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Posted: 10 years ago

I loved this chapter for its beauty in tying things together, for the shifts in the relationships between the characters. Arnav and Anjali, Anjali and Khushi, Arnav and Bella, Khushi and Arnav- all three relationships went through changes in this phase, and they all came out so much stronger. I can't help but feel a little pride for them, as they take down their obstacles one by one.


Arnav and Anjali had their relationship sorely tested here- and in this, you showed a beautiful dichotomy. Anjali is both a younger sibling, and in some ways, becomes the older one. Anjali takes responsibility for hurting Arnav, but at the same time, she gently draws him towards understanding the thought behind her choices. The way she subtly highlighted the troubles Arnav and Khushi are going through marked her shift to a role that Arnav usually fills, the older sibling, gently letting them know she understands and offering her support. She has so much faith in her siblings, and the bond between her and Khushi proves that the addage "blood is thicker than water" is not always true.


Arnav confronting his fear for Bella was so powerful- but what I really loved seeing was watching the whole process through Khushi's eyes. Her pride is so palpable as she watches him, and it's as if she's holding her breath as he works through it and then lets it out with an irrepressible smile when he finally does. I was absolutely amazed by their conversation about children- it was so candid, with nothing barred from each other. Her reiteration of her commitment to fixing their marriage for them, his quiet comfort... they were completely honest and comfortable in that honesty, and that is a big step for them.


The connection between them was just so strong this chapter, with the private glances that they share, the little whispered comments and the laughter. I had a smile on my face throughout, and I laughed aloud when Arnav noticed that "beautiful Italian". I love seeing how their relationship has grown, how much commitment they have to working through this together. And at the end- you showed that so well. While she was his strength when he needed it... he will now be hers. Bring it on, Guptas.


Love always,

Your Choti.

P.S.: I will miss you dearly, but I hope you have a kickass time on vacation 🤗

Edited by chotidesi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res :)

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Fabulous update dear:) first of all, thank you sooo much for giving such a long n lovely update..:) how can you say that you bored us all with long update..?? No jigs, infact m so happy to read your extra effort n time that you put for all of us :) loved the whole update, infact the reflection of positivity ..!! Beautiful display of anjali's emotions..:) its was necessary for her to talk to arnav about sophia's promise to avoid further problems..!! Sometimes unsaid things create more damage to a relation whether its of husband wife, bro n sis or any other..!! It was good that anjali took initiative and cleared the issue before it mess their relation further :) khushi's love and support plays an important role in arnav's life..!!

Nice moments where arnav n khushi spend with bella.. Its looks like their own cute n sweet family :) loved their conversation and specialy about old arnav n when he asks her "What else would you like to see back from your Arnav?" I really loved his teasing n flirty tone ..!! Unknowingly, our cute bella took away the pain that arnav always felt for his pari..!! Very touchy part that was..!!

I loved the protectiveness that sidhu have for his zia:) i am stunned to see that a small kid can see n understand the pain that khushi faced, when arnav was not there for her.. !! I was equally shocked but happy that sidhu loves her zia so much that he can see the scary monsters..!!! Jigs, that was amazing moment and you've write it perfectly :)

Finally khushi said those three magical words "I LOVE YOU" !! My heart filled with happiness n excitement that love is finding its way in their relation..!!! I so loved that flirty arnav, his morning message with "your arnav" in the end.. :) he did not leave a single chance of flirting with his double meaning talks.. Haha..!! Feeling so lighthearted after reading this..!!

Every moment that you've written whether its their lunch, khushi's excitement for his fav actor Bradley Cooper, their shopping for guptas or their cozy moments is just awesome..!!! Seriously have no words to explain:) Oh so finally they reached gupta mansion but no family member to welcome them ..!!! As expected it hurts khushi but now i guess its time for arnav to be with her..!!! Lets see what will happen in gupta mansion ..?? Thanks for pm !! Will be waiting for next update.:)

Have a good vacation :)
Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jigs, another beautiful update from you.

One decision, one wrong decision by Avinash changed the lives of so many people.

But again, Sofia moved on, Arnav moved on and Anjali too moved on with their lives.
Sofia lived a contended life with her kids filled with the satisfaction that she brought her children up in the right manner, got more love from the kids and their spouses than she thought and finally even forgave Avinash and thus dying peacefully.

Arnav moved on, built a good career, found a loving partner and found loving family and friends.

Anjali moved, made her career, got married, had kids and found happiness in every sense.

It is Avinash who is probably left behind and is at the same place he was more than two decades ago. His actions made him lose the love of this children and even though Anjali did make peace with him, she never forgave him and I am sure their relationship too is not like the typical father- daughter relationship and somewhere the gap will always be there.

Avinash's one wrong decision made him lose his son for ever and today when everyone else have moved on finding their lives and happinesses, its him who is living the life of guilt everyday.
This guilt never even allowed him to father other kids too.

Today I am pitying Avinash and in future even if Arnav does talk to his father, things can never be like a normal father son bonding. Gap of decades of hatred from one side and guilt on the other will always come inbetween and they will be just left like two strangers meeting formally.

Jigs, I loved how you left the relationship between Arnav and his dad open.

For now Arnav's priorities are his wife and his married life and making peace with his father is probably the last thing on his mind now.

Anjali and Arnav's bonding is so strong that not even the painful past can come between them.
And I am glad that Arnav did acknowledge that the lapses in his married life will never be dealt by him like his father did with his marriage.

And I was more than happy when Arnav played freely with Bella and even consoled her while she was crying and how he is fighting all his demons one by one, slowly but steadily.

Ahh, the lunch at Ivy, Khushi going all gaga over the celebrity spotting and their passionate make out session in a deserted parking lot - so so happy that finally my most beloved couple are finding the love back in their married life and embracing it with open arms.

What is the deal with these Gupta's???

Daughter and SIL are coming after so many months and they have no love or courtesy to even receive them. Looks like a bunch of dramebaaz people to me.

Now waiting for some typical Ekta Kapoor style entertainment at Gupta residence.
Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bradley Cooper?????????/ I would have jumped on him if I met him...how could Kushi be speechless????? ohh, is it bcos she had her own better than Bradley Cooper with her????


Finally Anjali is clear whats in Arnav's mind..

Siddu is such a cutie..

Arnav Kushi conversation is awesome..

Guptas..typical high society family..no warmth
Edited by sman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
An amazing update as always.

Such a intense emotional journey. You bring out the relationship of each individual so beautifully and a solution to their problems realistically. I have no words to describe.

Love the way each individual is standing by the other be it at hard times or the happy times. Be it through their silence or by voicing out their thoughts to help them out.

This update showed the strong bond and support Arnav & Khushi have for each other and also theirs with Anjali. Their love & affection for the Kids.🤗

Anjali did what she did due to her promise to her Mother and also for what her Mother saw was happening between Arnav & Khushi. She would have hoped to have rectified it before she departed but ensured it was done by her daughter.

Avinash was selfish in the past and continues to be selfish to earn his forgiveness to have mental peace in his last days.

How beautifully you have penned the way Arnav combats & hopefully has overcome his nightmare holding on to Bella. It was emotionally heartwarming to picture it.

But ultimately it is the Strong Support, love & understanding Arnav & Khushi have for each other. Things will be alright in the long run - Hamesha. But it will take time, they still have to clear the some of the webs which are hanging around from their past.

Hopefully Both of them will stand strong when they are at the Guptas. They have come out emotionally strong more than anything after their stay in with Malibu. They should not lose that during their stay at the Guptas. ( I trust You, I am sure you will bring them out in flying colors. )
Edited by inamajar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the delay in commenting,
I want to read it once more before I post the comment.

You have spend lots of energy and time in this chapter.

Will be back with my comments.

...

What an amazing update... full of emotions...👏

The moment of this chapter is the SMS moment. It was so natural and touching...

Jen Aniston and Bradley Cooper? Seriously...? I am loving this kind of encounters... These kinds of incidents bringout the best or the worst of oneself...because, seeing one of your favotire actor, usually makes you go giddy, and you do all those silly things unconciously... i guess these two are your favorites...that was again another moment of the couple...🤗

Are people realy that naive after experiencing heartbroken at such a young age... Even though Sofia and Arnav protected Ajalai from the reality, when she come to senses she would have realized the main cause of Avinash absence in thier life... Ok she did move on? But, as Arnav said, why didnt she try to reason him about their mothers wish before barging into his life and trying to call shots for him...and Khushi, she is so caring...

Anyways, am happy to see that drama queen is now out of the picture...

But, I guess, the biggest drama is yet be unfold... The Gupta's?


What moster was Sidhu talking about? Was he refering Khushi's time of recovery after miscarriage or was he referring to something related to Guptha's behavior.? According to him, she was having nightmares...

Here and there, you have been throwing good signs about their future, I think they will be blessed with a kid as a award for mending their relationship? Am I right Writer?...

I am anxiously looking forward to meet Gupthas...


Enjoy your holiday to the fullest.


Edited by SharuAG - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear Jigs, that was a lovely super long update...please don't apologize for longer updates, we love them and appreciate the effort that goes in to writing them.
In every chapter you bring out the relationships between the characters so beautifully...and each one of us can relate with them..at least i do whether it is khushi and sofia, arnav and sofia, arnav and his father, anjali and arnav and even with the little ones. Now waiting to see what happens with the gupta's. what kind people are they? I would die if my parents were not waiting to welcome me to their home, especially if i was visiting them after a long period. so glad that arnav is by khushi's side and she knows she has his support too this time.
jigs, u are mazing. keep it coming. can't wait for wednesday.
have a great vacation.. hugs
Edited by anukap - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 19:
I totally understand Sofia's dilemma and her need to see Arnav and Avinash getting along. It's true that Arnav needs to let go off his anger to be able to move ahead but mending ways with his father doesn't have to be the only conscious solution. Arnav was a teen when he was made to go through the unwanted hurt and betrayal and it's quite difficult to overlook the not-so-favourable events in that age and so I wouldn't really be surprised if Arnav continues to stay ignorant towards his father.

Avinash though narrated his side of the story, yet it did not help him clear his image in anyway. What transpired between Tanvi and him might not have been unjust but its consequences were. His vulnerability and (if I may add) selfishness costed his kids, his son especially a lot. I, honestly, don't hate Avinash but then I don't sympathise with him as well.
Sofia feared a similar fate for her son's marriage but surprisingly despite of the many lows, his son did not give up on his marriage. That shows how different he is from his father.

I am in an awe of Arnav, for despite having been cheated by his father, Arnav still feels the pain his father is possibly going through.

Chapter 20:
I am glad there are no secrets being kept now. It was important for Anjali to have revealed the promise she made to Sofia and in turn be made privy to the fact that all is not the very best between Arnav-khushi. This way they are sharing their feelings with each other and at the same drawing a line for the other to not overstep. I loved the way they settled down everything quite calmly, for there is nothing else I would expect from a loving family as theirs.

Arnav has been there whenever Khushi has had to recover from her trauma and now by being by his side during his lows, she is proving the definition of a Soulmate perfectly. If the moment when he had a laughing Bella in his arms was beautiful, the moment he had her calmed down was soothing. I am sure Bella will turn out to be her Zio's girl.

We had glimpses of Arnav's Khushi and Khushi's Arnav in this update and they were the best. The normalacy and domesticity between them was an indicator that all the problems will eventually be conquered.
And for some reason I eagerly look forward to the drama being unfolded inside the Gupta mansion.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
Edited by sk2405 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for the delay..
loved the update as always..
happy to see them both together..loved the bonding between anjali and arnav..
really felt bad for avinash but what he did is something hard to excuse..for arnav having seen what her mother went through is really tough to excuse and embrace him..i loved it

thank you for closing it that way instead of some stupid melodrama.. we have to face the consequences for taking a bad step no matter how painful it is..for overcoming a grief he took a step which made him regret and live with guilt..

now whats with these gupta log??
waiting for the next part..
Edited by deepsdspeed - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hope jaate jaate Guptas ko bhi theek karke jaye ye log😉
Nice part
Loved it totally

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