ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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Meera Beladiya

@meera_beladiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Awesome ending

Will miss it for sure

Love u

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Lovely ending. I liked their wedding.

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Ok let me compose myself first...kitna rulaya apne iss bachi ko J ji😭😭

Jab apna he koi dhoka de toh kiski ko kya kahe...such a heartless monster khushi's father was...his bad deed froce his own son to take his life...his wife was killed.. kept his daughter nd DIL nd his baby life in danger...who almost on verge of killed by those militants if arnav not came in tym... who no less than a angle for them in thier bad tym..

Khushi who thinks her father her role model...nd his wife didnt even got the chance to know thecreal face of her husband whom they trust blindly...acha hua his father was killed...he has no rights to live after making all his family life at stake...

Its so heartwrenching to see that khushi's mother who was her strength who make her strong taught her to live independent was no more...bt happy to see that after all this mishap khushi nd sana able to start thier life afresh..

Nd finally khushi also got her lost love..her miyan..nd arnav his biwi...happy ending with arshi forever

Loved it Jji..totally different from all ur other stories..so intense...👏👏

PS:- sowee for late comments ji...AD really suck..🤢🤢..khushi jese kan pakad k uthak bethak karing

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sana48

@sana48

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

One word mindblowing... when there is love no one can make u apart. .. love the ending is to heart warming and beautiful. .. love it 😉

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Hey chechi..This was very short, sweet and simple. As you said I don't think you should have made it any longer. This was just perfect.

You very cleverly knotted all the loopholes giving us the perfect closure we all waited for!

Finally Khushi's brother gets justice.. And Khushi's family is proved innocent. Though I do wish her ammi was there. I understand that is how you had planned things.

The romance is slowly brewing after years of separation. The two loving hearts are thankful they found each other back. Of course they were meant to be together, is it not?

He wishes to pull her out of her sorrow and he succeeded I know. I liked that line.. "spoilt" Khushi had mentioned. It made my heart flutter a little too madly.

Their marriage is the best one I have read.. even awesome than hamesha chechi.. So far that topped the list.. This has beaten it and am mighty glad that it did so..

Beyond caste, religion, society, good and bad, LOVE is the ultimate ruler. And you had shown that so brilliantly. I am telling you again this update, though short, it conveyed lot and made us want to fall in love!

Beautiful and utterly magical chechi.. Thanks a ton for giving us this one! Love you <3