arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Awesome update as usual Di!!! Loved it!!!

At last got a glimpse into Arnav's past, poor Anji, Arnav and his mom felt do bad!!!

Arrrgh Shyam cannot believe him atleast Anji is moving on in her life with the good doctor!!!

Lol drunk Khushi thinks she is dharmender hehehe, and I am sure she will continue with her craziness!!!

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: yoga123
Awesome chapters 34 and 35...thanks for the PM

hi yoga, thanks, glad you had fun. 😃

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: sohara
Loved it.
so many things happened in this chapter.
Arnav and Khushis' mature conversation at the beginning to their delirium at the end.
Arnav is a pragmatic man. he never wanted Khushi to change for him. That's a great quality we rarely find in men. it's good that he also gave Khushi the right to be angry and rebel if needed. but Khushi changed after the wedding. Initially she used to antagonize him a lot, but later in the show we saw her rather compromising. How you show her, it's up to you though.
Arnav thought about Verma. good. Anjali also should think about it seriously. Life must not end with a swindler and pervert husband like Shyam. This anjali in your story is stronger and sensible, what I admired.
Mami was cute! I enjoyed how she took care of Payal. OP has learned english!😆 I'm impressed. Khushi should be here in India during the birth of Payal's baby. Remember she wanted to name them aloo and poori.
It was great that Khushi's babuji finally got out from the wheel chair and revealed more dirty secret of Shyam. It was always my complain that he was never recovered and couldn't reveal shyam's truth in the show.
it was so lovely when Khushi ran to Arnav when she was upset with her dad.

ha... so you like my cousin now...😆

sohara, thanks so much for reading and your comment... yeah, i have nudged the characters a bit in the direction i find more natural... especially after the marriage and asr and kkg living to gether for a while. she must annoy him... i hope she does... that is part of their loving each other.

and yes, she will be in india when payaliya has aloo kumar and poori kumari.

glad you liked the chapter... hoping to do a short take while i am in london next week. see ya.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: nisso

Thank! 😊 awesome update!
i read the in one go!
loved it!🤗

thanks, nisso... always good to see you. 😳😃🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
That was an awesome chap di. The battle b/w Arnav's mind & heart yet one thing clear that khushi was his, only his for six months, for forever to hate & to love.

Arnav was very happy & energetic in d morning but he sensed khushi's disturbed behaviour. He realised that even though forgiving is easy, forgetting is not. I m so glad dat arnav talked abt his feelings wid her. He wants her to enjoy her freedom, choti & badi khushis, be herself. He wants her enjoy what his mother was deprived of.

khushi & arnav drunk were cute. Arnav & his sinful thoughts. Yes, Arnav this is a very valid point. There is no ban on kissing & making love to ur khushi in khushi's red car-er bus...

hi arhi_crazy,

thank you.

all that in pink, i am glad you enjoyed. it was always love, wasn't it... just that it showed it's many faces and not all were easy to handle.

i have a feeling, arnav singh's way of looking at and understanding women has a lot to do with his relationship with his mother... so i guess i felt he might say that to her.

ha ha... the big red london bus, plenty room for ahem.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: rk2127
Khushi and Arnav drunk and Khushi taking Arnav on a ride on her red car... Um bus. Was awesome. Where Arnav wanted to do totally different things in the solace of there bedroom. 😉
But yeah he can surely kiss his Khushi in her big red.

The chapter was a real good one with Arnav's thought during the day of contract marriage, to him understanding Khushi's mood and hurt of giving up something which he didn't like (glad that they talked) to him talking to Anjali and discussing about love and second chances. All this showed how Khushi transformed this ruthless arrogant and non believer of love ASR to a passionate understanding lover.

What's new is on ASR mind and yours for the direction of this story?

hi rk,

khushi needs variety ji variety i think he he... why settle for grey bedroom when you can have red bus??? ha ha.

passionate understanding lover. okay i am dead.

rk, my feeling about asr is, he all along had the potential and the magnificent heart of a good strong man capable of great love... circumstances stymied him... khushi broke through his barriers with her astounding innocence and clean heart and sanka, which is pure unadulterated khushi, and helped him release himself... come out of the thick wall of no feeling he had surrounded himself with to block the pain... i see evolution... not transformation... and in kkg too... he made her become all the woman she could be... evolve... i am talking bakbak. but you know what i mean na.

thanks for your fab comment.

i have no idea really where we are headed... but more and more i get a sense of homecoming.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: anu1017
Awesome update as usual Di!!! Loved it!!!
At last got a glimpse into Arnav's past, poor Anji, Arnav and his mom felt do bad!!!

Arrrgh Shyam cannot believe him atleast Anji is moving on in her life with the good doctor!!!

Lol drunk Khushi thinks she is dharmender hehehe, and I am sure she will continue with her craziness!!!

thanks so much, archana,

i am glad drunk khushi was liked... she and her sanka, keep my man alive and smiling and he and his hotness, keep her in dhakdhak paradise.

i try to look at what might have been i asr and anjali's life back in sheeshmahal... i hope i get a sense of it.

see you soon. glad you enjoyed.

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Devilways

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Posted: 10 years ago

#568

Hey,

I loved the last few updates. I am curious to where this story is going or is it reaching its end. I hope not! Loved the chapter with the red dress and A.'s fight with the past. So gripping. I am not a big fan of Khushi makeovers but wow Scotch!!!! You did it slowly and progressively and smoothly. It is brilliant!

Well done :)

Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for the PM