ArHi TS:Piya Bawarchi *Removed*

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

HAhahhah cheesy you agin rocked yaar with the last part..
i just loved it and i was no wrong to say its a best TS..

Lol the more laughable thing for me was ..Arnav turning into different zones with in minutes lol that was so funny ..and the facts ..haye it was so lovable to read each and every fact..

lol poor Arnav .. had to cook to get forgiveness..
lol Aman he is just wonder and i really like dhow you make simple things sound so laughable .. special making the right situation ... it was so wondrous of you..

Bijali baai..lol.. Cheesy yaar she is a rock star you created ..hahahah #######HASTAG ..heheheh
i still wonder one day results too will be announced using hastags..he hhehe. and Account for SOBTI ..lol that is something best i loved it when Bijali baai says ..Bijali SOBTI ...

you are just brilliant ..
and turning to GANDHI ..haye .. that was gain funny .. but thank god she didnt slap him..

Cheesy you have written this TS ..so wonderfully and everything was so enjoyable plus gave us a grt laugh..
i ma happy finally Khushi accepted his forgiveness plus they are now a couple ..heheheh

LOL Buaji ..haye aa gaye wapas mere ARNAV ko nervous karne ke liye..
poor ARNAV .. his entire amazing date turned into a nervous break down seeing buaji ..

wonderful TS.. and now i am again waiting for some new story from you ..

P.S. I am glad you like d my hilarious poetry and Edit.. heheh thanks for liking it and giving so wonderful words about it.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

This was so fun. I loved how Arnav tried to pacify an upset Khushi by learning to cook. 😳 He is such a sweet guy and hot too.. Perfect combination of hot & cool. 😉
And Khushi's questions when she first met Arnav as Arnav were hilarious!!! 😆 She has got spark and I loved it so much.
Aman is hilarious and so very filmy but he helped Arnav in winning back Khushi by motivating him to not give up so soon. Those fun-facts were so awesome. Loved them.
Hai Re Nand Kishore did you too get scared of Buaji and didn't write about her meeting Cook Raju & Lawyer Arnav two-in-one? 😛

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

God cant stop laughing till end..damn hilarious🤣

Nd dat bijili baii..o womaniya..aha womaniya with hastag...god🤣🤣

Finally arnav able to confess his feelings bt the big bomb..buaji agaye..date ki mother sister karne🤣

Amazing ending..loved it😆😆

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

awesome story..
finally khushi forgave arnav after arnav learnt to cook...
loved bijali baai...😆😆

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Beautiful update
Loved it
Well written
Ending was hillarious
Enjoyed it

Edited by Happytwinkle - 10 years ago

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

So arnav learnt cooking for her so sweet.
Fun facts were amazing
Arnav:s inner voice it was so fun, Harvard degree that was icing on the cake.
So sweet Aman, motivated arnav not to give up, that was touching.
Congratulations Mrs khushi raju Singh Raizada.
All in all fantastic story cheesemad
Thank u
Ps looking forward for ur awesome stories

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

🤣

It was tooo good

the fun facts were damn funny

so finally ☺️

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Aww Cheeni this is seriously too funny yaar, I was just laughing reading it!!! I really really need bijali bai in our house to rescue me from all the cooking lol!!!

Arnav is such a sweetie he learned to cook for his girl, all the notes and fun facts were such a cute idea. Who doesn't like good food with a little love right?

Just sad that this TS is over, can we get an chotu epilogue for a chotu story, as you can see I said please :-)