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First of all my apologies for being this late. Study is taking a toll on me! All I do is Khana Peena Parhna! Tension.Depression and what not! But finally I'm out of my I-WANT-TO-DIE phase so here I'm with my comment!

The title: Piya Bawarchi! It draws you towards it. It screams hey there it is something unique. I was damn sure I'm gonna LMAO while reading it. And you didn't disappoint me. LMAO,ROFL, LOL,HHKBH,MMJGHHK sab ho gya! 😆
Banner: Aheli has Magic in her hands and this is one of her masterpieces! Mind bLowing!

All the while I was just like 🤣 👏👏👏
I don't remember when was the last time I laughed so hard reading a story. All credit goes to you. I'm proud of you. For me you are the most versatile writer IF ever had! Love you and you are the best. So coming back to the TS. Here we go

Chapter 1: Bawarchi with an IQ of 160
I don't know about this Bawarchi but you definitely have a humor IQ of 160+! Kya cheez kya hai tu! Hats off! Mr Raizada A lawyer. That's something new. I was sure this is going to be a story with a bawarchi but woa! I was surprised. A lawyer? Bawarchi Kahan gya?😆 He is a charmer! Tu jenny ki jagah Aimmy nahi kar sakti thi?😆 Why this Ramanchi!😆
An IQ of 160, A charmer personality and a wonderful sense of humor! Aur kya chaiye! Aww love at first sight!
**Cough Cough**
Tujhe Daikha To Ye Jana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Ab Yaha Se Kahan Jaye Hum
Teri Rasoi Mein mar Jaye hUM🤣
Arnav an Aman! I tell you everyone should have a friend like Aman! Free ki entertainment ho jati hai you see🤣 I love their bond! No hesitation! Just bhonko what you want to bhonkna! 😆 Lost Lost Raizada... In thoughts of his lady love. Khushi is such a distraction. He was so lost that he missed his meeting! Aww lover boy Raizada!
"Phir se gas ho rahi hai kya?"
This cracked me up! Aman and his weird thoughts.😆 Arnav tried to divert his mind. So he went for some work out. Raizada was lost in his thoughts and here he came across the love of his life! Oh My God! He was a goner! I was waiting for an eye lock and A Rabba Vey but but we have our very own Bua Ji here.
Raju! Where did that come from?😆 Raju Singh Raizada😆 Hilarious! 😃

"Loyalty, fine!

Reliability, fine!

Her Bachhi, more than fine!

Khana, not fine!

Raju, what the hell is happening! "

here goes our lawyer Raizada. Calculating plus and minus points of this new opportunity! We really have someone who think reasonably! Our Very own Doctor Sahiba! She was the one who thought he was way to handsome to be a Bawarchi! 😆 Doctors have this inborn ability you see. 😉 They can very well find out is something is fishy or not! But meh! She to believed he was some Raju guy! Gawd! Bua ji to bua ji ki bachi bhi pagal hai! 😆

The worried Raizada on how to tackle this situation! And on top Aman was there too annoying the hell out of him!

"Khana bana kar dabba pack karna hai!"

😆😆

Cheez kya hai ye bnda! 😆 The highlight of this update for me was the last Para! Doctor Sahiba having dirty thoughts! Gosh! She is so me! 🤣

Awesome chapter indeed!

Chapter 2: Khana Khazana

Title is again something worth praising! Snjeev Kapoor wohi Zee Tv wala! Jis ke show ke opening track mein wo chocolate cake ata tha? 😆 I hope so he is that one😆

Raju scratch that Arnav Singh Raizada trying hard to tackle the situation and get hold of it. Watching these cookery shows is never easy! I'm a victim of this torture! My Mom and her love for these kinds of shows just drives me crazy! He tried to be a Bawarchi but three years of continuous practice weren't able to teach me anything what these mere videos on internet would do to him that too overnight! 😆 After trying his luck and realizing he could never do it he sat like a Hara Hua Premy!

saala company ke wi-fi pe po*n dekhta hai'

🤣🤣


"Who the hell made me a lawyer? WHO THE HELL MADE ME A LAWYER? WHOTHEHELLMADEMEALAWYER?!

Le Me: Who said I can be a doctor? WHO SAID I CAN BE A DOCTOR? WHOSAIDICANBEADOCTOR!"🤣

And then his shatir dimag turned on! He did what a hopelessly bad Bawarchi would do😆 And she was trapped! She wasn't able to realize he was fooling her. Maan Gaye Raizada!😆 Everything was going on smoothly and then the expected thing happened. She came to know! His bad! He was trapped now! I was fearing an outburst but at the same time I was worried for him. As they say everything is fair in love and war and here love is the thing we are talking about.

Again a beautiful Update!

You Rocked girl!

Last Chapter: Raju Nikla Gentleman

So here we are with the last installment to this chronicles Of Raju Singh Raizada- The Bawarchiyon ka Bawarchi 🤣

The silent treatment Khushi gave to him was mind blowing. Her taunts and her Teasing gestures all were to die for! I loved that MAIN-NA-BHOOLN-GI and MAIN-BHULA-KE-BHI-RAHU-GA-MANA-KE-BHI-RAHU-GA game to the core! That Fun Fact game was just wow! Confessions of a madly in love lawyer cum bawarchi🤣

The reunion was just beyond imaginations! At last love won the battle. Loved the way he actually started learning how to cook. Hashtag thing and Bijaali Baai were the highlights of this update. That women was indeed a wonder! 😆

According to Mr SRK: Circle of Life! Jo Cheez jahan se khatam ho ussay wahi se start karo."

But here Jo cheez jaise start ho ussay wese hi khtam karo! Tamashe se start hua TS tamashe pe khtam!

"yi Raju! Ye gaal pe kya hai?

JESUS HOLY CHRIST!! I need to run! I NEED TO RUN! INEEDTORUN! Arnav and his inner voice said together."

Indeed it was damn damn damn amazing! You were at your best here! Do more humor! You are born to make us laugh with this Romantic Comedy!

P.S: HHKBH=Hans Hans K bura hal

MMJGHHK =Main Mar Jau Gi Hans Hans Kay!

P.P.S : Why If Is so damn annoying today! I'm editing this for the third time! Gosh!


Edited by ..Aimmy... - 10 years ago
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Me😳

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Heuheuheuehu🤣
You have done it sooo well cheesy
It was damn funny and Arnav's character is kind of very cute. A lawyer and yet he is so cool. He talkss to himself and with his brain, he goes behind a girl, has a good friend Aman, thats perfect 👏

Read both the parts together and both are fab! Arnav is a cook 😆 I was actually waiting for this story when I saw this banner in Aheli's gallery and I was so damn excited for it but was caught up in work after that, though managed to Res my spot 😳

I lob this one omnonmnonm 🤗
Keep writing! :)
Edited by Rishaal - 10 years ago
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🤣AWESOME.
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Allah that was seriously funny... I love it
Next part plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Arey wah.. New TS:) lovely start yaar..:) quite interesting concept arnav being cook n khushi doctor :) haha
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Now this was hilarious🤣
The charmer Arnav Singh Raizada fallen for a girl 😳...Love at first sight...aahh..sunke he maza aaya gaya😆
The gas..and the fart part was just 😆🤣 And that to in front of seven.partners😲😆...Need to say Aman is too good 😆
And than he thought he was hallucinating khushi every where...😳
Raju..the bawarchi😆🤣...muja abhi title smja 😳
Aaj kal koyi bhi.sudhar ho jata hai fair and lovely laga ke 🤣..Tell me please tell me arnav had listen to this words of buaji 😆 ohh..no he was busy dreaming😳
And than arnav was fixed as raju 😆
Aman had told everything to arnav..I wonder why..he knows nothing right ?? Or does he knows

Khana bana kar dabba pack karna hai! (I have to cook and back tiffin) He smiled.Could you please get out of my house? I am done with your sarcastic replies,

Did I tell you that I love aman and arnav bond... Fully like besties
Oohhooo toh khushi ko bhi sapne awaat hai..hello hi...😆
Toh aag dono taraf lage hai 😳
Now dekhna ye hai ke khana kaise banta hai aur khichdi kaise paakte hai arnav ke 😆
Thanks for pm cheeni di 🤗 And also for right an story..
Update soon😳
Abhi aapke taraf next update main tabhi tak likhte rehe aur read karte rehe cheeni di ke hilarious love story🤣
With you..even I am.getting hilarious😳

P.S I loved the banner 😃
Edited by bs1224 - 10 years ago
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Oh gosh that was hell.sweet
I just loved arnav and Inner monotonous talk

Khushi is sweetest as usual

Can't wait for next
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Ohh Boy,,, he lost his heart to Kushi and he is ready to do anything for her.. to prove his point, now he is gonna be cook for her..

Cant wait to read next part...

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