EK JASHN OS: ETERNAL FLAME - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Beautiful os...loved it...!!!!
Specially the way you gave twist to the story they showed us in ek jashna and created this awesome piece of writing...!!!!
Thank you for pm...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS dear.
Loved the stage and the outfits too...
I can understand his insecurity which made him or you can say force him not to celebrate his anniversaries...I love his perfect third wedding gift for his Khushi. He made her feel special on their special day. Loved the way he celebrated his big day with a big good news in his own way. It was simply magical...seems we are watching a movie.
Thanks for writing Ek Jashn OS.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

bookmarking😉

i loved it...Arnavs insecurity which made him or force him to not to celebrate his wedding anniversaries. and our poor khushi who find happiness in small joys and this celebration left sad and hurt every year... she is different...who find immense joy in food, some lovable moments, a salman movie only expect her hubby with her to share their anniversary...But our khadoos unknowingly hurt his lovely wife every year...
i love his perfect 3rd wedding gift for his Khushi...he made her feel special. and his unborn baby too...So Mr and Mrs is going to have a baby...A Jr ASR...😉😆...

superb OS limu Di...
I want more of ur imaginations in this type of OSs...Ur so good in it Bas⭐️..I hope u will gift more OS in future😉😉..Ye dil mange more🤗


Thank you, darling! 🤗

I have just one more Ek Jashn OS in my mind. I will try to pen it down during winter break. You'll be the first to know. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Wow such a beautiful OS , the stage was so beautiful . The emotions were perfect and I loved the way Arnav had made up for the last 2 years , it was amazing.


Originally posted by: deepsdspeed

Very nice..wish jashn was planned something like this.. completing them..😊


Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

Awesome!!! I guess if writes much better than stupid one who wrote jashn...huh!! Nice OS..loved it..


Thank you 😃

You guys are the best!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Yet again a wonderful piece of work Limon.. U are coming up with wonderful stories.. every single one is better than the previous one.. U r actually turning into one of my fav authors... I loved the story..loved ur arnav...and absolutely loved khushi...anjali aman adorable...
I thot since u kept her neck and earring bare... we might have a shaadi kind of thing... because u mentioned khushi being confused about not wearing the ornaments...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: albmum14

The man who actually does something to demonstrate how sorry he is when he messes upI listen a man who understands that actions need to come before words.

He has given her a moment of pure bliss. A moment that seemingly defies time and space for both of them. This moment is so perfect that their hearts and souls sing with gratitude that they had the chance to experience it.

All by letting go of his fears, hurt and misunderstandings. Achieved by embracing love and giving a new meaning to this day.


Isn't that the best thing about Arnav? He makes my heart melt! 😳

ASR came a long, long way in the show. The change was slow but oh so sweet. But without ASR, Arnav is incomplete. The right mix of both those shades is what makes that character so swoon worthy!

Thanks for always liking and commenting. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: arshifan89

wonderful os.

I really love that u r writing EJ one shots.
arnav's insecurities, his love towards khushi, and his attempts towards taking away all the pain from khushi were clearly palpable in this os.
its magical.
but, why arnav is feeling bad about his second wedding.
I agree, they had faced many problems during second wedding too, but that is his wife's dream wedding damnit.
any way, his problems got settled atleast on this 3rd wedding anniversary. they have a full life, with many anniversaries to celebrate.😃



Thank you for liking my story and for taking the time to like and comment.

Arnav feels guilty that even during the 2nd wedding there were so many problems. Khushi didn't get to enjoy it to the fullest and Arnav almost didn't come to the mandap. So, in his usual ASR style, ignoring that day is his way of dealing with it. 😆 But he's a changed man in Khushi's love. So he had to come to terms with it.
Edited by limoncello - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: muffin1996

Oh i cant tell you how happy i am to read it...superb..you touched my heart ❤️


Originally posted by: sai_neha

I love reading happywala story. When I was reading this is I remembered this is what I wanted to see in Ek Jashn series. I loved this is OS 👏. Thanks for the pm


Originally posted by: akai

wonderful dear..

i have no words to describe...

its marvelous


Aww! Thank you girls! You guys made my day! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: lalarukh

Awe simply beautiful...ur imagination working real cool dear :)

Loved how arnav celebrated the big day and big news in his own style...the stage..those lamps lotus...her dress all beauty :)..its awesome the way he came out of his insecurities only for love of his life,khushi :)...its a beautiful os..great going dear..


Thank you for always liking and commenting on my stories. It means the world to me! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: pinkly

Lovely ... Very sweet story. You have beautifully shown the love between arnav and khushi... Especially the way arnav acknowledges their anniversary and wishes Khushi in front everyone. The dresses were beautiful. The pool side conversation was wonderful. It shows all the love there is between arnav and khushi.

Nicely written. Liked it very much.


Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to comment. 😊

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