update when in a dazed state she said and did things that she wouldn't dare do if she was fine.

Now I only fear that she might just lose hopes on love after this incident and then she might be lost in the abyss of darkness with no emotions to save herself from self-destruction.

Although I hate Arnav for treating Khushi the way he does, I still can't just ignore the love that he has for her. His way of expressing it is wrong but this is Arnav we are talking about. His cynical mind has made him believe the worst of Khushi. But this chapter does depict his protectiveness as a parent. If he could believe that the child Khushi is carrying is his then why not give Khushi the benefit of doubt and trust her.

Well that will be something he will regret big time in the future, his mistrust in Khushi.

Their love is so lethal that if one is on the path to self-destruction, the other one will follow suit.

Waiting to read on how this story is going to shape up.

Continue soon.

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Daph78

@Daph78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#786

Hi,

I read your story at one go over a couple of days. It is fantastic. You are a fantastic writer. All your updates are interesting. I even found the non-Arhi parts interesting . Kudos to you. Shyam was also a fantastic villian. ( This is almost how his character should have been in the show too in my opinion). 👏👏👏

Right now I wonder how this Arnav will ever clear his head and come out of his misunderstanding. Oh Well all in good time. Im usually not very active in IF, but your story captivated me sooo much that I couldnt help but comment. Hope to follow this story through all the angst and remorse.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#787

will arnav ever try to understand khushi

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#788

Oh ritu!! What do I say after reading this update...

Heart wrenching update yaar... kushi spoke so much in her frustration that now any kind of explanation will not be able to convince arnav... damage is already done...

The thought of his baby had made him so blind, he didn't even realise that it was just an assumption and it was not confirmed by any medical tests... but the lines of your last paragraph are so true... nothing is going to change his opinion about kushi and his baby in the near future... he thinks that she will harm his baby and he is worried about that and nothing else...

Even after all this I don't have an ounce of hatred for arnav ritu... one emotion what I feel for kushi is pain and the only emotion I feel for arnav is sympathy... he had not done anything.. he is a mere puppet in the hands of his fate and the circumstances were against him and kushi... I'm worried about him... I want to see how he is going to handle himself once the truth is out... no amount of redemption can bring him out of his guilt...

Waiting for the next part dear... what is arshi's next step??? Can't wait...

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla
For now here is the summary of my comment
Dil ko tho aapne thod diya , Rooh abhi thi magar aaj aapne usko tho jallahi daala.

Jo zindagiki sabse badi Khushi honi chahiye thi aap ne usko ek kaala tikka banadiya , Yeh aapne kya kiya meri rooh ko jaladiya,

Wah Wah, darling, absolutely lovely...❤️...