Arhi SS: A Friend in Need (M)~COMPLETE!~ Check page 73 (25/6/16) - Page 10

Lilypop,

Love this story and your pace of updating as also the progress in their relationship...Arnav and Khushi against the world is a the,e that resonates well in all the stories we read on this forum. And you have with your amazing narrative technique, taken it up a notch. Loved how Arnav was there for her and held her through the night. Wow. What more could anyone want from a man? No, he does not say he loves her back...but why do I get the feeling he is as committed to their relationship as she is. And how do things go wrong to the point where they end up with someone else? Waiting...

Best,

Absolutely well written...

Thx

Sri.

Continue soon

Let me take a moment to clap in your honor. Seriously, how do you come up with these concepts for your stories, the characters and keep they so raw and real? Teen suicides is such a sensitive issue and teenage itself is such a challenging phase. There are so many Amans in every corner of this world!! Makes me think how important a role parents play in a child's life. The little attention, care and love they give to their children can do wonders to them. Khushi indeed is a friend indeed! The reason Aman survived and revived his life is Khushi. She never gave up on him, stood by him and supported him. Poor girl, again blaming her for his suicide and feeling all guilty! She is such an angel! At such a young age she is no honorable that she didn't let Aman's suicide slip out event o Arnav!! She didn't care about all the mudslinging on her character. Ahh! Poor girl's, big heart has fallen for a rich boy. Well heart knows what it knows it doesn't know not to love a rich boy! Khushi is being drawn to Arnav like moth to a flame. She has no control or choice there!!

I think Arnav has this tendency to push things under carpet and not talk through them or pay close attention to things around him. He comes across as thickhead!! He definitely, cares for Khushi , no doubt but at the moment he cares little bit more about her body than heart.

I almost thought Khushi will accept Aman's proposal to be his girlfriend!! But glad they talked openly and resolved it without any fuss or mess. Aman, is always going to watch out for Khushi, I think.

Payal belongs to the clan of humans, who when go down want to take rest of the world down with them. They have no loyalty, gratitude or love for anybody!

I am dreading the day when Khushi's heart will be broken!! I don't see any respite for her from manipulations and emotional blackmails!! I hope her father is okay!! Another curveball!

Poor Khushi very innocent at that age

She had definitely faced a huge heartbreak😭

Update soon

After reading this update, I read chapter 1 and made me wonder how things have gone wrong so badly between them...the passion, love and everything still exists...but its been damaged and needs to be set...