ARSHI FF : Hues of Agony (Chapter 9 posted!) | (Blog Link Up!)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey, guys! I'm Diksha. I've been writing about our beloved Arnav and Khushi for a long time now but I never really posted my stories anywhere. This is an FF I started writing a few weeks ago and couldn't stop myself from sharing with all of you. It's an intense love story though I'll try making it a little lighter later. I hope you like it!!

Please Buddy me if you'd like to receive PMs about updates. 😊

The blog for Hues is also up! You can check it out here:

Hues of Agony Blog


INDEX



Chapter 1 - posted below

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

OS : The Curious Case of Shyam Manohar Jha

Crossover : Renascence

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hehehe!
This...finally!
I am just so happy that you posted this and now, I am going to proceed to leave a really LONGGG comment, longer than the one I had left when I read this the first time😉
When I finally started to read this, it again sucked me in, and this time I paid attention to the details and use of language.
I loved how you described Sheesh Mahal and the warmth of the whole scene as Khushi sat in front of him, and then of course the mirrors and his fascination with them.
Also, what I loved so much about this chapter was that it was unbelievably gripping. I wanted to read more, just like I had last time, the only difference being that I HAVE already read that😆
But also, it is wonderful how you have described his contradictory feelings and his need to hate her and not being able to let her image go from his mind, that's beautiful!
The most amazing of all is Khushi's smile and him running away! God, I love Gupta❤️
Hope he stops hating her, poor ASR!
Update jaldii!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was truly a wonderful start Dikshu... 😊
I really loved this format of yours with flashback alongwith the present... ❤️
But I'm really eager to know what made Arnav hate Khushi so much when what the flashback says is he was irrevocably in love with this lively and divine creature from the very first sight...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8520NK

Hehehe!

This...finally!
I am just so happy that you posted this and now, I am going to proceed to leave a really LONGGG comment, longer than the one I had left when I read this the first time😉
When I finally started to read this, it again sucked me in, and this time I paid attention to the details and use of language.
I loved how you described Sheesh Mahal and the warmth of the whole scene as Khushi sat in front of him, and then of course the mirrors and his fascination with them.
Also, what I loved so much about this chapter was that it was unbelievably gripping. I wanted to read more, just like I had last time, the only difference being that I HAVE already read that😆
But also, it is wonderful how you have described his contradictory feelings and his need to hate her and not being able to let her image go from his mind, that's beautiful!
The most amazing of all is Khushi's smile and him running away! God, I love Gupta❤️
Hope he stops hating her, poor ASR!
Update jaldii!!!!




Yipeee... Hehe
Thank you sooo much!!
Not just for the comment but also for sitting on my head and demanding an update every time I emailed you a chapter.. I would never have been able to post this if you hadn't given me the encouragement you did.. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much!😊
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Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

It was truly a wonderful start Dikshu... 😊

I really loved this format of yours with flashback alongwith the present... ❤️
But I'm really eager to know what made Arnav hate Khushi so much when what the flashback says is he was irrevocably in love with this lively and divine creature from the very first sight...


Thanks a lot, Priyanka!! I really appreciate that you read this!😊
But you'll have to wait to know the reason for Arnav's hatred.. Hehe
After all, you've been killing me with suspense for such a long time.. With two FFs, not to mention😡
But thanks, again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great start...
the flashbacks was really so sweet..
but the suspense factor really gripped me...the memories...unable to hate her..but trying hard to hate her😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all congratulations for the start of ur new story!!!
It was beautiful!You have explained ninor details so well dear!!plz continue it and send me pms!
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey,this concept sounds really intresting.waiting to read more and pls continue and do not stop.a lot of people here quit their stories after posting a amazing intros :(

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