[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: The Sinner (Moved to Blog)

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Woahhh enjoyed reading this update👍🏼

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Gosh! Where do you get the ideas from?

What a beauty this chapter is! I'm mesmerized by the words and the song you chose, I'm really enthralled by the song and it suited the chapter perfectly, each line showed the feelings Arnav and Khushi were going through.

Arnav slept with Khushi, even after knowing she is a sinner that means that he is a sinner too in a sense as he loves someone else and sleeping with someone else and also giving a roof to a sinner makes him a sinner too.

I don't think Khushi killed her fiance, even if she did, it was in self defense. She is just needs some respite from these circumstances that is why she succumbed to him.

I'm very interested to know where this story is going as I cannot make any guesses.

I'm just blank.

I just love the song. Nice choice of it

Love,

Saraa :*

Edited by ..KittyKat.. - 9 years ago

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

I'm impressed..

this is sinfully addictive...they have an explosive passion...
why did she kill her fiancee..and what's the story with kiara..omg..they did it..it's too quick..I don't know about previous sins but both are aware of it; I'm waiting to see their reactions to it...

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Loved chapter 1 👏
Passionate update 😳
Eager for the next part 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Oh em gee!
This cracked me up 🤣

OMG! I noticed it just now! What the! Nice one dear!🤣

Otherwise Arnav would have been like tujhe yaad na meri aayi kissi se ab kya kehna🤣

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

OMG! I noticed it just now! What the! Nice one dear!🤣
Otherwise Arnav would have been like tujhe yaad na meri aayi kissi se ab kya kehna🤣

😆😆yep...

and khushi would have been lyk

Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja
Phool bicha perfume laga ke
Mood banao taaja taaja
Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja..

🤣🤣

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

This chapter actually tickled me. Its funny

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Wonderful start.. Awsm chapter it was..

Loved it..

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1029751

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

What the!! This is not done.. Why is Khushi always engaged? *pout* why can't Arnav be her first fiance??

Arnav lost his control to the desire the sinner was creating in him... Woah!!! He slept with the SINNER.. Didu but why did she kill her fiance?

And now what? What is Arnav gonna do? How will he react???

Didu dont create more suspense for me yaar...

Pls pls pls update soon didu

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

😆😆yep...
and khushi would have been lyk
Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja
Phool bicha perfume laga ke
Mood banao taaja taaja
Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja..
🤣🤣

LMFAO! 🤣

I'm looking forward to such aaja piya tohe pyaar du moment!🤣

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