Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#231

GReat story and raw writing. Quite an emotional and gut-wrenching story.

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#232

A perfect song for Arnav's POV

Meri har khushi mein ho teri khushi
Mohabbat mein aisa zaroori nahi
Tu jab milna chaahe, naa mill sakun
Na milna mera koi doori nahi

Mohabbat hai yeh ji huzoori nahi (x6)

Aa...

Hmm.. meri har khushi mein ho teri khushi
Mohabbat mein aisa zaroori nahi
Mmm.. meri har khushi mein ho teri khushi
Mohabbat mein aisa zaroori nahi
Tu jab milna chaahe, na mil sakun
Na milna mera koi doori nahi, Ji haan!

Mohabbat hai yeh ji hazuri nahi - ji haan! (x4)

Mujhko ehsaas hai par main kehta nahi
(Mohabbat hai yeh jee hazoori nahi)
Paas pehle ke jitna main rehta nahi
(Mohabbat hai yeh jee hazoori nahi)

Yeh takaza hai mere haalaat ka
Lena dena hai nahi
Kuch bhi jazbaat ka
Ye sach baat main tujhse keh raha
Na aayi hai inme zara bhi kami - ji haan!

Mohabbat hai yeh ji huzoori nahi - ji haan! (x4)

(Ji haan!)
Tujhko manaana mujhe toh mujhe aata nahi
Mohabbat hai yeh jee hazuri nahi
Par ye nahi ki tujhe main chahta nahi
Mohabbat hai yeh jee hazuri nahi

Waqt badla hai zara sa
Main wohi hoon jaan-e-jaan
Kaise tujhko baat main ye
Samjhaaun saathiyaa..

Kaise khush tujhe rakhun nahi pata
Par chahta hoon tere labon pe hansi

Ji haan!
Mohabbat hai yeh ji hazoori nahi (x4)

Hmm..
meri har khushi me ho teri khushi - ji haan!
Mohabbat mein aisa zaroori nahi
Meri har khushi mein ho teri khushi - ji haan!
Mohabbat mein aisa zaroori nahi
Tu jab milna chaahe, na mil sakun
Na milna mera koi doori nahi - ji haan!

Mohabbat hai yeh ji huzuri nahi - ji haan! (x4)

Meri har khushi mein, ho teri khushi
Mohabbat mein aisa zaroori nahi
Tu jab milna chaahe, na mill sakun
Na milna mera koi duri nai.

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Awesome update dear please update soon

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muffin1996

@muffin1996

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Just caught up with this story...And read it in one go...could not stop myself..its too good and contagious

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Syeda Buraira

@cj-the-fool

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

ur ff is impeccable u brought depth to various side characters...u made their relationships more realistic...this chapter was fantastic as usual..i absolutely loved reading it...my sympathies lie with khushi but i have an elder cousin who made me understand arnavs POV. she is a traditional woman with anjali like beliefs but a doctor..her explanations made me realise arnavs behaviour better and this particular chapter made me pity him. thanks a lot 4 sending PM. u r too kind. i shall stalk this thread plz don't bother urself by sending me PMs...u r already doing me a favour by letting me read this amazing story..i absolutely adore this ff..

P.S. i keep on watching preet video repeatedly,,,that is a wonderful video with exceptionally well scenes...u did a phenomenal job

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Shilpi

@shils28

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Brilliant update!! Loved it! 👏❤️

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Fantastic update

Thanks for the pm

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Aanchal

@aanchu19

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Finally an update of perfectly flawed...you know I thought you are going to put this story on hiatus but thankfully you updated it. When I started reading this SS I was impressed by your analysis of each character.

Till part five we have seen Khushi, Arnav, Garima, Anjali and Akash character sketch. I love how you describe their emotions behind their actions. Khushi, who is angry with Arnav yet called Anjali to check on him, just like perfect loving wife; Arnav contemplating on his past actions and missing his lady love, Anjali like an elder sister gave advice to her brother rather pushing him into to do anything as per her wishes; an understanding Babuji; but according to me Akash outburst was the best. You beautifully showed his perspective on how and why he agrees on everything as his bhai says. This shows pure trust and respect he has for Arnav, not like a spineless man who let his wife abused by his mother.

I like two scenes in part five update. One is when Khushi went to Gupta house everyone start questioning her instead of inviting her in and her heart asked if she ever invited in her house without questions or not and Anjali, Akash and Arnav confrontation about the whole contract marriage. We never saw these three like this.

I would love to read more from you. Hope you will update soon.

Thank you for the PM.

Take care

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Brilliant update !!

The truth hurts a lot...And now that the truth is out will it make their belief in their love and marriage more strong or shatter their hopes for a happily ever after. ...How will Arnav collect his shattered pieces of life and mend broken hearts...will khushi understand the unspoken truth or state him guilty for his actions. ..So eager to read more ...No matter what when you love someone unconditionally you love him with all his flaws...Love is Arnav khushi hamesha...