arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
fantastic update
i love these lines
you don't love someone because they are right or wrong, you just love them... sometimes so much, it hurts and still you can't help but keep on loving.
That is so true for arnav and khushi. Its a beautiful sum up of their unique love.
I feel a little sad for arnav and khushi. Both been to hell. both can't bear loosing each other. Khushi wants arnav to breath, she is stll not over from the trauma she went through when Arnav was comatose. That period was khushi's distressful moments on cliff, the pain and agony arnav went through when khushi refuse to respond to his love and his touch.
this was another beautiful update 👏

javeria,

you liked? i am thrilled. for me thsi story has been really about their unique love... it is truly that as every couple's love is i guess. i keep searching for the specific things in their relationship and coming together... what i find there just touches me. having said that, i don't want it to be some unreal indi's vision of love. always looking for asr and khushi... hopefully finding them and it all rings true. thanks so much for you lovely comment.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I loved it!!!

thank you, bloomnskyrules,
i am so glad.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
Again an awesome chapter.
finally we know the reason behind arnav's anger/uncalled behaviour. He still loves his father inspite of his father's faults and grave wrong actions. He is angry on himself for still loving his father and takes it out on khushi. He talked abt it khushi coz he doesn't want to hurt her again. He wants her happiness & his own anger destroyed it already so many times. He is angry on himself for hurting her again & again inturn hurting himself more.
His past and his burried emotions doesn't let him happy in his present. But he is ASR coz of his past.
His talking abt his burried emotions wid khushi helped him to gain a new perspective. Khushi helped him to understand his feelings for his father is genuine which can't be altered at one's whims.
Loved how arnav seeked khushi to talk abt his feelings & fears just like a child seeks his mother to soothe him, console him.
hope arnav will not hurt again khushi in future.

hi arhi_crazy,

lovely comment, so glad you enjoyed.

i don't think asr ever wants to hurt khushi, not any more, now that he completely accepts his feelings for her... kitni koshi ki thi once to not love her. he couldn't succeed, his heart wouldn't listen. now all he wants to do is love her, yet... he does hurt her without meaning to. when you grow up in the kind of environment he did and then tragedy occurs, i think a lot of feelings get buried, it is a complex matrix of emotions within... not easy to decipher and manage. but he tries his best and stands strong... yet there are things inside to be resolved... that evening of khushi looking beautiful but in an unfamiliar way and being appreciated by another man triggers something in him.

but now that he feels stronger after loving and being loved, i think he is slowly able to face certain things... and yes, this thing that he finally faces, that he loves his father... troubles him.

he turns to his life mate she helps him ease into this problem. clears his confusion with her simple honest straight from the heart words.

this connection, this care, i guess is what makes their love beautiful.

thanks so much.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: RajiSobtian
Loved the upadate
Superb...very well written

thanks so much, rajisobtian...

so glad it was a good read.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: ranogill
it seem that khushi is the sun ...and arnav revolve around her without her he is nothing and i am happy that he realised that sooner then later..awesome story

hi ranogill,

yes, she is his sun... and he perhaps her universe. a visceral complete love that reaches out and challenges our deepest darkest selves and brings life and light there, that liberates and frees and never stops growing... uff two young actors have made the whole thing of love so unbearably beautiful. i do hope i tell the story of asr and khushi with meaning and romance. thanks so much for reading. and your lovely comments

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laksh65

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

narration of arnav and khushi thoughts were brilliant.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

^^^

thank you so much, laksh,

i am so happy you liked that.

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256748

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Wow awesome they both understand each other feelings.

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rati123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

You are an amazing writer and I keep waiting for your updates.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: hajr
Wow awesome they both understand each other feelings.

hi hajr,

all relationships are i guess a journey... khushi and asr clash yet have an understanding deep inside... i find it rather lovely. so glad you enjoyed.