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Posted: 10 years ago

#991

Hi jenny sorry I cant find my res but had to leave a note! Loved that they are talking ... well almost talking. He needs to tell her how he felt, what seeing her with Aman did to him, and what happened when he got back to his flat. She rightly so feels betrayed, just as he did hence his cruel words. Kiss in the rain .. well il say no more😉

Finally Anita, ireally hope she tells Khushi about Aman, and if Aman does come, Arnav won't be happy until he knows that Aman is no there for Khushi..
Apologies again for the late reply.

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addictedx53

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It would have been so simple for Arnav to have simply denied having any feeling. Yet, that look meaning something, perceived as something else, hints at so many possibilities. This story is not a simple love story, it is so finely nuanced in its emotions, we would be disappointed if it is anything but.

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ks_Larhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#993

Brilliant! Worth the wait 👏

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#994

Two things stood out in this chapter...firstly, Arnav's realization (which comes in small measures on a frequent basis) of how wrong he was back then, and then questioning himself if it was really he who said what he said and did what he did. Many a times we act in a manner only to realize later of how wrong we were and our incapability of associating it with out self. I'm glad in the way it was portrayed.

Secondly, the depiction of grief. The death o a loved one is never easy. Time heals; for some faster than for others, but it still leaves a hollow within you, that keeps flooding memories of the person who is no more. One shouldn't be applauding the way Arnav's grief was shown, but then that's what it truly deserves. It was raw, poignant and had the power to move the toughest of hearts.

Good to see that Khushi noticed Anita's wistfulness. Can't wait to see Khushi's reaction after knowing about Anita's affections for Aman.

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Shah Sair Hassan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#995

read from thread 14.n here i m in thread 20.. wohoo

bht zyda padh liya maine. when i thought to comment individualy bt i ws greedy soncha pehley jaldis e padh lou...

milna bichdana...

lavanya's sucide attempt..

so much hidden yet u revealed bht zydaaa..

Sujata is still same.. no change in 6 threads..lol

anita is true well wisher n yes a good sister.. achi behney hoti hai aese jo wqt aney pe ladh b jati hai..lyk maniya lavamya's sis..

navin ki health isues rrealy lyk my dad.. jiski wjh e i m nt active on IF so much..

Aakash ne halp kr di.. now aman n arnav ki mulaqat hogi shyd in cuming episodes..

Arnav's mom... i js love her.. kya jwab diya Shashi ko. nt lyk Khuhi's parents.. bt as i trust u so u have valid point na ? y she is behaving lyk dis..?

will try to read rest of d updates to mmorow.. n yes thanks for showing Khushi'sside coz i too was angry on her lyk arnav..

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@addicted25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#996

Hello Jenny, first my apologies ive been MIA for a few months, AD getting the best of me. Im back now and will be catching up in the next few weeks. 😃

Chapter 51. Just lovely. Their love is still pulling them together, but their own fears keep pushing them away. They need to get away and talk, away from family. The kiss in the rain showed they loved each other, no needed each other, both had been miserable since their last meeting. I loved how their silent conversations were more their thoughts but neither understanding the other need to be wanted by the other.
I loved Arnavs thought about Aarav, the blue rocket and the moon, I could almost see them together, but Khushis word brought him peace, and he bagan to heal.
Will Anita tell her little secret to her sister? I hope so they are now adults and should be ble to talk to each other about anything. Sisters are so dear.
I hope that Arnav tells her the truth, that he wanted to hold on to the love and comfort he found in Khushi, soul mates do that, but its easier for him as he doesnt have his mother living with him, a girl needs her parents blessings before she can move on. The anxt at home didnt help her nor her father, and the fact shes moved out hasnt even registered yet

Jenny your writing is just beautifully done! X