Arhi FF - The tale of precious stones and handmaidens - Chap 4/Page 27

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Shilpa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Hey dear,

Seriously, people like Garima are too irritating to tolerate. Waiting for Arnav and Khushi's meet. May be who knows, sonakshi can turn out to be villain.

Thanks for the pm

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Mazz, thanks for the daily update - please continue with it (if possible)
Lovely update (though I don't like sonakshi) - Iam sure Arnav will be knocked out when he meets the seamstress - waiting to see his reaction
Khushi seems to be a bold and fiesty character - loving it

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Param

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Happy to see update daily and loving this story.. well ARSHI meeting in next update and a shock for Arnav when he sees the one who have made the dress.. loved Khushi's confusion about the sounds and then her uneasiness when she got to know about the reason of those sounds.. poor Khushi.. however Garima's attitude towards Khushi is sickening.. loved the amazing update..

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Arshi67

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Good to see you back writing :) Not going to say no to daily updates!

Khushi's mix of feistiness and innocence is very charming. Waiting to see her challenge Arnav's arrogance and soothe his angst.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

interesting update..looking forward for Arnav and Khushi's meeting...continue soon..

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Uzii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Loved the chapter, i really liked khusi n dhrv bond n also payal in this story is smarter so now arnav is keen to mert the seamstress for his sister n will be in shock to see such a young n beautiful girl.

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anjs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

I am so happy to see you writing again...having missed your stories so much...

While i am very much interested to read this love story...what disturbed me was the fact That Arnav was so so free with Sonakshi...

When i read the prologue, i was sad that Arnav is going to Sonakshi for sex...was hoping that he meets Khushi beforehand, so that he doesnt go ahead with sonakshi...but what u gave us, was a complete googly...that he is not only there since two days...but he is having complete freedom with that pathetic woman...and what more, they are acting like a married couple already...and worse part is, that Khushi has heard them, most probably will know in the next chapter that it was ARnav with Sonakshi...

Honestly, i do accept that Arnav being a man will always have a past, where he is physically involved with more then one woman...but the details you gave here, were, a bit too much to digest...esp how he was staying naked for two whole days in Sonakshi's bedroom...isnt that a little too initmate...more domestic kinda thing...i mean the man moving around naked in the woman's bedroom...ofcourse, the woman will behave like his wife...and despite that he is thinking of staying one more night, for more sex...urgghhh...

sorry if this comment sounds rude...but yea, despite Arnav in all stories having sex with woman other then Khushi, there are somethings which make their bond more strong...and thats the domestic side, which he doesnt share with other women...usually its just the deed, and then Arnav leaves...so here, that part really made me cringe...i mean yes, he doesnt love Sonakshi, and that would make his bond with Khushi , special, ofcourse...but other than that, what...he has sex with multiple woman...so what other physical is special for them...this domesticity, right ? But even that he has already shared with Sonakshi...

I hope I am able to explain what I am feelings...see, all this marriage rituals and all, are superficial things...its this type of free behavior which makes a husband-wife relation special, other than the matter of hearts being involved...even if he has sex with someone else, if he finds that special...and if he behaves as if he is that woman's husband, that there is nothing left to make Arnav-Khushi physical bind more special...right ?

Please, m again saying, dont feel offended, i dont mean to be rude...i love your stories, and always loved the physical part of the relationship, the way you write it...anyways, i think you are also trying to explore this side of this character...so will be eager to see how you give the special treatment to this side of Arnav-Khushi's relation (not the sex part, but the domesticity part).

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ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Mind blowing update loved both parts can't wait for next part specially when arnav khushi meet thank you for pm.

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lin2002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

woow...it was brilliant update..

wen will they meet...eagerly waitg for their meetg

please dont make arnav visit this sonakshi again...plsss...

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Skyfall

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: anjs
I am so happy to see you writing again...having missed your stories so much...
While i am very much interested to read this love story...what disturbed me was the fact That Arnav was so so free with Sonakshi...

When i read the prologue, i was sad that Arnav is going to Sonakshi for sex...was hoping that he meets Khushi beforehand, so that he doesnt go ahead with sonakshi...but what u gave us, was a complete googly...that he is not only there since two days...but he is having complete freedom with that pathetic woman...and what more, they are acting like a married couple already...and worse part is, that Khushi has heard them, most probably will know in the next chapter that it was ARnav with Sonakshi...

Honestly, i do accept that Arnav being a man will always have a past, where he is physically involved with more then one woman...but the details you gave here, were, a bit too much to digest...esp how he was staying naked for two whole days in Sonakshi's bedroom...isnt that a little too initmate...more domestic kinda thing...i mean the man moving around naked in the woman's bedroom...ofcourse, the woman will behave like his wife...and despite that he is thinking of staying one more night, for more sex...urgghhh...

sorry if this comment sounds rude...but yea, despite Arnav in all stories having sex with woman other then Khushi, there are somethings which make their bond more strong...and thats the domestic side, which he doesnt share with other women...usually its just the deed, and then Arnav leaves...so here, that part really made me cringe...i mean yes, he doesnt love Sonakshi, and that would make his bond with Khushi , special, ofcourse...but other than that, what...he has sex with multiple woman...so what other physical is special for them...this domesticity, right ? But even that he has already shared with Sonakshi...

I hope I am able to explain what I am feelings...see, all this marriage rituals and all, are superficial things...its this type of free behavior which makes a husband-wife relation special, other than the matter of hearts being involved...even if he has sex with someone else, if he finds that special...and if he behaves as if he is that woman's husband, that there is nothing left to make Arnav-Khushi physical bind more special...right ?

Please, m again saying, dont feel offended, i dont mean to be rude...i love your stories, and always loved the physical part of the relationship, the way you write it...anyways, i think you are also trying to explore this side of this character...so will be eager to see how you give the special treatment to this side of Arnav-Khushi's relation (not the sex part, but the domesticity part).

Hey, thank you for reading the chapter <3

Of course I am not offended, I am glad to see your thoughts!

Yes I understand that I have shown Arnav in complete different avatars in all my previous stories, which included him not having/or talking about his previous relationships which is why I wanted to do something different in this story.

The thing is as beautiful and pure as it would make to have both Arnav and Khushi be each ohers first love, not every love story happens that way.

His relationship with Sonakshi may seem domestic, but the domestic side is only being shown by Sonakshi. He goes to her house, eats the food prepared by her and listens to her constant chatter of words. He doesn't seem to reciprocate this, and the chapter does state Arnav is uncomfortable with the way she speaks to him a wife.

This means that he hasn't given himself emotionally to her at all, which is why as you'll see as the story continues, that it is the emotional bond between Khushi and Arnav which is what bonds them together, not the domestic side. Even in the show, Anjali/Nani/Lavanya and Mami all looked after Arnav domestically [feeding him/giving him juice/ringing him etc], but it is Khushi that gets through to him, that sees that broken Arnav.

Men don't have to just have sex and walk out of the door, they can still stay for a few hours, eat your food and still won't feel anything for you. Arnav walks around naked, sleeps in Sonakshi's bed and still gets up and leaves because there is no emotional attachment.

Hope you can understand where I am coming from and are not offended <3