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Originally posted by: Simi1711

Ritz!

This was pure perfection.

For a moment, I was lost in that beautiful world of Akansha Villa, where two diametrically opposite yet similar souls were sharing a passionate encounter. Simi, you are a sweetheart...coming from you just bowled me over.☺️..I am just trying dear...can't write like accomplished people here, but I try to write whatever I visualize...I was always good at narration...so that's what I am doing with these ideas.

Man, the misunderstandings, the feelings, the emotions-- all of it was so well portrayed by you.

I am really at a loss of words gal. U r a phenomenal writer and you are too good at explaining the minute details of a story. So much, that a reader is bound to be teleported to the ficverse. Haha yah sure...but I would think I have accomplished the purpose of writing the details, if such thing happens...This story is based on misunderstandings and how they can destroy a relationship...

I m aware that we r in for many storms in the coming updates. And quite rightly I will brace myself as I desperately wait for he next part to greet Us. Yes for sure there are many storms coming their way...

And Simi thanks for reading my humble work🤗

Keep up the good work hon.

Loads of Love 🤗

Simi!

Originally posted by: raji_sudha

Arnav is thinking he want to possess her body but all kushi want to posses his heart.Oh god ridz , The bubble of her sweet dreams almost coming to a bursting point I think.I really felt bad for her.The poor thing almost brought her heart out and saying I love you every now and then arnav keep underestimate the innocent prueness of her word.What he doesn't know is in future he may never hear this that easily . That is for sure...but let me make one thing clear...as I keep on reading about Monster Arnav and his intentions...He was not planning this event either...his plan was to discuss it like a business deal...but now...after this, let's see how he would present it but very important thing is ...he won't knowingly degrade her or hurt her...he would always be very gentle with her...even in anger, pain and hurting, he would treat like some fragile flower. Pls ridz don't make kushi to utter this until arnav realize what he was doing to her.Awesome update as always pls give our update quick can't able to stop my mind which is guessing all the possiblities that may going to happen in next update

Originally posted by: Superthree

Awesome darling! I had a feeling u will, leave us hanging here!! Oh writers and their torturous ways !!! Hi dear, it was not intentional at all...it is just the rant went on in this chapter...if I had continued to the place where I would have liked this part to finish...then the part would have become just too long to enjoy.

Pleeease update soon now loving it... Will try to.😊

Originally posted by: sushan

Oh! my dear what a chapter you left me speechless I am sorry Couldn't comment on last part as I just read both the parts properly . Oh, I am sure it was too much in one go. 😳

Thanks for keeping me in your PM list it means a lot to me. Of course...🤗

Hope there is no misunderstanding in Arnav's mind afterwards . Hope Khushi would clear her relationship status before moving forward but it doesn't look like it will happen. Actually I have not decided yet, if she would be able to clear her status before he reveals his intentions ...but there is a scenario in my head, where she would let him know about breaking off her engagement.

I will come back to write more as I am too overwhelmed after reading 2 parts back to band that is not a complain 😛 actually I loved it😉 It's ok dear. I know it is too much...but thanks🤗

Originally posted by: -BeYourSelf-

Aaarrrhhh y did u stop der..!!!!

I want more...much more... Oye ve! sorry...I would write more in next chapter this way...much more hopefully depending on the mood😳

U left me craving fr dis more.. Well i always feel like d way no matter what how long chapters u post..

Wonderful chapter.. Love love love d part..

But what happens next..!? You would get to know that soon...hopefully.😃

Eager to know..

Originally posted by: Arshi2503

Long and interesting.Thanks!
Why Khushi did not tell him and
Tanu about the engagement truth.When my dear?
She was more confused in taking decisions.I don't she is confused at all.
And Arnav behaved like a possessive That he does.
sadist.What did he mean 'want me some more'? sadist OMG! he most certainly is not.SADIST.

Sorry if I was not able to make the characterization of these two protagonist clear in readers head...That is making me worried as a writer and making me rethink lot of things considering the way I do the writing... 😳
Update soon.

Originally posted by: Isha28

Oh I dont like this Arnav a bit.. Lot of misunderstandings.. Kushi use your brain.. Dont fall a prey to both these men.. I hate Shyam & equally Arnav now :-( Isha, I don't think, I was able to explain the difference between Shyam's feeling for Khushi and Arnav's feelings for her very clearly I guess that almost all the readers have misunderstood this character so severely. I really apologize foe that. Because he most certainly is not like Shyam.

Waiting for the next chapter.. Dont make them sad for too long.. It makes me sad.. Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: renee.bee

I really like this story. Thanks Renee..

Khushi is this real innocent selfless girl. Thanks for recognizing her for what I wanted her to be presented as. A real innocent selfless person. Who couldn't even think bad for a scumbag like Snake.

Snake is as always a scum

However Arnav is mysterious. I agree... well Arnav is also very cautious...He was opening up to her until he heard her conversation that pool party evening.

I hope this is the end of friends for now at least.Yes...that's all done...Next part is only Arnav and Khushi...with only very last few lines with Tanu...

It takes the interest away from the main story.

Also why is Arnav degrading khushi's love. He thinks she is playing with him...

What has he heard on the phone..That most definitely comes out in next part...I promise.

Thanks again😊

Originally posted by: MoonBow.

Res

So much to write.

And esp that silly comment at the end about likes.😡 Oh well I am sorry about that. Something I have weird sense of humor..which is not funny sometimes..Sorry.

So firstly, why is destiny panning things out for them in such a bad way. Like destined to be MU-ed forever and be separated? This misunderstanding would continue and get more but they won't separate forever...
All situations makes Arnav want to doubt Khushi and hate her. Even now, he is totally testing her and not realizing who the real Khushi is. All he seems to desire is sadly only her body and not her soul. Not that I am an expert in a way man thinks, but I think men do think about desires first then more deeper...and I think Arnav already thinks pretty deeply about her but is not able to wrap his head around those feelings yet...I mean if u take that out, I seriously doubt he will chase her anymore. Maybe not today, but he is going to chase her eventually for sure...he can't get her out of his head. Frankly it seems like ALL lust and no love. If this is love, its at its shallowest best. Again a failure on my part then to not be able to bring that anguish and deep yearning he feels for her in front of a reader. I am completely lost in making that more clear at this point. So I would simply agree and apologizing for messing up this character...because he is suppose to have all this possessiveness born out of his deep seated feelings down there in his heart.

Tanu - You promised me this one will marry and fly away but she is hell bent to be around. And so is this slimeball Shyam. Shyam is gone...Tanu would leave too...She has to do one more blunder in 2 parts from this one...and then she goes. All of it is going in circle. Arnav MU khushi, Khushi doesn't know Arnav's real mindset and is stuck in issues, Tanu and her motor mouth on love and complicate things and Shyam in Kelly's arms and in between her legs... Circle goes on and on. My intention was to bring whatever I am writing in next part in this one...But I wanted to make the characters more clear before I do that...But from all the reaction and comments...I think I have confused people more than ever and made this story...sit stagnant...and U know...what happens to stagnant water...it stinks...I guess the newest update will break that up. This is one consummation where im awaiting the shit that Is about to hit the fan and not celebrate their togetherness. I do intend to making this evening very romantic and sweet for both of them...But then I am going to make promises anymore. 😆I want Khushi to be hyper aware of her surroundings and get the F out of it!! If only...but this night is a part of the story...

I loved how she threw the ring, one step away from being the scapegoat. All love for Khushi and none left for Arnav or Tanu or anyone. Awww I can understand that.

PS - The comment on likes. Man, no no! It has ruined my beautiful r'ship with some amazing stories. Cos all the writers are concerned with, is about likes and pages of comments. I mean if u are sick of PMing like 500 folks and u only get 300. Its time to delete the 200 lazy bones off your list and not torture other loyal readers to reach that 500+ likes. I mean how can that even be organic ? Its like doing a survey. I will have to hit the like button before even reading cos apparently that's the way to read more. tsk!! *in my sweet threatening tone* I will hit the stupid like button and no comments if u do it! 😃

Originally posted by: muffin1996

Hopefully nothing goes wrong this time...no matter what..let love do the talking!