Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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sankadevi25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Loved all the chapters! Redemption fics are some of my FAVV, can't wait to read more!

Khushi is by far my favorite in your story--I'm so glad you've written her as someone strong enough to leave Arnav <3

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shafqee80

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

It is so nyc something strong on sheetal track ...liking it...

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lara3110

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Update soon. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

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mhd72

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Absolutely wonderful piece of work!! Like most of the readers, I have been fortunate to read some wonderful stories and would say for myself, this is, one of the ' Flawlessly Perfect' piece written, in terms of the psyche of our beloved ppl, Arnav and Khushi.

I am loving it even more coz, you have managed to delve in deeper, into the psyche of Khushi as well, which is equally refreshing. Also, doing so, you managed to introduce different perspective to the facets of their personality.

And the cherry on the cake would be, your writing style. All put together, makes it a riveting read, for sure.

Do continue soon and pm me.

Much love,

Mili.

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dair10arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Hats off to you! I am clean bowled with the intensity of this FF. Khushi... The way she stood up! Her final words during the phone call just pierced my heart! Arnav's interlude is sad as well. But khushi was his oasis.. The one he didn't use!
I can't wait to read what happens next! I hope there's more... Please tell me there's more! It s been a month since your last update. This is the first time I have come across your work!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: 0913155
Wowooo awesome superb amazing interesting update loveddd it plz cont soon thanks for pm😆

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: welcomebro
first time i read difference b/w asr and arnav in well scripted...👏

Thank u so much dear

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Gr8 update

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: nandrajogdivya
Awesome superb

Thanks!!! 😳

Originally posted by: casker
Loved the update. till he thinks with his ASR mind about Kushi you will be all alone Arnav. Feels sorry about Arnav but more than that I value kushi's respect and dignity. So no sorry for u Arnav.

Thank u so much for your valuable comment dearie. As I said - this isn't a clarification shit for Arnav... this is just about his life... and it is very difficult to overcome trauma at childhood. :/ It doesn't justify his treatment to Khushi... it only justifies how much he has been broken in his life :)

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Savera84
How many variants can we create out of Arshi?
Each one is different from the other and each one is unique in its own right.
We can still relate them to original ASR/Arnav and Khushi, which is simply amazing.
Brilliantly written. Thank you.
Cheers...

Thanks a ton! True... IPK had potential much beyond what it was expected to be :)

Originally posted by: abivicky86
How beautiful ly you have written. I don't have any words to say such a detail ed insight and in-depth analysis of arnav yu have done. He should realize he can't take things for granted .and good blackmailing kushi also won't work let's see what he does

Thank u so much for your comment! Thank you... yep, everything takes time and for Arnav - it was heartbreaking for both :(

Originally posted by: kkrnightriders
Brilliantly written 👏
Arnav's inner turmoil was penned down beautifully.The way his insecurities,emotions,vulnerabilities was shown gave a deeper insight to his character.
Indeed he had a bad past but he is not the lone sufferer!Now he is lonely due to his own deeds,why blame others.He is still so blind in his anger.Still instead of apologising,he is threatening khushi to return.I totally loved khushi's reply.But hope she is fine.
Arnav loved his nani more than anjali was something new and different.The way nani made arnav realize the importance of his name was just amazing.Also ref to Alexander was apt.
Khushi was always an open challenge to ASR bcoz he was not as strong as he claimed to be.He just wanted to prove he is superior.The distinction between Arnav and ASR was shown brilliantly.
Be it ASR or Arnav,khushi always accepted him with all the flaws but he was the one who was imposing his principles on her.
Its hightime he should regret his deeds and apologise to khushi.
But currently he should keep aside his anger and listen to what his heart says,that will really help him making a wise decision bcoz his heart is dominated by arnav not ASR.
Waiting eagerly for next part.

LOVED THE VM. It was so beautifully created👍🏼

Dear, thank you so so so much! I can't tell you how much your words helped me - like boosted me to write so much more! Well Arnav has had his share of ghosts of the past - haunting his future. You see, it happens to be easy for us to point at his wrong because we know what's right... people like Arnav don't know :( But I am glad you loved the difference between Arnav and ASR :) Now since this is going the realistic way *am trying* there won't be an overnight change in Arnav... but a change I promise!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Prettycool
Nice

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Originally posted by: SirenMitra
Mind Blowing... His past still haunting him along with his present...
Fighting between ASR and Arnav is getting worse.. I hope he will understand what he is really wants... Superb and Awesome!!

Thank you so so so much! I am so glad you aren't demonizing Arnav but understanding him - that means a great lot for me :)

Originally posted by: rosalineak
Amazing...
Relived the past again...
Hope he understands what he needs the most,hope he chooses love over ASR...
Update soon...

Thank you so much! Arnav knows what he needs, he just doesn't know how... :)

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: narmathabiju21
Nice story. ...no sad ending please

Haha, am a sucker for happy endings so don't worry about that!

Originally posted by: smat
Amazing

Can't wait to read the next update to see what he will do to get her back . As so far blackmailing hasn't worked.

Enjoyed reading it

Thanks for the beautifully written update

Thank you so much! Well Khushi isn't just a deal to be bought back... perhaps something more has to be done...

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm VM
Loved It
Magical
Watched it thrice
Thanks for the PM

Thanks a ton dearie! Glad you loved the VM

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
Brilliant updtae.
Arnav's inner turmoil was penned beautifullyan I loved the VM too. His past still haunting him along with his past.

Thank you so much! It really means a lot for me when you all enjoy what i love writing - so thank you

Originally posted by: spilla
Awesome

Thanks!

Originally posted by: bungeejump
A complex insight! They are the same man but the difference is striking... Who is going to come out on top? Or will Khushi compromise? Very well written!

Thanks a ton dear! Now that's one heck of an interesting question! To know that... stay tuned 😉