arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Went through a gamut of emotion in this chapter.

There was emotion when Arnav thought of the past.

Then comedy when Khushi pulled his hair in sleep.😆

And then the thrill when there is a chance that Anjali's baby might have been saved.

Arnav is indeed lucky to have found Khushi.

She is selfless in her love and care for him.

And she has brought the so needed touch of ordinary with her.

Fpdoing simple things like a ride in a bus, will do him good.

Waiting now for the next chapter.

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

awesome ...loved it and love khushi more

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: eishe10
Great update😊

thanks so much, eishe... glad the chapter read good.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Archu61
JUst read the latest part .what a web we weave in our lives and how we get entangled in the strings of our lives ,lot of introspection by ASR ,as he looks back on his past how he and his family were played especially his mom also khushie mom were pawns in a horrendous game and how he wants to protect khushie ,to survive this harsh world where innocence. And integrity are always stamped on ,how she leads him towards the light ,loved how when he asked her what she wanted as a last memory of her trip she wanted to go on a red bus ,with him how she makes do things he never done before she opens new venues to travel for him new vistas too ,

lovely what you say about the webs we weave and those that get woven for us, archu. although the story of asr and khsubi is at one level a simple love story which always goes unerringly toward happiness, yet i've always sensed complexity in the tales, the characters, the emotions. neither felt flat or simple, both had many sides, many hues and their lives had a lot of twists and turns... all of which shaped them too. if that feeling comes across, i am grateful.

she does lead him away from the darkness of his life and he brings the light of many new things and thoughts to her... they are, and i am a complete romantic here when i feel that, essential to each other, complementing and making whole each other...

thanks so much for your beautiful comment, i hope you continue to enjoy without you.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: hajr
Great update

thanks so much, hair... nice to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: avchowdhury
great update

thanks so much, avchowdhury, glad you enjoyed.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: archmink
a very very well written part
very emotional at places and inbtween you had put crazy khushi and her teakwonda moves on the bed ... it was very funny she dreaming about all that and grabbing him by hair.. gat me all excited tooo...

oh wow what a turn up at the end,,,,, Anjali's baby still alive ,,, yeh she had a miss carried it after her baby shower so it was toward the end of her pregnancy so there were chances that her baby could be alive,,,,

hi archmink,

thanks for that lovely first line, me thrilled.

so arnav with hair pulled by khushi, almost in tears, excites you... he he. i enjoyed writing that and really wondered how he would react... all he did was hold her hand gently and let her be... i

anjali's baby... she was i think at least eight months pregnant at the time of the miscarriage... i am wondering about this...

see you soon. we are on our way back to india.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: laksh65
very interesting update

hi laksh,

thank you and great to meet you, hope you are enjoying without you.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Anjali's daughter is alive?! I wonder how Anjali will react to this? She was just starting to move on...
On the other hand, I absolutely adore Arnav and Khushi's relationship! It's so so so indescribable...
Update soon please.

hi bloomnskyrules,

thanks so much... i have no idea if anjali's daughter is alive, but what is true is that hospitals have all sorts of things happening which are never known and nurses have been known to play all sorts of games with babies... this is a rumour, let's see where it goes.

thanks for liking the asr khsuhi thing... they are just plain mad bad utterly beautiful to me... indescribable is right.

okay, will try and update within ten day. try try try.