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stories.1408

@stories.1408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Plz allow me on ur blog.can't wait for the final part.

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anime_gal

@anime_gal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

dear,

Limon, just came across this story randomly, but must say it was tooo good.

Each chapter was heartfelt, Kushi's character . this was too good, once started couldnt stop to finish it.

But the end Chapter 9 was in Blog,

can you PM the link for Blog.

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kalai83

@kalai83

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Beautiful story .read it in a go was wonderful.waiting for the last part .pm me

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Sheetal

@Prettycool

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Hi waiting to read part 10 .. I have sent you request on PM for blog :) waiting

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#765

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133704355

Edited here.

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: MoonBow.
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Okay I loved the ending. It lived up to the dramatic start. YAY!
Besides that I simply enjoyed how u kept arnavji and didn't change it to arnav. I have an issue when some writers change it in the midst just cos she got educated.. I liked the sweet and simple Akash with khushi. Reminded me of the ride he gave to her when khushi got drenched in car park in show. (blaming the pic, heehe) Interweaving EJ dialogues and his dream came true.

Shravan got his sanchi lol. Lemme imagine khushi's face for her.

Only qualm... Didn't like Aman one bit. Too overbearing, Was very annoying instead. Instead of Anjali influencing I felt Aman was doing it. Glad he was kept to minimum 😆Just my pov.

Aww, Nish! Thanks! 😳

I love, love, love that EJ dialogue. That was my fav bit and I have used it in my EJ OS Ohana before too. 😆

Yes, Aman was a bit annoying here. I am sorry I didn't get to explore the other characters more in this SS, so you might feel a bit of disconnect with them sometimes. Short of making this 25 chapters long, this was the best I could do. And to think this was originally supposed to be just a OS!! What was I thinking!! But, Aman is Team Khushi all the way! In my mind, the more Khushi strived to make her life better, the more Aman got protective of her. In fact, I think, if Khushi and Shravan were more than just friends, it would have been Aman who would be the most supportive of her choice...against his own wife and BIL/boss/best friend.

Hope that gives a little bit of my perspective.

Love,
Limon.

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Thanks for the blog link & for such an emotional update

Finally Arshi are together❤️

Beautiful sentimental song love it

Comment also on blog😉

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Brain_storm

@Brain_storm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#768

Heyy there

I yesterday came across your story. Read first 4-5 parts and then got busy on something and read the other parts today.

This whole story was almost like what IPK should or could have been. The way you described emotions of EVERYONE here,it was beautiful and felt so real.

You are proo at writing intense scenes.

Arnav and khushi deserve their fairy tale wala hamesha after whatall they went through.

I could not read chap 9 as i did not notice the note u posted earlier. I read it now, when i was looking for final part 😆

I hope the reason for yur shifting yur work is not plagiarism. I hope no writer has to face this.EVER.

Please if possible, notify me abt the blog link. I wish to read the ending of this arnav and khushi <3

cheers :)

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: limoncello

Aww, Nish! Thanks! 😳

I love, love, love that EJ dialogue. That was my fav bit and I have used it in my EJ OS Ohana before too. 😆

Yes, Aman was a bit annoying here. I am sorry I didn't get to explore the other characters more in this SS, so you might feel a bit of disconnect with them sometimes. Short of making this 25 chapters long, this was the best I could do. And to think this was originally supposed to be just a OS!! What was I thinking!! But, Aman is Team Khushi all the way! In my mind, the more Khushi strived to make her life better, the more Aman got protective of her. In fact, I think, if Khushi and Shravan were more than just friends, it would have been Aman who would be the most supportive of her choice...against his own wife and BIL/boss/best friend.

Hope that gives a little bit of my perspective.

Love,
Limon.

I feel he was keeping khushi away from arnav. Instead of truly letting her choose. Cos he was being over protective. Thats what I got. So yeah. Nvm I enjoyed my ArHi way too much.. And when are you writing a new piece? I can't wait!! 😃

Your blog looks awesome btw. I haven't recalled my password. If I do I would comment from there henceforth.

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#770

Hi again,

Phew!! At this time, I am done responding to all the PMs, scraps and the replies here on this thread. If you have sent me a message and haven't heard from me, please PM me again. Also, some people might have gotten more than one PM. Apologies for that.

Also, please PM me for the link from here on forward. It is easier for me to keep track of who I have replied to.

Thanks for the response and see you on the blog.

Love,
Limon.