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Magnificent update jigs :) you've carved each and every emotion beautifully!! No words to say more than, that you are truly a blessed writer.. :) the whole story behind avni's ignorance towards khushi led me to a conclusion that she did wrong, infact very wrong.. But she dont hate khushi:) i am not saying that avni is right, no she did wrong with khushi, right from her birth:( i felt very bad for for khushi, thinking about an new born baby, an infant who didnt know anything or did anything wrong, still she had to live without mother:( In a way, khushi is the one who lose her mother in her initial days.. Avni realised late that her love is being replaced by sofia's love:( she is a mother, still she creates distance from her daughter !! I felt sad as if i imagine how a daughter feel seeing her sister got her mother's love while she deprive of that same love..!! I felt no pity for avni here..!! I can only see khushi's anguish when she said while having mehndi's convo "I was around... perhaps you weren't looking for me at the right time. You know, since you were busy with the important people... the guests" !! That shows how deeply she still affect by avni's ignorance:(

Afterall these things, still i can say that avni loves her, i can see the regret that she feel seeing her daughter so far from her.. The way she say that she is leaving again.. My heart cried out for a mother :( my throat literally choked while reading it!!

Another flashback memory:) it was quite obvious she felt jealous that her daughter acknowledging sofia first :/ you always write khushi n sofia's love bond amazingly:) heart wrenching memory for a mother, but what to say when she herself distanced her daughter:(

Finally arnav get rid of RAJA.. Lol!! Fantastic update dear:) thanks for pm!! :)

Another beautiful update. After reading it we do feel bad for Avni and khushi too. You write beautifully. Can't wait for the next update

Awesome chapter... U have written it so beautifully..I m having right now soft corner for everyone other than payal and her hubby.. It's amazing how khushi avni both r missing the love between...they understanding too that distance of years between them...both understanding even that both hurting..wanted to be easy in each other company but still is it really too late now..or I m thinking if they start taking steps towards each other from today...mayb we can see if not picture perfect but still happy equation between them...hopeso one day..as one thing common between all...they need Love...khushi got mother in dadi..they share beautiful relation..

awesome chapter

Hello! I'm new to this ff! I need some time to read this! I'll comment as n wen i finish reading it! Hope that's okay with you!Thanks for pm!

beautiful update... you bought out Avni's thoughts really well ..
at some points i did feel like Avni was right, payeel did need her more then khushi... but then no matter how strong you might be, u always want ur mother beside you ...
loved it..

That was superb. Now we get an insight into Avni. I guess it is difficult for Khushi to develop a close bond now. She found a lovable mother in Sofia. No wonder Khushi misses her so much.

very good update...the story is progressing very well...keep it up... please do continue soon..👍🏼