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Superbbb ... You Nailed it ... Keep Writing
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WOW. This was GRANDEUR in its truest sense.
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Read it at one go !
Such an awesome story !
Loved it <3
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Originally posted by: love2sarun

Read it at one go !
Such an awesome story !
Loved it <3
Keep up the good work :)


Thank you so much! 😳
Glad you liked it!
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E P I L O G U E

Sims, what a beautiful journey you had taken us on. Everything tied up and brought to a full circle in a beautiful manner, only a wholesome writer like you could have achieved it so effortlessly in measured chapters. What a satisfactory ending for a reader. I loved reading how Arnav and Khushi were felt connected despite of never meeting each other.
My heart turned over seeing Arnav's gesture to give time to Khushi to heal...because he was in love with her already before meeting her in actual, it was her turn this time. This guy just won me over.
Ending part and naming their little chubbs as Aria was ❤️...
I can just keep on gushing...But Sims, you got a fan hon.🤗
I haven't started with your other story yet...Too wrapped up in my mess right now...but I would love to read the sinner.😆

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R❤️
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E P I L O G U E

Sims, what a beautiful journey you had taken us on. Everything tied up and brought to a full circle in a beautiful manner, only a wholesome writer like you could have achieved it so effortlessly in measured chapters. What a satisfactory ending for a reader. I loved reading how Arnav and Khushi were felt connected despite of never meeting each other.
My heart turned over seeing Arnav's gesture to give time to Khushi to heal...because he was in love with her already before meeting her in actual, it was her turn this time. This guy just won me over.
Ending part and naming their little chubbs as Aria was ❤️...
I can just keep on gushing...But Sims, you got a fan hon.🤗
I haven't started with your other story yet...Too wrapped up in my mess right now...but I would love to read the sinner.😆

Love,
R❤️


Yay, Ritz! That coming from someone like you is so beautiful. 🤗
I have been a fan of yours ever since I started reading BBB, and so you liking this piece is just inexplicably amazing. ❤️

I would love to hear your feedback on The Sinner.
Take your time.
That anyway is a sinfully wicked story.. Hehe😆

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Simi
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Originally posted by: Simi1711


Yay, Ritz! That coming from someone like you is so beautiful. 🤗
I have been a fan of yours ever since I started reading BBB, and so you liking this piece is just inexplicably amazing. ❤️

I would love to hear your feedback on The Sinner.
Take your time.
That anyway is a sinfully wicked story.. Hehe😆

Love,
Simi


Ohhh! giving my evil smile...I love sinful stories..DAMN...Ler me get my s**t together here...😆..I am looking forward to do some erotica on them...not dark...but simply decadent and sensual with my usual emotional drama...😆
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Originally posted by: matosarah


Ohhh! giving my evil smile...I love sinful stories..DAMN...Ler me get my s**t together here...😆..I am looking forward to do some erotica on them...not dark...but simply decadent and sensual with my usual emotional drama...😆


Oh my, my. ☺️
Can't wait.
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Originally posted by: Simi1711


Oh my, my. ☺️
Can't wait.


Hehe Indeed...yah that ain't happening for a while...I get very nervous putting sensual stuff here.☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
^ Oh my god.
U r just like me then.

Whenever I DO pen down something sensuous, I make it a point to never go back to that line/stanza again, because once I did and all I could do after that was fall in a pool of embarrassment asking myself "Hawww...how could u even write something like that?" 🤣

So now, I write as it comes, and at the time of proof reading those paragraphs, I go like a bullet train to only look for synatx errors


*confessions of a stupid writer* 🤣

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