EK JASHN OS: ETERNAL FLAME

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

u r an awesome writer...
beautiful os...
just loved it...
thnks 4 d pm...

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

wow beautiful os loved it thank you for pm.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Lovely ... Very sweet story. You have beautifully shown the love between arnav and khushi... Especially the way arnav acknowledges their anniversary and wishes Khushi in front everyone. The dresses were beautiful. The pool side conversation was wonderful. It shows all the love there is between arnav and khushi.

Nicely written. Liked it very much.

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welcomebro

@welcomebro

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

your writing is an excellent...

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Really enjoyed this story!

My poor baby, she went through so much those two anniversaries gone, Arnav in attempt to run from those days, he hurt her.

He always knows, nothing is hidden from him!

I had never heard of this designer before today, the outfits and the fashion show, it is just stunning... unbelievable!

Eternal Flames is one of my fav songs too, I wrote an Arhi shot because I really liked it.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Sin,

This was so beautiful. The way it could have been again...the way Jashn could truly have panned outf there was just a little more interest from the makers, the creative team, the cast and crew, and of course the channel...ah well, grateful for what we got. Enjoyed this story and the lovely embellishments...the props, costumes and Arnav and Khushi...stellar. Take a bow, girl. 😊