ARSHI FF : Hues of Agony (Chapter 9 posted!)

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: seshatree
nicely written...

Thanks! 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: .MissStubborn.
This is a masterpiece👏

Aw I wouldn't call it that! But thanks.. 😃

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: shils28
Awesome update!! 👏❤️

Thank you!! 😊❤️

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PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Uzii
Just read your story n found it quite interesting n mysterious so plz continue

Thanks a lot for reading and for the great comment! I'll be continuing soon (today, in fact! 😆)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Prabhleen Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳 😳

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Penny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

That was pretty intense.

The whole engagement scenes and how it affected both of them. A sweet memory that had been soured by their cruel realities. I love Ananya already for being so supportivee for her friend. For being there by her side when no one was around. I feel we will see more of her around!! The update highlighted their inner conflict. Both avoid the same things coz of the harsh memories, which in turns ups the hole suspense element. The whole build up seems very intriguing.

There kiss. A different time. Innocent times. It felt very pure. I wonder why Khushi was sad in the first place. Also, her equation with her dad as well. A lot of blanks!

Ah! Finally, they came across each other. A confrontation is inevitable! Seems like some fireworks are In stored for us.

Diksha, I really love your writing style. It seems quite mature and pro for someone your age. Your writings have expressions which leaves us wanting for more ..

Can't wait for the next update :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Loved chapter 4 👏
Thank you for the pm 😃
Eager for the next part 😃

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Uzii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Lovely chapter I wonder what khusi did in the past that she ruined everything n now she is loathing herself everyday but at that time she was a child so really anxious to read further.