COMPLETE|ArShi SS:If I Were You Just For A Day (Sheetal Track)| - Page 44

my most favorutie story on this track :-)

Beautiful story... loved it ❤️

Wow!! Awesome!!!
This is the best story that gives such a huge closure and relief from that pathetic sheetal track in the show. You have done a lovely job of closing perfectly every loophole and showing it so perfectly well.
The best thing about this story was the way Khushi asked him after his history of girlfriends and his previous colorful lifestyle , how in the world he can assume about her and his broinlaw!!! That was lovely.
Amazing story. Really . Kudos to u . This should have happened in the story and then that sheetal horrendous track would have been shadowed and digested and not left such a bad taste in our heads thinking of what happened in the serial...
So, thanks !!

Its was Excellent To Good Story love it

Originally posted by: Serene77

Wow!! Awesome!!!
This is the best story that gives such a huge closure and relief from that pathetic sheetal track in the show. You have done a lovely job of closing perfectly every loophole and showing it so perfectly well.
The best thing about this story was the way Khushi asked him after his history of girlfriends and his previous colorful lifestyle , how in the world he can assume about her and his broinlaw!!! That was lovely.
Amazing story. Really . Kudos to u . This should have happened in the story and then that sheetal horrendous track would have been shadowed and digested and not left such a bad taste in our heads thinking of what happened in the serial...
So, thanks !!

Just the way women should speak in real life!!

Amazing...

Thank you!!

👏 ⭐️ 👏

This was such a beautiful story!!!

Loved it thoroughly

Read it in a go, mind blowing, superb. Even in show I wanted rather Anjali to adopt Aarav than Arshi, because that was just fair. She was a single woman urging for motherhood who had lost her unborn whereas Arnav & Khushi were a newly wed couple, both fertile (I think😆) and most importantly, Khushi, too young to act a mother to an 8 years old (she was said to be 18 at the beginning of the show) who was just a child herself yet. Having a small baby as 20 years old and slowly bringint it up is something else than suddenly having to deal with a readymade child who understands and gets everything happening in his surroundings. Just not the same.

Originally posted by: IdioTinTin.

Read it in a go, mind blowing, superb. Even in show I wanted rather Anjali to adopt Aarav than Arshi, because that was just fair. She was a single woman urging for motherhood who had lost her unborn whereas Arnav & Khushi were a newly wed couple, both fertile (I think😆) and most importantly, Khushi, too young to act a mother to an 8 years old (she was said to be 18 at the beginning of the show) who was just a child herself yet. Having a small baby as 20 years old and slowly bringint it up is something else than suddenly having to deal with a readymade child who understands and gets everything happening in his surroundings. Just not the same.

Adopting kids is good but that was something where I really wondered, what were the CVs thinking when they made Arshi adopt that brat when Anjali was there? Well, in my head I always ignored him everywhere and still act as if he never existed. LOL

Anyway, I loved this SS. A briliant piece. Too good.