OS: Sleepless in New Delhi

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IFrozenl

@IFrozenl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Aww..totally loved the one shot!

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mona

@automaticstart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

ok hands down this was so damn adorable

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I'll be back with words later! 😳

Back with updated review!

It is beautiful and I've already told you, I loved it.

My favorite points, the easy bantering (I do prefer to read anything that shows them comfortable with each other, more than hard core romance), the subtle detailing, Arnav nibbling food while Anjali berated or him holding her pillow, and Khushi's final imagination.

Oh, and of course the butt-talks 😆

You should write more, you know?

Edited by the_rain - 9 years ago

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Ecrivain

@Ecrivain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Khushi is working? Where? And she mentioned about 'endorsing' a brand. Is it post the Mrs.India track? As much as I abhorred that track I must say that reading this OS on the backdrop of that track was quite enthralling.

Picturing a grumpy Arnav away from his beloved wife was a rather cute scenario to think off and I enjoyed reading this piece more than the last one. I like how intelligently you think. This shot encapsulated the crux of 'why' Arnav needs Khushi in his life, like he needs the next breath to live on. You have worded it well, far better than the first OS and I must say that i thoroughly enjoyed reading about a Khushi who can tease Arnav and get away with it, while Arnav misses her dearly.

Archana. your portrayal of Anjali is going to make me fall in love with her. I had really admired Anjali in the early months of the show but didnt really relate to her in the second half of it. Of course because of the tracks that were playing on that time. Anyway, she is such a darling SIL and sis here. And I loved how Khushi complained about being held responsible for indulging Arnav. That blame HAS to be put on Anjali, if at all someone has to bear it. And Khushi is right, role reversal indeed.

I see that you have mentioned in both the pieces how Arnav is laughing more, he is carefree and more giving. A Wordsworth moment for a 'happily ever after'. You have delightfully encompassed the changes in Arhi along with their married life in a piece of fiction that stands true to its words.

Well done!!

PS You have brought back so many memories of one of my fave flicks ' Sleepless in Seattle' with this shot. Hanks and Ryan nailed it. Do watch the movie in case you havent.