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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Waiting eagerly Didu... Please update as soon as possible

Will do sweetie 😳

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Arshi2503
Fabulous update with soul searching poems
and lot of information on Titanic.

Tysm!

I love it when people get my poems 😆

And yeah, the Titanic facts have always been fascinating 😳

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Hello again Simi,

Another mind blowing update. So everything is now out in the open...Arnav is aware of the violent Ryan Roy and how he treats his fiance. And Khushi is reconciled to the fact that she will need to put up with more terrible treatment from that beast. Thank you for all the amazing information on the Titanic and White Starline. I have always been obsessed with the Titanic, as have many of us here, I am sure. Arnav wants to finish it all, he wants to free Khushi from that demon's clutches. But is all this as easy as he thinks? Will Khushi stand up and fight the beast herself...I certainly wish you will show us that she is much more than some "Bharahvi sadee kee abala nahee" . I dare say Arnav will jump into rescue her. Even at the cost of killing him! Ah, love this. take a bow, girl!👏❤️

Best,

Anu

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Anu567
Hello again Simi,
Another mind blowing update. So everything is now out in the open...Arnav is aware of the violent Ryan Roy and how he treats his fiance. And Khushi is reconciled to the fact that she will need to put up with more terrible treatment from that beast. Thank you for all the amazing information on the Titanic and White Starline. I have always been obsessed with the Titanic, as have many of us here, I am sure. Arnav wants to finish it all, he wants to free Khushi from that demon's clutches. But is all this as easy as he thinks? Will Khushi stand up and fight the beast herself...I certainly wish you will show us that she is much more than some "Bharahvi sadee kee abala nahee" . I dare say Arnav will jump into rescue her. Even at the cost of killing him! Ah, love this. take a bow, girl!👏❤️

Best,

Anu

Thanks for the lovely words like always dear :)

Stay tuned for the next update!

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#355

I truly loved the way arnav declared about his feeling if Khushi were to be his fiance..

and that Ryan Roy he is too proud of himself but he has just met the wrong guy, who wouldn't bow down to him no matter what and will take whatever is his..

Continue soon

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

Fantastic update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

fantastic update

OMG! Ryan presence is extremely annoying. When will Khushi get rid of him?!

Can't wait to read more.

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
fantastic update
OMG! Ryan presence is extremely annoying. When will Khushi get rid of him?!
Can't wait to read more.

@bold- Soonish 😉😳

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#359

Chapter 1

Simi, I swear, I am feeling short for words now, It is a brilliant writing for sure. The way you have described Khushi and her helplessness, I teared a bit. Ahh! poor soul caught in a very unsavory relationship because of the responsibilities we can upon ourselves. I am sure her father would have never wanted her to suffer. She should know that if these type of people never learn. This nature of Ryan is a disease, an incurable one.

Arnav is like a dream. Your description was so apt to this hunk in my head.

Loved it.🤗

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#360

Chapter 2

Simi, their first meeting was described so beautifully, Ahh! two damaged souls. I am really curious to know about Arnav, he is certainly carrying lot of weight, to inflict self mutilation. Ohh! But their conversation was so spontaneous and easy as if they knew each other from before.

The way you have incorporated the folklore was awesome, each word when I read, I think there is a purpose behind it. haha!

Completely enchanted by this tale dear girl.🤗