Arshi OS#29: Mere Liye Ho Tum

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

I loved ds concept. Totally agreeing wit u... infatuation til an extend can b harmless but if it disturb anyone s piece of mind den its very dangerous

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@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

This is one wonderful One Shot!
Nice topic, and beautifully written with a good message!
I think you should have made it a Two Shot considering the fact that you wanted to add something more!

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Love is what matters and keep you together with the person you love most.
making the person realise the mistake normally and not by throwing accusations.
beautifully written :)
Deep and meaningful OS :)
Thanks for the PM

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Beautifully written with good emotion...
you made me little sad...
but good

Nice update

Thanks for the pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

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Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Lovely OS

waiting for version 2

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Such a real story... The travails of a common man put to paper...

And amidst that you still kept the spark ignited between Arnav and Khushi...

Well... I feel for Surbhi... Our teens have been fed with very high expectations of the perfect man. She found one in her jiju... *shudders* Good, Arnav controlled it before it got too late.

Very nice story 👍🏼