Res!!~
Trust me Baccha, I read the update. And my comment would take me time to type and I have an errand to run. I'm going to get my license. 😉 I'll un-res this as soon as I'm back from there and free okay? 😳
Love you loads.. ❤️
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As and when I was about to un-res this comment, I realized that I still have't read the second chapter of this story but read the third part.. 😳 So I went back and read the second chapter. And man did it take me time to read? Though the chapter was small in length, the emotions in it caught up to me real good Baccha.
Trust me, I had to dab down the urge to bawl my eyes out. It may sound kinda weird that after reading the third chapter where it was clear as crystal that Khushi is dead, reading second chapter shouldn't have that effect which just declared her death officially. As I said, it was all about how you've written the chapter that had it's effect on me.
I said this before, I'm saying it now, I'll say it again tomorrow too. And dare you deny it. You're an amazing writer. You've a gifted talent in bringing out the emotions of people into words so beautifully and perfectly that I can really feel what Arnav felt that moment after hearing to the doctor.
Though you made this third chapter a bit normal with the family visit to orphanage, and Arnav noticing a girl who's just like Khushi and all, I still didn't feel it okay. The feeling of Khushi not being present in the frame when the phrase 'the whole family' is present in the context is such a void and turn off I tell you. I have felt it all though the update.
But but... ahaan! I still didn't accept to the fact that Khushi is dead. I have a clear sense that says this is all a drama which is a ploy by someone who's very much into avenging Arnav. I have this knack feeling that says that the girl with Arnav isn't Khushi at all. Now now now.. hear out my reasoning okay?
I agree the second chapter had me to tears by the end of it, but it has also been the light that helped this seed of doubt grow out of the soil now. Arnav and any of the family members didn't see the dead body, which is apparently of Khushi's neither were the final rituals done by them. So what proof is that Khushi is the one who died?
Let me tell my view of story now? Maybe the one who they found beside Arnav at the accident spot is not Khushi? Maybe the accident was deliberate and they have kidnapped Khushi and kept some faceless body in that place whose face is very much destroyed along with some things of Khushi which will prove that the person lying dead is Khushi? As Arnav didn't see Khushi too, maybe he don't know about it at all?
I have a very strong feeling that my assumptions maybe correct. Because, it's not like Khushi is killed by someone while someone is trying to hurt Arnav or something to make it look suspicious? It was a normal accident of vehicle collision. At least it was shown such. And I don't think Khushi can be just dead in an accident like this? Don't ask me why, I just think so...
Hmm.. now it's up to you to tell me how much wrong I am? Or Correct? I'm eager to know about it actually.. so tell me?
Will be waiting for the next chapter Baccha..
Loads of love to you..
Hugs and tight wale Jhappis, 🤗
Yours,
- Vampire ❤️
Edited by ...Champ... - 9 years ago
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