OS : The Curious Case of Shyam Manohar Jha

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shyamwa pe full fledged OS let me read and come back

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

Though i never saw the show you portrayed everything beautifully.👏

Thanks for the pm dear

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

You are a great writer 👏 this OS was brilliantly written weaving shyam's little tales of how the people around him, the situation and oh the air too, everything was so insensitive to him😆 bechara!

Beautifully written

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Prabhleen Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow !!!!! Mind Blowing ...
Different though ...
You expressed Shyam's thoughts beautifully ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ...

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Arshi67

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Posted: 9 years ago

What a wonderful depiction of that scene!
I loved the twist you had of SMJ attempting to turn into a new leaf influenced by paternal love, quite the opposite of what had happened in the show.
His was indeed a very curious case. Much more potential than the single dimensional villain portrayed.
His almost clinical and detached assessment of Anjali was really spot on.
Very well written OS :)

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor
Though i never saw the show you portrayed everything beautifully.👏
Thanks for the pm dear

Thanks a lot! 😆

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles
You are a great writer 👏 this OS was brilliantly written weaving shyam's little tales of how the people around him, the situation and oh the air too, everything was so insensitive to him😆 bechara!
Beautifully written

Thank you so much for the lovely comment!! So glad you like it! 😊

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 7APK
Wow !!!!! Mind Blowing ...
Different though ...
You expressed Shyam's thoughts beautifully ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ...

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Thank you so much!! ❤️