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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#441

Amazing Story loved it so much.

Super.

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#442

What an awesome story sirji 😆

At times i did feel khushi bas kr bechary arnav ji ko maaf krdy .. 😆 but khushi reminded him of everything ... n rightly so...

Loved this !!! .. lol the last part n khushi statement abt their child not being their clone 😆 ❤️

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@pup03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#443

Awesome story.. loved it.. Arnav was so shocked to see Khushi like him and that one thing made him look at the things from her perspective and how he did what he should have done long back.. his apology along with making his family know about the secrets was something remarkable.. however loved the happy ending.. loved the story 😊

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Mososha

@Mososha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#444

Wow. I don't know Hindi but l feel like saying "kya baat hai?" Superb writing.

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 8 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: Mososha
Wow. I don't know Hindi but l feel like saying "kya baat hai?" Superb writing.

hehe..thanks dear😳

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 8 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: Miss.Zaidi
What an awesome story sirji 😆
At times i did feel khushi bas kr bechary arnav ji ko maaf krdy .. 😆 but khushi reminded him of everything ... n rightly so...
Loved this !!! .. lol the last part n khushi statement abt their child not being their clone 😆 ❤️

Hehe.. thanks buddy

The last part was deliberately added that way.

Which child behaves 24x7 200% like their father/mother?

Individuality ki dhajjiya uda do bass, serial mein! 😕😆😆

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 8 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: pup03
Awesome story.. loved it.. Arnav was so shocked to see Khushi like him and that one thing made him look at the things from her perspective and how he did what he should have done long back.. his apology along with making his family know about the secrets was something remarkable.. however loved the happy ending.. loved the story 😊

Thank you so much buddy

Glad you liked it :)