Arhi OS : The Break

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Loved the intensity and the passion simmering between Arnav-Khushi. Just how much I loved it!!
I didn't know that you'll come back with such crackling passion once you come back after a break. Not that I'm complaining. 😉
Anyone would take a break if they have a partner like ASR who is expert in eye-sex and in this case much more than eye-sex 😉😳 The good thing which came out from this break was that both of them realised and confessed their feelings. As the song goes - dooriyaan bhi hain zaruri😛

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@rotten.tomato

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Too cute for words minty!

I loved every damn thing in this..starting with banner to the way the story progressed. A jealous khushi was a treat to read..and Arnav was charming as ever. I can actually visualize the scene where arnab deliberately trying to rile khushi up..oh the beauty of it.

Awh..dorable to say the least <3

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hey dear...this is my first comment on your story
That was such a wonderful os
So khushi decided to take a break from their relationship.and then she was jealous to see arnav with someone else.loved the way Arnav was trying to make her feel jealous.that was really cute.
Truly loved it
I liked your writing style a lot.If you don't mind plz add me in your buddy list and pm me the next time you update.I'll send you a buddy request.

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Absolutely loved this Break after a long break by you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏

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hema

@Itsflora

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

awww..
the last line got me.shoo..take a break..
cuteee

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Hi Mints

lovely OS reading ,for the second time

Love
Anna

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

I am giving you a break.
So go on enjoy and come up with another cute story.

Love
Anna

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ipkkndkasr

@ipkkndkasr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Awesome OS dear... 😊

Some times the break we wish to sort out few things just complicates more...!!!

keep writing this kind of stories dear...

All the best

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Haayyeee... such an adorable OS Minty... how i miss you sweet stories... u too need to take a break from your very very long break... ab toh wapas aajao yaar...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 9 years ago