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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update.. felt a little bad for Avni...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update!! Loved it totally!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
UnRes :-)
Wonderful update jigs. . You left me speechless with this update.. i read it twice before unres. ..
I was very eagerly waiting for this.. avni's pov.. i wanted to know what went wrong with her, and why did she abandon her own daughter. . Bcoz no mother in this world is so heartless to leave their daughter unattended at such a tender age.. As you mentioned in the opening note, no one is black or white, we humans are always grey.. and i feel we are not considered as humans if we are not grey.. i feel pity for avni rather than being angry.. avni had her own insecurities and post pregnancy depression to deal with, and was the reason she distanced herself from kushi... but by the time she realised, it was too late and she never got a chance to mend her relation with kushi.. and that is what she is thinking, but what i feel is, she has not put much effort to mend her relation.. if she really wanted to, she would've had so many opportunities when you are living under the same room.. from the present situation if we take, she would've never given kushi's room to her granddaughter when she knows that kushi is coming... she could've stayed at home to recieve kushi, and everything else could've waited.. nothing is so important to a mother than her kids and especially when they are coming home after so long.. she could've corrected her grandson when he spoke rudely to kushi.. she could've called kushi during the mehendi event and asked kushi to sit beside her.. and also should've selected a beautiful design for her daughter.. after all she knows how much kushi loves mehendi, and she could've checked whether the daughter and son in law had their dinner or not.. But the answer is no for everything.. these small gestures are enough for a child to feel loved and cared.. so, i felt that she didn't try much to change the dynamics of her relation with kushi and so, no point in feeling bad for her own karma.. i feel avni is not a bad mother, but didn't know how to make her daughter happy and how to make her feel loved and didn't know how to express her love.. she was good in payal's case but not for kushi.. because never two kids are same.. so the approach also should be different.. feeling bad is not enough, but should put your heart and try to mend it, which she didn't...
Kushi on the other hand felt neglected and was craving for mother's love.. and when she got that from dadi and sofia, she embraced it with open arms.. i felt very bad for avni, when i was reading about kushi's 30th birthday surprise. . But what kushi did was also not wrong.. kushi got that love of a mother only from dadi and sofia.. so when it comes to mother, she only remembers her ma..
Arnav and kushi are so eagerly waiting for Saturday night and we too.. i guess this thread is going to be on fire with the next update ;-)
That is one beautifully written update jigs.. loved it to bits..
Thanx for the pm dear :-)
Edited by pravallika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
RES
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update so now the party begins,loved khusi n dadi's bond atleast khusi had both her grandparents with her n now her beloved husband,I hope things gets better between her parents
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update again..i feel for avni too...once you missed your timing you never ever will be able to catch on...at least avni realised it and khushi too ..lets hope they make better effort now because time never stand still
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Posted: 9 years ago

👏 this for the way you handled the Avni- Khushi portion. Will be honest and say I was not looking forward to it. But I ended that part with tears glazing my eyes !

I am not compelled to judge Avni now. Sure her behaviour towards her younger daughter cannot be justified...somehow you managed to give her a heart and feelings..regret & remorse yes; nevertheless Avni's ache for missed time and opporunities has melted my bitterness towards her.

Bravo Khushi for telling Avni as it is. 👍🏼

Well, we are in the upgraded suite at last ( I expected the upgradation for sure knowing our Arnav 😉 and the golf too).

Finally dare I hope for an uninterrupted Arshi full on passionate session Jigs...will wait and see 😛
Edited by nik1310 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update.
It was good to see a bit of background as far as Khushi and her mom's relationship. I can appreciate how Avni feels but like she said she more or less brought it down on herself. PTSD is no joking matter but after she came out of it she could have done more. I hope that they may be able to patch up their relationship down the line.
Edited by deesha1989 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update dear...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bellissima!
E 'stato fantastico!

Mi limiterei semplicemente a dire - Writerji, sei fantastica!

I opened your update and simply couldn't stop reading. I have to be somewhere in an hour and have to prepare for that meeting. But nope! You had me hooked. That is what you do when you give us these update. You grip us in a hold that is soft like Dadi's hold... you have our heart racing just like how Khushi's was when she saw him... and break our hearts with the sadness that filled Avni's when she realized that she wasn't the first in line for her daughter's love!

So much happened in this update.

I knew something was up with Avni... and now we know. It's not that uncommon and it is rife with guilt. If there something I have learnt about motherhood, it is this - Along with the child we bear, we also bear guilt...And judgements come easy - when we are on the outside, looking in. Don't you think?

A song comes to my mind..

Zindagi ka safar
Hai yeh kaisa safar
Koi samjha nahi
Koi jaana naji

What didn't kill her, made her stronger! Look at Khushi now! A fighter and a survivor with a platoon of supporters right behind her, around her... it was such a lovely sight you created.

But... I wonder if Avni and Khushi will make use of the time that they have left, to renegotiate their relationship! Even though Khushi came out stronger, these bags we carry, especially the ones that take us back to our loved ones, are heavy... I hope she reminds herself of the lessons Arnav learnt with his own confrontation with his father and the bag he carries with him... She watched him close quarters.. Will she know when the time comes for herself? Will Arnav?

So, the tone of the story is shifting... and tension is building (in more ways than one.. if you know what I mean!)... and next Tuesday is a long ways off.. sigh..

As always, I loved the update my dearest friend and SS... As I do .. you.. Hemesha!

❤️



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