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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

^^^

Aur India's performance ki tarah hua toh? 😉

Thank you Chaitalee 😳

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Anu567

Ruchi, you DO NOT have to apologize for giving us this beautiful story...you are a star! ⭐️...rock on, baby! All those who do not like it can just go and fly a kite! As ASR would have famously observed about this hullabaloo..."unf...ing believable!"

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I absolutely agree with Anu. Thank you Anu!!! Ruchi why are yo apologizing? For giving us this beautiful story!!!

I accept that each reader has her own opinion and they are entitled to it. Same as you as a writer entitled to the way you want to conceive and present your imagination / take and name it as you please. I don't see anything wrong and there is NOTHING WRONG!!!

At the end of the day it is absolutely an Arhi story because there is no Arhi without all those other wonderful characters who made it as a whole and Arnav will not be who he is if not for his sister. Don't apologize and break our hearts for giving this wonderful take that is a delight to read again and again.

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Dear Ruchi,

What an awesome piece of writing! It was so heart warming... and had an air of deep melancholy, as well...couldn't stop my tears, flowing silently, while I was reading it!

What we would be, without our siblings? I don't have a brother, but I have a younger sister, and she is my rock. No one in this world could replace the bond, which we share with our sister/brother.

And how wonderfully you have written about this bond...in a bare few words...

Your writing is extraordinary Ruchi, please write more...will be waiting.

P.S: Loved the title of this story...it contained all the love, Anjali has for Arnav.

PPS: As someone suggested in this thread, I would love to read a story on Khushi and Paayal...they also shared an exemplary bond. Loved them.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -Reader-
Hello,
This was a pleasant surprise for me, because I have known you as a fellow reader on some of the stories I read but didn't know you are a writer too :)

I would call this piece "a tribute to Anjali's character and the pure sibling relationship shared by Anjali and Arnav". You summed is so beautifully and elegantly in few words.

As much as I crush over Arnav Singh Raizada, whenever I saw Anjali and Arnav's bonding, I wished for a brother like Arnav or wanted to be Anjali.

Like many others I am here for the love of "Arnav-Khushi" only, but I truly believe that they were what they were for all the other characters, especially Anjali.

Arnav was center of Anjali's world and she was his world and you said so poetically :)

Thank you for this "papad ka tukda"..This made me so nostalgic that I had to watch few scenes of Anjali-Arnav :)

Thank you so much for your lovely compliment. It's a pleasure being a fellow reader with you and even more so to read your thoughts on something I've written :)

For so long, Anjali was the only one allowed a glimpse of a vulnerable Arnav. His own words sum it up so well ...

"Main badtameez hoon duniya ke liye par aap ke liye nahi
Mera gussa baki sab ke liye jayaz hai par aap ke liye kabhi nahi
Mujhe iss duniya se koi matlab nahi hai, meri asli duniya toh aap ho"

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-Reader-

@-Reader-

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Thank you so much for your lovely compliment. It's a pleasure being a fellow reader with you and even more so to read your thoughts on something I've written :)

For so long, Anjali was the only one allowed a glimpse of a vulnerable Arnav. His own words sum it up so well ...

"Main badtameez hoon duniya ke liye par aap ke liye nahi
Mera gussa baki sab ke liye jayaz hai par aap ke liye kabhi nahi
Mujhe iss duniya se koi matlab nahi hai, meri asli duniya toh aap ho"

You welcome dear and pleasure is all mine :)

Like Arnav says about Anjali "Toffee se meethi hai, churan se khatti hai, khatti meethi hai teri kahani Anjali di hai sabse sayani."

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

This is such a marvellous OS Ruchi...I always enjoy your comments on different stories...very well written dear.

You have shown such a cute bond between brother and sister. I always cherished this special bond between Arnav and Anjali.

Keep writing dear.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Not fair, Ruchi!

Firstly,I was not informed when you posted this.

Now I am relegated to the ninth page.

Can you even imagine the ignominy of this situation.

And then you remind me of my childhood and the golden days spent with my younger brother who is thousands of miles away from me.

Whenever you write something, be it a comment or a scrap or a small piece of fiction, I am amazed at your capacity to put a few words together and to come out with a lovely piece of prose. It is a rare quality.

One might love or hate Anjali, but none can deny her love and loyalty for her brother. When she loves, she loves whole heartedly.

You have written so well her thoughts while looking at the old pictures which evoke such rare and beautiful memories.

A lovely piece of writing, Ruchi.

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Ruchi I am sure with your OS most of the readers have relived their young days with their siblings. Love: The word itself is overrated according to me and have lost its meaning at many levels however the most innocent of all i would say is the love of brother and sister; that too at the age that you have described. With age doubts and insecurities come in to picture and that is what happened to Anjali.

The only consistent or constant thing in IPK as you said was this love of Anjali and Arnav. Both were each other's anchor. With one Tornado in the name of Shyam, the weak one which was Anjali lost its faith in the relation and the trust that she had in her brother was shaken resulting in her

"Waqt badal gaya hain, Sab kuch badal gaya" phase of her life.

Beautiful OS and to go with this OS i can only think about this song. One of my fav singer and my all time fav genre of music.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NqRCVdotF1U[/YOUTUBE]

Last but not least would just add and say

"Yeh Dil mange more Ruchi"

Its always a treat to read your words👏

Edited by -Bhavi - 9 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

RES, will be back in a while:)

Edited:

I apologize for being late. I was typing the comment and I was interrupted by my roommate. So coming to the OS, I have always loved the fictions where Anjali or other IPKKND characters' POV is highlighted. And it is very rare in this forum, it is always either egoistic ASR or timid Khushi, if not always, most of the time. I am glad you chose to write on Anjali. Apart from ArHi relationship in the show, I loved the bond between the siblings. Remember how ASR helped Akash to win Payal? That suicide thing?😆 And how Anjali adored Arnav and how beautiful Payal and Khushi's relationship was? Thank you for exploring this relationship.

I am damn sure my big sister can relate to this, tum badi ho beta. One TV, two siblings and she had to sacrifice her movies because of my cricket obsession. Even after years, kuch nahi badla hai She still sacrifices and listens to my never ending drama and I still love her like my Mommy 😳 This OS reminds me of my adorable relationship with her and I thank you for writing it so beautifully!

I loved the OS a LOT and I am definitely going to ask my friends to read it. This is a beautiful OS and no one should miss it.

Thanks Ruchi!

Edited by cheesemad - 9 years ago