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Posted: 10 years ago

Bhavii,

Very glad you believe the same.
but some how that line aisa ladka of his didn't have as much impact or works as an evidence for me although I did use it in a recent chat about the same topic only for fun. anything post their remarriage is not an index of either of these for me. they were aberrant forms of their original selves there. .. the kind of gullibility he says that was un believable..as if such ideas didn't even crossed his head. Such mellowed versions can not leave a girl to fall on top of boxes in the middle of work place or send her to manage parking on rainy nights.. he was ruthlessly cruel.. as much as I love and adore him ..
that initial asr wouldn't leave the revelation of shyam, the man who ruined the lives of both the women imp to him to a stage drama, neither would he let Khushi whose one tear he couldn't bear to be embarrassed and belittled in that basket ball court. Post remarriage, these two are just some one else's.
I absolutely agree with that womanizer part. Its so very easy to give into all sorts of addictions post a major life trauma. But he had let that tragedy only set a stone for his determination and success which is the hallmark of his character.. super hot any time...
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Posted: 10 years ago
^^^

hi bhavii,

thanks for reading 299 and liking it.

you are right, those two together were something else. i remember my husband being blown away and asking if they were together in real life...
i was so engrossed in the love and romance of khushi and asr, i forgot to think about barun and sanaya and i have to say when i'd see them horsing around together, that felt natural and just the kind of relationship you needed to be able to get that comfortable with portraying romance with each other. no holds barred, they just went for it.

i loved the way asr's character and its basic traits kept coming through. and asr's love.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cineraria

Thank you much Ria. Glad if the technical glitches are not obvious. I may make few more VMs just with ASR's solitudes and his inner talks and torture you guys a little more.. that man is a wafting ghazal for me..
Not a fan of AB songs, but not certainly totally put off either, he had come a long way since silsila as a singer I thought. And his raw voice didn't hinder the listening pleasure for me surely with the melody and lyrics firmly taking over. Ekla charo le is very nice one yes..
btw, may the rabba ve and asr cap talk from your dad in your house continue... reminded my hubby's comment last year when we bought the touch screen lappy first time, he would say now you can touch your asr and maneuver the way you like.. 😆(he meant minimize/ maximize windows with touch etc..).. wonder why he didn't say it for ipad .. that left me quite embarrassed as my love asr is always cupping face and kissing forehead wala one..😆
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Originally posted by: cineraria


@bold. You did? I still do. I try to imagine he ain't lip syncing and just stare at his eyes. But darn, it's so tough to avoid those lips, even if the voice they are syncing with doesn't jell well.
Ahh, what voice would suit him? Umm, I have one on my mind, if I was talented enough to make VMs I would have made one. But'll post the song.

It's one of those remixes that retain the soul of the original song. This is Ek ajnabee hasina se yun mulakaat ho gayi by KK (not Kishore Kumaar)


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xPDOXdyz40s[/YOUTUBE]



I know, its absolutely cringe worthy. imagining it without that lip sync. what it would have been .. its already next to heaven.. perhaps that was to save our lives .. not to make it any more perfect.. that would make it literally breathtaking...

yes, i heard that remix.. very nice one...hubby huge fan of kk went to couple of his shows.. I gather from your birthday thread.. you are smitten by his voice too.. his voice range is quite extraordinary.

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Originally posted by: Horizon



I know, its absolutely cringe worthy. imagining it without that lip sync. what it would have been .. its already next to heaven.. perhaps that was to save our lives .. not to make it any more perfect.. that would make it literally breathtaking...

yes, i heard that remix.. very nice one...hubby huge fan of kk went to couple of his shows.. I gather from your birthday thread.. you are smitten by his voice too.. his voice range is quite extraordinary.


I hate that lip sync of his. He went all out. Yet Sanaya hardly opened her mouth to the female voice.
I really liked amitabhs voice in your vm, like I mentioned before Indu.
Kk is good Aria though I havent heard this song. Who is singing for him in MAMR? Ah did I just cal you Aria. I guess thats bcoz Aliya sweetheart of MAMR is stuck in my head!
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episode-301


Khushi comes to Akash and apologies on behalf of Payal. She knows he is upset with Khushi. She says that Payal didn't say anything about Shyam because her mom...she can't complete as Payal intervenes she chides Khushi for prying her personal life again. Though Akash wants to meliorate her, but Payal doesn't give him a chance and drags her out from the room. Nani and mami also come right then and as usual mami starts to lacerate them with despicable words.. Nani scolds mami for being nasty, but who will make the uncivilized woman understand. She will not stop, because she thinks these two sisters ruined her Anjali bitwa's life, especially phatti saree. Nani defends Khushi. She agrees that what happened to Anjali was really bad, but Khushi is not reprehensible in this matter, who is to blame is Damadji, these two sisters remained quiet definitely because of some reasons. Nani says to mami that it's very easy to point fingers to others, but for the peace of the family these two kept quite.

"I will also not let this family breaks, or moreover when my Anjali bitiya needs it most."

Mami couldn't accept her point so she leaves making mean face. Akash goes to mollify his inexorable mom. And nani tries to comfort Khushi.


Khushi was sitting outside her room, having tea. When she sees Anjali is traipsing across the hallway,, she immediately goes inside the room.

I felt so bad for her, she is Arnav's wife, but literally has to live in the house like a thief as if she committed a crime, whereas she did no crime.


Khushi struggles to shake off s vague disquietude in her heart, which makes her feel so low. She opens the closet door in her room and gets flabbergasted to see Arnav who is hiding there just like the way Khushi did once. A slight smile plays on her face to see his delirium, but she controls it feigning nonchalance. He jumps down and says Khushi that he has been trying to reminisce those old moments whatever they did together.

"did you remember anything?" his caramel eyes are dancing with wicked humor.

"nahi" Khushi' replies sternly. She even avoids looking in his eyes. Arnav thinks to do more prank, so he throws tea at her.

"aab?" he asks her. She is completely dumbfounded at his sudden attack and starts to cough. Arnav looks at her ruefully to see her coughing.


Khushi recollects the moment when she threw hot tea at him. Arnav stares at her expecting some kind of response, but without saying a word, she turns to leave. A vein throbs at the angle of his taut jaw as she ignored him. He holds her wrist and says grimly,

"Again, when I talk to you." NK's lesson echoes in his ear drum, that he should control his anger and breathe in and out, so he changes his tone and says meekly,

"khushi I am talking to you, why are you turning and going away?'

Impervious Khushi turns to him and wrenches herself out of his hold. she says tersely, "yes I am turning away from you. Now what will you do Mr. arnav singh raizada?"

Khushi turns to leave again. Arnav's face gets dark with anger and the rage in his eyes causes her to jolt with a touch of fear. He holds her again and in one swift movement, he tweaks her towards him in a jerk by twisting her hand from behind. Khushi lands on his chest and Arnav says desperately his voice pulsating menacingly,

'mai kya kaar sakta hoon, ye tum achchci tarah janti ho...you know very well what can I do,"


Khushi looks at his eyes and he also looks at her eyes with suppressed rage. The memory of the dori tearing scene reverberates in her mind. He gently moves her thick lock in one side of her shoulder exposing her long swan like neck. His eyes get murky with desire and he leans to kiss her. But Khushi is tenacious today, she will not let him do any sort of romance with her. She pushes him with full force and throws her tea at him. His jaw tautens at her action while his caramel eyes get frozen into little chips of ice. He pulls her again peremptorily by holding her neck. Khushi gasps inaudibly. But as s soon as she collides with his chest, the ice from his frozen caramel pools start to melt in and passion takes possession.


Khushi looks at him with darting eyes; his romantic, passionate look can't tame her.

"aap battamizee kar raha hai." She retorts in a hostile accusatory tone.

"battamizee to ab mei ne abhi shuru bhi nahi kiya Khushi kumari gupta." ...he emanates an aura of animal magnetism by his words and actions what is impossible to ignore. And we can clearly see the effect on her as she is shivering at his touch.

"aap aisa nahi kar sakte...you can't do such thing."

"kiyu nahi kaar sakte, biwi ho tum meri...why I can't do it..you are my wife... my legally wedded wife. yehi nahi,mai aur bhi bohot kuch kaar sakta hoon...not only this I can do some other thing too." His husky voice is getting dense with aphrodisia and the words sound lyrical, almost hypnotizing.

"aapne mujhe jabardasti shaadi ki.hum aapko apna pati nahi mante...You married me forcefully. I don't accept you my husband" she is also tremulous in anger.

But Arnav's rage is already relegated; all semblances of restraint flew out the window and passion reigns supreme.

"theek hai, aab maanwa lete hai... OK, now I will make you accept" his voice is like a velvety caress and his eyes get more turbid with carnal desire, what makes Khushi weak in her knees. His look slowly veers to her lips and he leans down to kiss her, but Khushi becomes so weak that can't protest him any more. Her sexy husband is making her numb. But they can't kiss as Hp comes to let them know that nani is calling. To see HP, rather extricating Khushi Arnav pulls her closer to him and holds her tightly. He says HP reluctantly that they are coming.

When HP left khushi gets an opportunity to move away from him. She pushes him in a jerk and leaves in trepidation. Arnav is smirking mischievously with an amused affection for his angry jhalli babe.

If it is not hormonal locha or what is it!


Whenever he tries to kiss Khushi, some one always interrupts either his phone or anybody. Next time he should lock the door of the room, what he doesn't have I guess and he should turn off his phone while doing romance with his sexy wife.

Arnav and Khushi stand come to talk to nani. Nani is dumbfounded to see their wet face. Khushi says "woh coffee." Arnav snatches her words that Khsuhi spilt coffee. Khushi retorts, no aap...she starts to stammer, "woh coffee, I slipped on coffee, I mean coffee spilt on me and tea."

Nani jests them, "chaye pe chottey geer gaya.humra matlab hai, chottey pe chaye geer gayi.

"Haa.". Khushi answers hesitantly. Arnav looks at her ruefully and notices the bruise mark on her hand.

Nani jeers again, it meant you both drank your tea and coffee, right? then I must say we should get ready for satsang."

Arnav knows about the plan already, Akash told him and he also will accompany them. Nani gets a bit surprised, "you also want to go, then I must warn you, that on the way Anjali bitiya wants to go to another mandir."

Arnav is good with it. The man has changed so much. He now is ready to bear all sitam of his sister and wifey too.

Nani tells khushi that as she wants to stay home...Khushi says she will be fine at home. Arnav looks a bit upset. He thought khushi was also going.

I now can understand why he agreed to go so easily, he thought he would have a nice outing with his pretty wife, who is now mad at him. Or his sad di would be happy if he goes with them in the temple.

Nani leaves and Khushi also turns to leave. Arnav holds her hand to stop her. Khushi chides him what he is doing?

"lagi tume..did it hurt?" his voice gets huskier in compunction.

"haa, lekin aapse chot khane ki aadat hai hume"

Arnav stares at her with contrition. Khushi continues,

"But still I didn't accept you my husband,"


She brushes off his hand and scurries towards the stairs. Arnav also follows her and stops her in the middle of the stair. He comes close to her face and blocks her by keeping his hand on her both sides. He says with velvety voice,

"manogi, tum humse apna husband manogi." his husky voice penetrates through her turbulent mind, but she is in denial mood now,

"nahi manoogi." she gives him a stern look

manogi. mai manwaoonga tume." He leans closer and he drawls with his eyes dancing with mischief and amusement.

"Nowadays you start to dream a lot." Khushi says the words that seems erupts in the forefront of her angry mind.

She intends to go, but he blocks her way again. When she wants to go from other side, he also keeps his hand on the glass, cages her and leans closer. He says with the husky timbre of his voice,

"daurte hue mere baho mai aaogi.Khushi kumari gupta singh Raizada." can't explain how sexy his husky voice sounded, actually was making me aphrodisiac and he solemn look in his caramel eyes is belied by a trace of mischief in their swirling depth.

'Hum aur apke baho mei, jis din aise hua hum apko apna pati manoongi." she is trembling at his close proximity, but still doesn't show her weakness. Her body language is not supporting her words actually.

Arnav nods his head with confidence and says "deal"

"sauda, but it will not fulfill in this life time." Khushi also makes a deal with him, but she is determined that she will not come to him by any means.

Arnav moves away gives her access to go.

"dekhte hai." he says crossing his hands on his chest. He is confident of winning this deal cause he knows nothing is invincible for ASR.


'jaab kuch hoga hi nahi, to aap kya dekehnge." She leaves grumbling. Arnav's mouth is a little agape in amazement and a glimmer of smile suffuses his eyes. Before entering the room, Khushi looks back at him and he gives her a quizzical smile.

NK also watches them fighting, he quips, "oh god iss war ko mai kya naam doon?"

Anjali is getting ready for the satsang. Arnav comes there to ask her is she ready? Anjali is happy that he is going with her. Arnav says why she planned to travel so far in this condition! he guesses he didn't keep any stupid fast this time. While he was talking to Anjali, he gets a call from Aman, to let him know about a meeting with his client in Agra. He gets mad at him, why he kept a meeting in Agra? He tells him to cancel the meeting, his client can wait, but his family can't. Anjali tells him to go to his meeting. Arnav says he can wait three months for the meting. Anjali insists him not to cancel and he agrees. But he is upset that he can't go with them. Anjali tries to assuage him, he wished to go to the mandir with them, that is enough. She lovingly caresses his face.

Though I didn't like her to touch him so much, but my Faiqa di told me not be jealous as she is his sister. So I started to ignore.

mami is ready to go, how she dressed as if she is going to a wedding party, not for pooja,

Arnav bitua, Anjali, letz gojjj.'

Arnav tells her that he is not going, but she should take care of his di.


All are getting ready to go for satsang.. To see Payal standing near the front door of the car, Mami berates her, "there is pregnant lady in the house, but you want to sit front."

Mami's disparagement to Payal is getting into my nerve. She is literally treating her DIL like a maid. Payal actually opened the door for Anjali.


Arnav is getting ready for the meeting. khushi as usual busy wrapping her clothes.

pause: It's good that Khushi does her own work by herself. But as she is a very smart and intelligent girl she should utilize her brain in some good thing. I was thinking she can be a professional danceras she is fabulous dance. or she could continue her studies. She can do some course in fashion designing, as her husband owns clothing line and she also knows so many intricate embroidery work. I really don't like her dabba business.

Let's come to the episode, Arnav tells her to accompany him to Agra. The whole family went for satang and will come late at night. HP is also not at home. But Khushi is reluctant, "so!"

Arnav is fixing his shirt sleeves and ties looking at Khushi. He actually wants to be around her. chemical locha!" He offers her to go with him to Agra, so that she can watch taj mahal too.

'I already saw. I need to clean." She replies annoyingly.

"apne dimmagki!" He derides her.

'woh to apki jaate hi ho jayegi."

Arnav grabs his jacket and leaves in despair. Khushi exasperates more. She comes to close the door and blabbers,

"nahi humse apna pati manna, nahi apko baho mei samana, nahi apke sath taj mahal dekhna."

suna humne." he screams from outside.
"if you listened then remember it."

Pause: I didn't get ASR's temerity, how could he leave Khushi alone in the home where he knows shyam is free outside. He could come and do harm to Khushi!

Mami's drama continues outside. She opens the door for Nani and she intends to sit beside her. When Payal wanted to sit, she says with highhandedness that there are so much people! Or she has payalphobia, she means calstorophobia. She tells her to sit back. Nani scolds mami what she is saying, she tells Payal to come with her. But the sweet and sensible Payal goes to the back seat of the car. Rudali is comfortably sitting on the front like a ramrod. She shuts her eyes, as if she doesn't care any body any more. Is she sick? Pregnancy is not sickness, then why she is acting that she is groggy and wilting and all. Attention seeker dramebaaz!

Akash this time relents his naive wife a bit. He gets down to open the back door for her. Sweet Payal's heart suffuses with gratitude by Akash's small gesture of kindness. She looks at him lovingly.

Raizada family is so lucky to get two most beautiful, sensible and nice girls as their DIL. They should pamper them, not insult them.

In her room Khushi is in her monologue, tries to placate herself,

"This is what I wanted, a little solitude. bina laad governor ki paagal prem, no pagal wali dhamki,"

But she gets scared at the wind, banging sound of the door and the thunder as well. She tries to allay her fear, "it must be wind." She starts calling HP, laxmi, but nobody is at home.

The sound of rain and thunder intensifies. Khsuhi is cowering now, trying to assuage her mind, that it's nothing. But she feels somebody's presence,

"Who is it?" She shuts the door and says to herself that nothing Khushi, just remember DM and sees what is it? She flutters in fear as the air around her getting scarier. She notices that there is electricity in some parts of the house and not in some parts. She thinks to fix the fuse. But as the fuse is by the poolside, she decides to go there. A tremor runs through her vein as she walks across the poolside. She is trying to pacify herself that nobody is here. But a shadow, ascending up the pool stairs daunts her. She asks who is it over there. She is now cursing herself for not going with Arnav. She picks a plant pot for her self defense and constantly screams in fear, who is it, who is there?

When first time the episode aired I was a bit afraid, whether it shyam or not. Because Arnav just let Shyam go free, didn't make him arrested. Though I was kind of sure if any predator would come, Arnav sure would come to save Khushi. Because we already saw Arnav was talking somebody while driving. I anticipated that for some reason he will come back.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRSr7t3rVms[/YOUTUBE]

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Edited by sohara - 10 years ago
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Episode 304


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNCyv3fjcWM[/YOUTUBE]

First Telecast Tuesday, 24th July 2012

Full episode links
Thanks, Katelyn, for all the links.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Horizon



I know, its absolutely cringe worthy. imagining it without that lip sync. what it would have been .. its already next to heaven.. perhaps that was to save our lives .. not to make it any more perfect.. that would make it literally breathtaking...

yes, i heard that remix.. very nice one...hubby huge fan of kk went to couple of his shows.. I gather from your birthday thread.. you are smitten by his voice too.. his voice range is quite extraordinary.


Arre behen, tell jijaji, one the greatest fans of KK is on IF. That I am smitten by his voice is an understatement, I had slipped in my bathroom and gotten hurt just to have a valid reason to skip school and catch his 10 minute radio interview as a school kid. 😆 😆
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Soha, loved your post on that full on besharam episode. Oh I could just kill HP in this one. 😡
You made me relive that experience of watching it the first time. I agree with all others here that 300 onwards, in fact kidnapping onwards, the show had too many takniki kharaabis (glitches) and illogicalities to ignore, but dude this was the only phase we had Arnav and Khushi together and happy, almost.

Come remarriage, and it all ended. In fact for me the show ended on 27th September. Bas.


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Originally posted by: indi52

episode 299

a wish at 5 to 12.

a man watches his wife silently, as she lies in bed, eyes closed.

he walks up and sits by a girl he can't live without, how much he would like to wish her on her birthday but the communications lines are down, short circuited.

no matter. he will try... again and again and again. he's a doer, he must keep trying. never say die.

a whole attitude to life, almost a philosophy gets expressed to me in that relentless trying by arnav singh raizada. might be just a birthday going off track and the scenes may be cute and funny or irritating and silly, but the story to me is that of a man who doesn't give up easily. in fact, ever.

again that sign of a man who engages directly with life and does all he can to make it work. much later, khushi will talk to him about bhagya, fate... he will feel wretched his sister had such a miserable life despite his best efforts. but i feel, that lecture needed a strong end line... that a human being tried his/her best is what it's all about. in that lies truth, beauty, even prayer perhaps. because no matter what bhagya might strike us with, we take responsibility and make effort. that is our duty. we are not just flotsam and jetsam in an uncaring, indifferent ocean of life where our existence has no impact... in that case why try anyting.

i love this character for reminding me of that basic need to always be at it. never give up.

i am watching khushi, lying there, eyes closed, pretending to be fast asleep. i know at one point i am going to get really irritated with her behaviour. and even not fathom it. but before that i try to just feel her feelings. she is a hurt young woman, no idea perhaps how to handle this whole thing, even her own feelings, mixed up and wretched and not being able to forgive and forget.

i will make every excuse i can for khushi in my head, because that love still feels real, even if writing is forgetting its role.


his hand comes up, in it a single red rose. her favourie flower. he had not been able to give it to her, but he will do so. rabba ve plays as he places it with something akin to devotion by her head, on the pillow. she is the one he has allowed in and she resides deep within.

he swallows hard looking at her... his hand finds its way to her, to tuck her hair away as he has ever since a night in a building collapsing... maybe something in him started to break and tumble that very night, the wall, the fort of indiffernce.. gently the hair is tucked back.

ashko se kah paaoon na... kyun dard hai itna... the song goes in the background.

"happy birthday, khushi..." he is moved to tears by a feeling.

"i wish tumhe iss duniya ki saari khushiya mile." i hope you get al the happiness in the world.

a kiss on the forehead, lingering.



she was awake but she feigned sleep.

and she wept for him, but couldn't relent. what are these mixed up emotions that eat into us?


he stayed thoughtful, a little quiet... again being tried by this bedard world.

the he got up and left.

i am sure like scarlett he must have thought... tomorrow is another day.

tomorrow came on a plink plonk happy funny note. the episode had to be moved away from the intense heaviness of the previous night. this is a daily soap, audiences will possibly not accept to much of sadness at a stretch.


nk is the ultimate positive upbeat feel good character. he is consuming vast quantities of cake and poor asr has been roused first thing in the morning by the interfering love guru.

so rahi thi? he is shocked to hear that khushi slept through the much expected and insited upon wishing.

haan, admitted asr.

"nannav... what the..."

came nk's quick reply. cute... but do i really like it?

when nk tried to tell asr he was just not getting it right, the man said something i did like.

"woh so rahi thi usski problem hai, meri nahin..."

that she was sleeping is her problem, not mine.

a bit of a boy with an attitude here rather than a man who is all attitude and frantically fab attitude in this whole nk coaches asr in wooing his lover phase. it was light, but not really plausible. i can't quite see asr needing help in this department. or maybe he has a penchant for madcaps, we know he does love one, and so just tolerated nk... let him go on.

"main tumhari bakwas yahan khada hokey kyun sun..." why am i standing here and listening to your noonsense... the man had to exclaim and shove the plate with lodas of cake against nk's stomach

barun's body language was riveting as always.

the much repeated and liked, "lambi saans andar lo aur lambi saans bahar phenko..." take a deep breath in and exhale a long one, dialogue came up.

a couple of silly jokes... i get the feeling nk with his wacky but yet normal personality, a young man from australia, with views that most of us can easily identify with, connected us to the world outside shantivan and a soap. he was our ink to the real world.

the making of great effort to achieve an objective continues.


poor man goes to nani all boyish and soft, he says, "actually mujhe mujhe kuch chahiye..." so sweetly. hmm, maybe he doesn't want gran to guess. but gran sure suspects something when the mathura aloo poori request happens. and he clearly says he used to come for his summer vacations to delhi... so he could not have studies in a school in delhi for years together, he must have joined at fourteen and studied only a few years here.

anjali is down, it's monthly check up day, and her shyam ji ain't available. maybe she will ask chhotey?

how do sleeves of blouses become short the moment you are sad?

tension at the breakfast table... mami akash payal triangle is looking gloomy. kkgsr in angry vein, though she had tears in her eyes after fudging him the night before, again avoids him and does not sit next to asr. nk starts interfering cutely, plonking down beside asr. nani says graciously she has made breakfast, mami spoils the fun asr looks at wife, worried mami's caustic remarks will hurt her. akash just sits there.


"manorama aap bhi toh ee ghar ki bahuria hain, aap kahe naahin phinger liphatiya karat hai," aaah nani in full form after a long time.

manorama, you too are a daughter in law of the family, why don't you lift your fingers ever?

he offers khushi the potato, grabs her hand, she pulls away... hmm, the man who does, keeps at it. alas, nk spoils the fun... khushi doesn't eat.

why why why i want to rant at the ever more petty young woman. attention seeking behaviour really.

"thanks, nani, bahut accha tha," with a little smile, the grandson thanks his beloved nani. lovely. she made the effort, he must acknowledge, even if the ploy failed. opposite of petty, this fellow.

he walks away, ire rising and also determination, "main vada karta hoon tumhe aisa surprise doonga jo tumhe achha lagkar hi rahega," promise you, will give you such a surprise, you'll have to love it.


tenacious.

as he dictates the message to be written on a card, anjali walks in.

"to my dear wife, khushi kumari gupta singh raizada..." she hears it and the madness starts in her again.

the moment he sees di however, it's "let me call you back later..." and he is with his sister. but she has heard he is again thinking of his wife. again that sense of being abandoned, she says it's fine and leaves.

and after a long time that music of tension, chaos and heartbreak...violin strings pulling out an emotion.

satsang talk is on. why is kkgsr always in this nan..n..ni ji stammer mode? what's thi? another achhi bahu thing, you must speak with asense of trepidation which will then be seen as tender sensitivity and the right way for bahu to address elders. i need to scream at somebody. really.

in a room staring at laptop, man waits with surprise. green shiny wrapper... arragh... wrapper aesthetics challenged show. she walks in, he has hidden the gift below the washed clothes. another raizda wives preoccupation, sorting clothes and folding. constantly.

a nice eye thing, he looks expectant.. she notices that and is then hesitant...

she sees the pack, again some pretending and walks away.
exasperated... he still tries once more. places the box in a more prominent place. she of course does not see it... not.

finally it gets to him. with an "enough!" air, an angry man with pursed lips and flaming eyes stands with pack in hand. and blocks won't give in wife's path.

"ab dikh raha?" can you see it now.

they really are like kids at times. that ease around each other. leg pulling, irritating. he had to stop all play so suddenly... maybe that's why he had to meet this young child woman, ber eating, talking to self, unpredictable, jalebi making, pagal angry girl. perfect playmate.






sometimes, nothing may make sense or even be very sharp writing, but when a man looks at a woman like that, that's all that keeps me there. there's a whole story in just a look at times. with all the tension drama conflict plot and denouement.





Indi Behen when I was reading it last night, the lights went out and so did the internet and I couldn't respond earlier. This was beautiful sistah... I specially loved the lines in purple. 👏 👏


And the edits. Oh wow. 👏 👏 👏

How do you do that? Which software do you use? I loved all black and white save the red rose. It's such a breathtaking picture. I am downloading these to cherish. Awesome job.




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