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Originally posted by: mints23

Oh I loved this OS... because I absolutely love the Diwali almost kiss scene. And I had been so pissed with ASR for announcing his engagement to Lavanya... and then demeaning Khushi. Oh damn! I was so mad! I loved your rendition of Lavanya's realization of Arnav's love for Khushi, Arnav's own realization of his feelings for Khushi, Khushi's indifference and the way you panned out this entire OS... a sort of redemption. How I wish something similar would have happened in the show... but the nafrat had to go on and on for a long time, till mohabat finally got bored of yawing and waiting! Lolz! 😆

P.S.: Oh and yes!! Congrats for the win... it truly deserved the award! 👏

Originally posted by: Apoorvarani

Superb OS dear!!! Waiting to read the extension...

after a long tym...i am here...😆😉

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

after a long tym...i am here...😆😉

how r u di????

Diwaali episode in hatke...wow👏👏..diwali scene was the altym best of IPKKND. within 3 days the actors, writers and directors made us blush, made us dream a perfect kiss...made us witness the best khatarnak chemistry of Arnv nd Khushi., made us cry...made us curse...the almost kiss...

so many emotional athyachars...

our show title was lyk that..Nafrat Paas ane na de...mohabbat door jaane na de...

i hate ASR for the first tym during these scenes...the way he insulted was the worst...he trashed her self respect so much..😡😡

...that tym i prayed that if shyam snake was not Anji ki hubby...then i dont mind her getting married and Arnv realize his mistake...everything was over😆😆🤣..

this OS is the best🤗...

and khushi and her realization that Arnav felt for her was only LUST...😕. but what i love most...

her reply to Arnv...

in serial he insulted her...calling her gold digger...accused her of trapping rich man...khushi was a confused soul there and her heart broke further,, coz she knew and obviously Arnv knew they r attracted to each other...

but here role reversal..😆she accused him as another rich man who try to trap poor middle class girls for fun...😆😆. and Arnv good u deserve it..

all in all star ⭐️⭐️OS... i want u to continue this as ss...

Originally posted by: limoncello

Welcome back! I missed you! 🤗

Thank you so much! Yes, I always cringed at the way Khushi was made to look dowdy and illiterate! One minute she had fire in eyes and she gave it back to ASR as good as she got and in the very next episode she looked so desperate and ill-equipped in his world! Hai na?

I am hoping to recreate more scenes like this...my very own tribute to the show that has driven me crazy for the better part of the last 4 years! 😊

Here is the OS which stole my heart. Believe me when I say this Limon, you got unanimously selected for the Best Writer because as we went marking for each post, the post having this OS was leading with 2 marks and that shows the sheer brilliance of this OS. A 10/10 from my side, then and now.

A truly heartrending and heart-touching OS which I really hoped was shown on the TV.I hated how they portrayed Khushi on the show and this is how I wanted Khushi to be. Those definitions of feelings which you added in between, those were just so amazing, I mean I cannot describe my love for this OS in words and this is just a stupid attempt here. Everything was in a perfect synchronization and perfect balance, which gave this OS a perfect finish. Truly deserving entry for the award and definitely there is a lot to learn from you as a writer for me. Loved this and Love you.

Yagya

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

Here is the OS which stole my heart. Believe me when I say this Limon, you got unanimously selected for the Best Writer because as we went marking for each post, the post having this OS was leading with 2 marks and that shows the sheer brilliance of this OS. A 10/10 from my side, then and now.

A truly heartrending and heart-touching OS which I really hoped was shown on the TV.I hated how they portrayed Khushi on the show and this is how I wanted Khushi to be. Those definitions of feelings which you added in between, those were just so amazing, I mean I cannot describe my love for this OS in words and this is just a stupid attempt here. Everything was in a perfect synchronization and perfect balance, which gave this OS a perfect finish. Truly deserving entry for the award and definitely there is a lot to learn from you as a writer for me. Loved this and Love you.

Yagya

Originally posted by: limoncello

Yagya,

This has got to be the best comment I have ever got! 😳 😃

Thank you for choosing my OS and thank you for being so kind.

I'm definitely still evolving as a writer and as a reader too. I have been a silent reader for years and now I realize how wrong that was! Reading more and encouraging and appreciating other writers is giving me a different kind of high and it's making me more motivated to write more and write better.

This was my first contest in the virtual world. Although I have won many contests for my writing before, all of them have been professional/technical. This is my first fiction accolade. 😊

I hope to continue this OS and write more scenes my way. Hopefully I will be able to do justice to them all.

Love,
Limon.

I think that is extremely modest of you to say that you were still evolving. I wonder where I am on that evolving scale. Reading definitely helps, and that's one of the reason I agreed to judge the contest. Congratulations for all your wins and for the first win in the virtual world. May you win more accolades for your amazing writing skills. I am sure that you will do more justice to this plot than anyone can do, because I have understood that this one is coming right from your heart.

Cheers and Best Wishes,
Yagya

P.S: Do Apply For the Next Year's Crazy Creative Recruitment, I am sure we need amazing talents like this.

It was really awesome Limon..