[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: The 10 Days Challenge (Moved to Blog) - Page 34

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Thanks for the feedback dear.

Well, when Lavanya sarcastically remarks that she doesn't have time for anyone related to Khushi Gupta, what she means is anyone from the Psychology department., since they are arch rivals of that department.

Sapna is not really Khushi's "best friend" per se, but she is still a friend. And like all the previous chapters have highlighted how Khushi is extremely possessive about her department and is also the CR of the stream, it will only come as a surprise to her when she knows someone from her own stream had backstabbed her and made her helplessly disqualify from the West Gala due to her injured foot.

Hope this clears the confusion :)

Originally posted by: anjs

awesome...but its not Payal...but then how is Sapna related to Khushi... i didnt think Khushi had any other best friend other then Payal n Nk...maybe i need to read all the chapters again...

but m glad Arnav is with her, hope he doesnt hurt her by using himself as a bait to lure Sapna and her truth out.

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Wow!

It would be so much fun to watch Sapna's "sapna" of being with Arnav broken to shreds!😆

Yipppeee!

What a dhasu and mind-boggling update when I had all the reason to claim that it was NK you had to bring out Sapna and make her the traitor. Hayye Ram!

Haye Ram!

Chaan se jo tute koi "Sapna"🤣🥺

And now seriously about the chapter, those three advice are very valuable to anyone who wants to live life among people and thanks for sharing it with the readers. Having dealt with such people at such a young age has taught me not to trust anyone. And Arnav does that only and that is why I love your character build up.

I love your story because in each update you give me a reason to see each character and story in a new light.

Character build up is so very important and you did it so well.

According to me in this SS, Arnav doesn't give a damn about the world, he is emotionally strong for the world but only his loved ones can hurt him just by saying a mere no, his anger is reserved only for irrational decisions or unworthy people and;

Khushi is a person for whom her loved ones matter the most and she can't think of hurting them by

any means, they mean a lot to her. She will be deeply hurt when she comes to know about Sapna and I don't think she will lose her mind like Arnav. She will remain calm and cry.

That's what I analyzed until now about the characters from the story. I hope I'm right in my deduction and I love to read your story and would love to read it till there are the Sun and Moon in the sky.😆

Love,

Saraa😃

Originally posted by: Simi1711

And you hit the bull's eye!👏

😳😆

Well, the reason why I started this chapter by giving a little insight about the culprit's(Sapna's) life is because there are always certain factors that drive us to do what we do.

I don't think it is a spoiler to say that its obvious why Sapna hates Khushi so much, which will be briefly mentioned in the next chapter.

Both Khushi and Sapna are talented individuals.

If you look in retrospect, Sapna was the one who won the Debate competition on Day-1 of of the West Gala Inter-department competition.

And if u go deeper, you will see that Khushi is a control freak and has a certain kind of superiority complex, the same way Sapna has! (As I have mentioned in the beginning of the chapter)

But the demarcation here is that Khushi doesn't let that part of her go over board and is also having her feet on the ground. She gets jealous, insecure, as well as possessive and sad, only because she knows she can't be perfect in everything.

She enjoys the limelight in her department but that doesn't mean that's everything about her.😊

I have made sure to have every character here flawed in some or the other way, because thats what we as humans are. And especially at 19 years old (as the story depicts them) we are far, far away from even the P of Perfect!

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So thanks a lot for understanding my character development so well in this story.😳

It's an added treat when your readers understand your vision so significantly! 😊

Love,

Simi

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Woah! O_O

I didn't even think of it...Kudos to you girl!

If Arnav does that Khushi will be extremely hurt and if that is the case then Simmi will have to extend her SS and make it into an FF or else bring out another Season... which personally I would love to read.

What ifs are ever present my dear and I love to explore them!

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR

loved, loved, simply loved the update!❤️

i really admire the way u have connected each dot and each twist wit the storyline...where the reader is completely in for a twist tats sooo unexpcted...v all were thinking it wud either b lavanya fr her jealous reasons, or payal since she maybe a jealous sibling...or even nk since he loved her...bt never did v think it wud b sapna...

peer pressure and complex in school/college days actually make a person so negative...nd u hav portrayed that beautifully... 👏

cant wait to read more...and also sad tat after 2 more updates tis ss wud be over...