(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Thank you for continuing your journey on IF by writing beautiful stories on Arnav-Khushi😃

This is one scary story of Arnav-Khushi that I have come across...😲 But its fabulous...👏

Waiting for you to come with new SS/FF/OS on Arnav-Khushi...

Please continue writing on Arnav-Khushi... Waiting for the next one...

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow superb OS dear!!!loved it:-))

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

it was fun to see khushi getting scared...
can we pls hv one of arnav getting scared tooo... :)

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hotchic.

@hotchic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

nice shot, full of suspense and thrill!!

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Superb concept and superb first shot! It was very well written and extremely entertaining. Had you not mentioned about experiencing the first's together... I would not have guessed that Arnav could be behind this entire creepy thing. I had an inkling that it was Arnav messing around with Khushi. But the way you built up the entire setting, the ambience and feel around it, had me shivering in its coldness. Its always exciting to read a different style of your writing... like Revenge. Because knowing you... I know you are like LU!! 😳 So its nice to see a different shade of you. Will be waiting for the next installment of this series. Don't ever talk about stopping to write and quitting IF. Ek Saiyyu kafi hai humare liye to be giving up something she is so good at. Pagal ladki! 😛

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

First chapter was a fun read.

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deepa

@deeswarna

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

omg i was the oone having an almost heart attack instead of khushi. but it was a very cute os and specially the ending where arnav said he never left her alone

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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awesome...
Waiting for the next one.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Not only khushi, even i was hell scared... Arnav should've got punished for this mischief... bechari khushi... nd bechari me... but the idea is fantastic Zehra... I'm already loving it... looking forward to see many more first times...

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Wow! That's a great idea! I mean the topic you've choosen to write on their first time!
This Shot is definately scary!
I've read all your fics till date and this OS is clearly different from those! I'm glad that you're trying different genres!
Great work!!

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