Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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Fatima1422

@Fatima1422

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#391

God ... This is excellent writing and wonderful story line
It has been a while scinse I came cross a good FF
Love it so far ... Thank you
Please continue

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 9 years ago

#392

Thanks for a great update.

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rashmi

@anamika00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Beautiful update...but one small confusion sasi seen garima with aravind when their marriage got fixed..but that time Payal's age is 6 right...so when was akash born...

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Fatima1422

@Fatima1422

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#394

Love it ... Can you please translate the sentences in indian to english

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enlightenme

@enlightenme

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#395

Another parallel hero of this tale the Akash Singh Raizada. You have certainly developed the tale better than the creatives could do.

Akash had lived a life where he had always been indebted to the people for their acceptance and love. His blind love and devotion for his brother earned him a brother who would always back him, but in this process he lost himself, his right to make a choice for himself. At many instances he had been played at and taken granted for by Arnav to make the ends meet.

Now, that ASR is coming to win Arnav's Khushi, he will have to face her family along with a brother who would take a stand for his sister. Now, Khushi has nothing to fear of and ASR has nothing to blackmail her with.

Bring it on, looking forward to the next update.

Edited by enlightenme - 9 years ago

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#396

oh god...loads of disturbing secrets...would it be perfect...

an amazing story

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#397

This is such a painful story!! I was thinking of Arnav Khushi while listening to Khari Khari (coke studio version by Amit Trivedi).. Can't wait for next one!