Arhi OS : The Break

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Mints23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ohoo please take as many breaks as you want. I mean if you keep coming with such awesome stuff, I wouldn't mind at all. Not a bit. But this was such awesome stuff and you reserve this and don't show me? Wow just awesome. *Note the sarcasm*

This was intensively passionate. Yeah and too hot! I mean I have always assumed something like this might happen to Khushi. You know when the fiery clash happens. She took a break like you and boy that was a comeback. I always love a pissed off Khushi and jealous one. And so sexy red flaming saree. And then they make up. You could have made it make out too.

And this was so cute and fiery. And first person so we get all Khushi's ramblings. Something I always loved since I can totally relate to it. Anyhow I give you 10/10 for this. Yay loved it!

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 9 years ago

Pehle toh I couldn't stop laughing because a jealous Khushi and a smirking Arnav are simply perfect. And when the roles reverse, I so have a ball. And when Sheetal gets into the picture, it's like a cherry on the top. Ye chhodo..

But a break!! Only Khushi could come up with such a concept and only Arnav could let her have the final say. But then I totally agree with Khushi when she says that the break was important, for her atleast because it gave her the space to sort out her muddled up thoughts. It gave her a clear picture of how unwanted her life will be without this sexy man in her life. And I am glad she took the right decision.

Par isn't this Arnav like very cute?? I so kept fawning over him. His confession was so straightforward and yet so soothing.

Considering this was their biggest fight till date, I wonder how their patch-up session must have been. 😳

And now I understand why Sadhu said this OS was the best one. Over-drive mein chala gaya iska dimag!!!!!!!

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Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

loved the os👏

the passion, the intensity, the emotions, ufff

thank you for the pm😃

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is so my type wala OS. Oh how I loved Khushi's thoughts, and how badly I wanted to read his side of story too.

Its already flippin hot in here okay?

Hot. Hot. Hot.

Damn these two adorable pumpkin-pies always drives me to the edge. And Minion, I have always read your beautiful, romantice and close to poetry-like stories. This was a first for me to realize how beautifully you wrote the sensual scenes, of course from Khushi's POV.

Loved the last part. Especially Khushi shooing us away. Yeah righ! 😆

Keep up the hot work. I cant wait to read the third OS.

bubye!

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pooja2525

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow! Loved the OS! Could feel their heat, passion, love and all things tingling right through to my heart!

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

that was a very nice perspective of taking a 'break'...a break always does not mean parting ways but yet if the break is stretched far too long than the breaking of hearts cannot be avoided..I am glad Arnav and Khushi bid goodbye to their break and have taken a plunge in their love...Khushi and Arnav are in a relationship yet there are differences, but once the three magical words of love are spoken the differences are ought to take a back seat and love takes the front seat guiding them and that is what happened...nothing else matters if there is love and nothing else mattered to Arnav, Khushi too, these two got their happily ever after, their togetherness with their blissful love...that was so lovely...fabulous os...

Edited by MysticRiver - 9 years ago